See? You are gradually improving. But I wonder why you separated story from storyline, I think they would've gone great together. Since the story description describes your thoughts about the story and the storyline describes the actual story, why not put them together? Other than that, I believe you are improving. I suppose it depends on the game you review, eh?

A nice review indeed. I enjoyed reading it. It is more thought out and fun to read than your previous ones. A good job with great details to support each topic. Nice job.

Mistress : Thanks for that, yes, It does depend on what I review, if it is a good game with lots of goodies in it, I have a lot to say.

Well done ditto it seems you were down in the dumps but you picked yourself up and to do this again. ^^

Nice job. Not only did you reach 700 words, you reached 1000 words, something that I haven't even done yet. Great job. You are really improving. I can tell that you took your time with this one. You didn't rush through. Great review.

tgags123 : It took me literally 10 minutes to do this thing, when I know what I am going to say, I can type it very fast, like 70 wpm. But it said I wenyt offline, but I was there, and we had to go some places while I was writing, so it took me about an hour (curse you, Walmart)

Not bad, but it could still use some work. When I read reviews on Vizzed, I always first look at the scores a person gave the game, before delving into the actual review. I noticed the overall rating was a little buffed, compared to the individual scores you gave the game. The game receives an overall score of a whopping 9.8 while the sound, the addictiveness and the depth didn't even score higher than a 7? At first I thought that the ratings could've used some work.

Then I read the review. I gotta say, kudos for passing the 1000 words. It's a difficult thing to accomplish. I did notice though, that some of the the scores you gave aspects of the game didn't match the scores at the top of your review. Example, in your review, you said Sound should get a 9.3, while at the top of the page, it said that you gave it a 6, instead. It's a little confusing. But now that 9.8 gets more credible, because in your review you give every aspect at least a 9. But yeah, try to keep the ratings you gave each aspect of the game in mind, they should match with the ones in your reviews.

Keep on writing!

You told me your views were a lot better. You were right, It may need a bit of tweaking but seems fine for now. It was fun to read really.

The review was good, I also am a little unsure of what the difference between the story and storyline is / why they were rated differently. Having said that, I agree that this game rocks! I didn't give it a chance till recently thinking I don't want pikachu as my starter I love the originals! When I finally gave the game a chance I was way stoked to find out that the other starters were accessible. I missed out waiting so long to play it.

EVERYONE THAT SAID MY SCORES WERE DIFFERENT: Refer to what I said on OrdannonX's profile

DittoDude44 : hmm. very good! i like it. keep it up! good review!

Before this thread goes dead, I am going to go ahead and say that my next review for pokemon red is going to be around 850 words long and 6500 characters.


Just an announcement.

Nice job on this review man, I don't understand why you said 700 words when it shows the post exp as over 1100 but nevertheless, this is a nice, good, solid review you have here, well done. You have nice good detail, good organization and spacing throughout all categories of your review and I can never stress enough how important neatness is in a good review, so good job for doing that.

Overall, I think you are drastically improving as a reviewer, this is pretty good stuff man, I think you really have a lot of potential. I think some of your points could use a little further development and elaboration here and there, but nevertheless, this is still a good review man, well done.

Keep up the awesome work and keep writing more great reviews, I always look forward to reading them. Keep up the awesome work!