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10-04-13 02:40 PM
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Hello! This is chapter five of my story. I hope you like it! Remember that this whole story is completely made up. If you didn't get to read chapter 4, you can read it here. Where will this story go? I don't even now!

CHAPTER 5

There is no way my family was dead. I had just seen them a few hours ago! Against goodboy's advice, I raced home. He told me it would be dangerous, but I ignored him. It took me awhile, but I made it back. What I saw nearly scared me to death. My parents were dead, laying on the floor. I knelt down next to them and cried. "Silly boy." A voice said. Startled, I responded "Who-Who's there?" Out from the shadow walked a woman. She was tall and had an evil grin on her face. Her body and clothes were a prime example of something that looked evil. "I am your worst nightmare." she said. "I am the leader of the Things. I am Singelli." "Wh-What do you want from me?" I asked. "Don't be stupid." She said. "I know that you are helping them." How could she possibly know that I am helping the escaped things? "I don't know what you are talking about." I lied. "Foolish boy, you are an awful liar." she said. "Now, tell me where they are hiding, or you will meet the same fate as your parents."

Just then, Eniitan appeared out of thin air. "Not on my watch!" she said. How long had she been invisible? All of a sudden Eirinn crashed through the ceiling. The two of them faced Singelli. "You are outnumbered. Leave now or you will pay." said Eirinn. Singelli obeyed. She disappered. 'That was strange." said Eirinn. "She never backs down from a fight." "How did she just disappear?" I asked. "Is she gone or is she just invisible?" "She can teleport." explained Eniitan. "That is her power." I then asked the question that has been lingering in my head. "How did she know that I am a part of you guys's group or whatever?" "We call ourselves the Revolutioners. And I have no idea how she knew. Maybe PixelBrick can figure it out."

Eniitan and I rode on Eirinn's back as he flew us back to Base. We went downstairs to call a meeting with all of the other Revolutioners an ask PixelBrick if he could figure out how she knew that I was a Revolutioner. "Well, the way I see it, one of two things could have happened. Either she saw you and goodboy hanging out, or there is a spy among us." None of us said a word. Everyone nervously looked at the people around them, knowing that they could very well be a spy.

And that is it for chapter 5. Thanks for reading!

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You guys are all mentioned in this chapter.
Hello! This is chapter five of my story. I hope you like it! Remember that this whole story is completely made up. If you didn't get to read chapter 4, you can read it here. Where will this story go? I don't even now!

CHAPTER 5

There is no way my family was dead. I had just seen them a few hours ago! Against goodboy's advice, I raced home. He told me it would be dangerous, but I ignored him. It took me awhile, but I made it back. What I saw nearly scared me to death. My parents were dead, laying on the floor. I knelt down next to them and cried. "Silly boy." A voice said. Startled, I responded "Who-Who's there?" Out from the shadow walked a woman. She was tall and had an evil grin on her face. Her body and clothes were a prime example of something that looked evil. "I am your worst nightmare." she said. "I am the leader of the Things. I am Singelli." "Wh-What do you want from me?" I asked. "Don't be stupid." She said. "I know that you are helping them." How could she possibly know that I am helping the escaped things? "I don't know what you are talking about." I lied. "Foolish boy, you are an awful liar." she said. "Now, tell me where they are hiding, or you will meet the same fate as your parents."

Just then, Eniitan appeared out of thin air. "Not on my watch!" she said. How long had she been invisible? All of a sudden Eirinn crashed through the ceiling. The two of them faced Singelli. "You are outnumbered. Leave now or you will pay." said Eirinn. Singelli obeyed. She disappered. 'That was strange." said Eirinn. "She never backs down from a fight." "How did she just disappear?" I asked. "Is she gone or is she just invisible?" "She can teleport." explained Eniitan. "That is her power." I then asked the question that has been lingering in my head. "How did she know that I am a part of you guys's group or whatever?" "We call ourselves the Revolutioners. And I have no idea how she knew. Maybe PixelBrick can figure it out."

