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A Poem About Mr Miner

 

07-21-13 12:41 PM
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A Poem About Mr Miner





Miner is indeed a good friend to people

Hes my new best friend and so peaceful



I'm happy to talk with him when I can


Knew him on mystery dungeon long ago that’s, when it

began






 He sometimes gets mad very easily


I try and calm him down when I can, gleefully



If that doesn’t work I’ll leave him to it



But there are times when I do worry for a bit








 I really enjoy hanging around with him

I try my best to make sure hes, not so dim

Miner is always happy with his friends

Ready to fight for them and defends







Miner doesn’t like to see his friends unhappy

He will do his best to make then happy again laughingly

Miner I hope you like this poem I wrote for you

I'm so happy to have you as my new best friend too







  miner hope you come back soon my friend ^-^










A Poem About Mr Miner





Miner is indeed a good friend to people

Hes my new best friend and so peaceful



I'm happy to talk with him when I can


Knew him on mystery dungeon long ago that’s, when it

began






 He sometimes gets mad very easily


I try and calm him down when I can, gleefully



If that doesn’t work I’ll leave him to it



But there are times when I do worry for a bit








 I really enjoy hanging around with him

I try my best to make sure hes, not so dim

Miner is always happy with his friends

Ready to fight for them and defends







Miner doesn’t like to see his friends unhappy

He will do his best to make then happy again laughingly

Miner I hope you like this poem I wrote for you

I'm so happy to have you as my new best friend too







  miner hope you come back soon my friend ^-^



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(edited by Eniitan on 07-22-13 02:47 AM)    

07-21-13 12:44 PM
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Not Eniitan not as long or in depth or descriptive as your other poems or short stories but this one was still enjoyable and one could appreciate its short, basic to the point as aspect of the writing.
Not Eniitan not as long or in depth or descriptive as your other poems or short stories but this one was still enjoyable and one could appreciate its short, basic to the point as aspect of the writing.

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07-21-13 01:00 PM
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This is a great poem eniitan, I think you are really good at writing them, this has all of the great poetic elements and I am glad you dedicate your poems to each one of your friends and that is what makes them so special. Keep up the awesome work and keep writing! You are really good with writing poems and stories! Nice job!
This is a great poem eniitan, I think you are really good at writing them, this has all of the great poetic elements and I am glad you dedicate your poems to each one of your friends and that is what makes them so special. Keep up the awesome work and keep writing! You are really good with writing poems and stories! Nice job!

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07-21-13 01:19 PM
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This is the second poem I have noticed you have put on here. I enjoy reading them and I know you don't know me but could you take a request and do one?
This is the second poem I have noticed you have put on here. I enjoy reading them and I know you don't know me but could you take a request and do one?

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07-21-13 01:50 PM
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Very nice poem, Eniitan! sort of short, but what the heck? It is amazing! 



Mr_Miner_092 : Here you go.
Very nice poem, Eniitan! sort of short, but what the heck? It is amazing! 



Mr_Miner_092 : Here you go.

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07-26-13 03:09 PM
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Nice poem! It's shorter than your other poems that I've read, but this is equally awesome! I like it! It's a good and nice poem. I hope Mr. Miner sees it! He should see your effort.

Nice poem! It's shorter than your other poems that I've read, but this is equally awesome! I like it! It's a good and nice poem. I hope Mr. Miner sees it! He should see your effort.

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07-30-13 11:32 AM
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I enjoyed this very much eniitan I was wondering if your up for it could you possibly do one about me? I would love to read it. And if you do one for me I'll do one for you deal?


Thank you very much and have a blessed day
I enjoyed this very much eniitan I was wondering if your up for it could you possibly do one about me? I would love to read it. And if you do one for me I'll do one for you deal?


Thank you very much and have a blessed day



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