Eniitan and I rode on Eirinn's back as he flew us back to Base. We went downstairs to call a meeting with all of the other Revolutioners an ask PixelBrick if he could figure out how she knew that I was a Revolutioner. "Well, the way I see it, one of two things could have happened. Either she saw you and goodboy hanging out, or there is a spy among us." None of us said a word. Everyone nervously looked at the people around them, knowing that they could very well be a spy.

And that is it for chapter 5. Thanks for reading!

goodboy :
Singelli :
Eniitan :
Eirinn :
PixelBrick :

You guys are all mentioned in this chapter.
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Hmm...But if there is a spy, why did the spy just not give up the location?  I'm interested in how you'll resolve this question.  If there is a spy, perhaps he/she has a hidden agenda?
Hmm...But if there is a spy, why did the spy just not give up the location?  I'm interested in how you'll resolve this question.  If there is a spy, perhaps he/she has a hidden agenda?
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supernerd117 : You will see. Everything will (probably) make sense at some point.
supernerd117 : You will see. Everything will (probably) make sense at some point.
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Ohmygoshiloveit

I love how this is turning out. Sort of wishing I had cool powers like the others, but super strength suffices well (so don't change it! )!

I want more. Don't end it anytime soon. Go till 50 chapters or more, plox.
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I love how this is turning out. Sort of wishing I had cool powers like the others, but super strength suffices well (so don't change it! )!

I want more. Don't end it anytime soon. Go till 50 chapters or more, plox.
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I'm awesome!!! xD Flying is totally the super power that I would have chosen. I laughed so hard at this. xD

Singelli : Not sure if I should apologize or gloat that I talked to you that way and won. lol

Eniitan : You owe me 50 cents for the flight back.
I'm awesome!!! xD Flying is totally the super power that I would have chosen. I laughed so hard at this. xD

Singelli : Not sure if I should apologize or gloat that I talked to you that way and won. lol

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Eirinn : Haha thanks! I felt like you were the user that I could imagine flying more than the others.
Eirinn : Haha thanks! I felt like you were the user that I could imagine flying more than the others.
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tgaga123- Didn't want to double summon you here.
Thanks!...I think. xD
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Epic is the only way to describe the story right now! I want more ( not to rush you or anything like that), anyway good job tgags!
Epic is the only way to describe the story right now! I want more ( not to rush you or anything like that), anyway good job tgags!
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Very nice chapter here. I thought singelli was nice, you really reversed some stuff, huh? Very nice chapter, keep it up. 
Very nice chapter here. I thought singelli was nice, you really reversed some stuff, huh? Very nice chapter, keep it up. 
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This one actually kinda started making me sad. XD XD XD  I laughed at the idea of me being a bad guy, but seeing myself in action was just TOO hard!  I'm so mean and so rude! YEESH!



Such an evil side I try to keep back....
This one actually kinda started making me sad. XD XD XD  I laughed at the idea of me being a bad guy, but seeing myself in action was just TOO hard!  I'm so mean and so rude! YEESH!



Such an evil side I try to keep back....
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Thats a great story you made......to me it was kinda of confusing..but overall great.
Thats a great story you made......to me it was kinda of confusing..but overall great.
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tgags123 : These are pretty nice looking stories so far right now. I was pretty much wondering where you're getting all of those words for the Yellow jersey XD. Anyways, it is pretty nice reading some of these, really nice, got a lot of nice, clean, crisp words in all the chapters you're doing and you're at Chapter 5 right now and I know you got a lot more chapters in your mind as of right now and I can surly say that I'm looking forward on some more chapters you have in mind to post in the near future c:
Better yet, make it a never-ending book XD
tgags123 : These are pretty nice looking stories so far right now. I was pretty much wondering where you're getting all of those words for the Yellow jersey XD. Anyways, it is pretty nice reading some of these, really nice, got a lot of nice, clean, crisp words in all the chapters you're doing and you're at Chapter 5 right now and I know you got a lot more chapters in your mind as of right now and I can surly say that I'm looking forward on some more chapters you have in mind to post in the near future c:
Better yet, make it a never-ending book XD
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