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Vizzed + Pokémon Story Part 3, Tornado catches a Pokémon! Link to Part 1: https://www.vizzed.com/boards/thread.php?id=62446 Link to Part 2: https://www.vizzed.com/boards/thread.php?id=62503 TornadoMudkip ~ We are again in Newbie Town! SadSecrets ~ ''We''? TornadoMudkip ~ Oh sorry, you was never here before right? SadSecrets ~ And.. That's true, anyway let's go to VizRoute 1. In VizRoute 1 they see Miner, who is training hard. Miner talks to himself. Mr_Miner_092 ~ Why!? Why, do I have to lose against a girl! What I need is some more training for Torchic. Next time we'll beat that Eniitan! TornadoMudkip ~ I see, you want to beat Eniitan... TornadoMudkip ~ WAIT WHAT?! You lost against Enii? Mr_Miner_092 ~ Yes, when she became Angry or Fired Up, she became really strong.. SadSecrets ~ That Friend of yours Mudkip seems to be really strong! TornadoMudkip ~ DON'T CALL ME MUDKIP! I'M TORNADO! Anyway, I can beat her easy! SadSecrets ~ I don't think that you come far with only your Mudkip.. I think you should catch some more Pokémon. TornadoMudkip ~ You can say the same to yourself, you also have only one Pokémon.. ' Mr_Miner_092 ~ Can I.. Can I travel with you girls? TornadoMudkip ~ Sure you can, I'm glad that finally a boy joins our team! SadSecrets ~ WE AREN'T A TEAM, We only travel with each other. TornadoMudkip ~ Lets catch a Pokémon! Mr_Miner_092 and SadSecrets ~ YEAH! They are now in GroundGame City. Tornado runs away from the others, she wants to meet Enii.. TornadoMudkip ~ Enii.. Enii.. Where are you? Later, it seems that Tornado can't find her.. ??? ~ Are you searching for something? TornadoMudkip ~ ARGH! Woah... You scared me! ??? ~ Oh sorry, Anyway I'm an Agent who's trying to stop Team RockViz. The name is Black Bot, just call me Black. Miner and Secrets came to Tornado and Black. SadSecrets ~ There you are! Finally, we found you! Black Bot ~ Okay, these are your Friends, they seems to keep this secret. Black Bot ~ Going to explain something about Team RockViz, they are an evil Team in this Region. One of there Members talked with a girl with a Bulbasaur in this city and asked to join their Team, it seems that the girl joined their Team.. I hope we can beat them soon! TornadoMudkip ~ Nooo! That can't be true, Eniitan joined the bad ones! Mr_Miner_092 ~ Tornado... TornadoMudkip ~ ... I need to stop her, that's my goal from now on! SadSecrets ~ Tornado! You can do it! Mr_Miner_092 ~ So, if we want to keep up with them, we should go to VizRoute 2 now. TornadoMudkip ~ That sounds good, the Gym is closed now so we need to go back later. Black Bot ~ Could I join you, you seem to be strong so if we find the evil ones, we can battle with them and beat them forever! TornadoMudkip ~ Sure you can, Glad that you would join us. In VizRoute 2, they see a Pokémon. Miner decided to catch that Pokémon. A Taillow appears! Mr_Miner_092 ~ That one is mine! Go Torchic and use Ember! Taillow is angry and uses Peck. Aww that hurts! Torchic fainted.. Mr_Miner_092 ~ Come on! Simple I use now a Poké Ball. What happened? He caught the Pokémon! Mr_Miner_092 ~ Yeah, I did it, I caught my first Pokémon! They came now in Retro Woods and they see a Caterpie. TornadoMudkip ~ That one is mine! GO! Poké Ball! TornadoMudkip ~ That was easy! I have a Caterpie! SadSecrets ~ Congrats but the next time you need to do it like Miner did. TornadoMudkip ~ I don't want that Mudkip faints! They are walking in the Forest until they see a trainer who likes to battle with Tornado.. Trainer ~ Hey, lets battle, I'm Youngster Joey. TornadoMudkip ~ Sure, I love to... Wait.. Not you from TV the annoying Trainer with a Rattata. Joey ~ I'M NOT ANNOYING, just lets battle now! TornadoMudkip ~ Fine but I don't want your phone number.. Go Caterpie! Joey ~ Go Rattata and use Tackle the whole time! TornadoMudkip ~ Does that Rattata knows more moves? Joey ~ No and I don't care, Tackle is the strongest move in the whole world. TornadoMudkip ~ I don't believe that, but still.. Caterpie use String Shot! Joey ~ No! My Rattata! Use Tackle. But that doesn't work so Caterpie can use Tackle to beat Rattata, so the Pokémon does. Rattata fainted, Caterpie wins + evolves. Black Bot ~ Your Pokémon evolves.. into.. Metapod and learns Harden! TornadoMudkip ~ That's amazing! Metapod you're the hero of this day! Joey ~ Crap I lost again, need to train! Do you want my phone number? Everyone (Joey not) ~ NO! And Joey runs away for some training for his Rattata. SadSecrets ~ I could beat him easy too, he is annoying, glad you won Tornado. Mr_Miner_092 ~ Actually we need to go to RockGame City, so it's handy to walk now. Black Bot ~ Sure, we need also to keep up with Team RockViz and Tornado can beat in RockGame a new Gym for a Badge. Mr_Miner_092 ~ I want to collect Badges too! Look there, we are at the end of this Forest! But then... ??? and ??? ~ STOP NOW! Black Bot ~ That are 2 Members of Team RockViz.. The boy is called supercool22 they call him Discord, the girl is called.... TornadoMudkip ~ ENIITAN! WHAT ARE YOU DOING WITH TEAM ROCKVIZ!? Eniitan ~ I don't care, lets do a Double Battle, lets see who's the strongest here, my goal is becoming an Admin of Team RockViz + the Pokémon Champion in the world, I need to be the strongest here. TornadoMudkip ~ Eniitan... supercool22 ~ You don't have a choice, you need to Battle, if you don't we steal your Pokémon. SadSecrets ~ Who of us should Battle with them? I think Tornado needs a rest with her Battle against that annoying kid. TornadoMudkip ~ I must Battle with Enii... so Black, lets fight against them together! Black Bot ~ Okay! Lets do this! Mr_Miner_092 ~ But I also want to fight with Enii... TornadoMudkip ~ You can Battle the next time! Supercool22 ~ Go Zubat! Eniitan ~ Go Ralts! Mr_Miner_092 ~ It seems that they both have some new Pokémon. SadSecrets ~ Yeah, I hope that Tornado and Black win.. TornadoMudkip ~ Don't worry, we'll win! Go Metapod! Black Bot ~ This is the first time that I use this Pokémon! Go Machop! Someone is looking at them. ??? ~ Do your best, win against that evil people... To be continued... Part 4 is coming soon, I hope that you enjoyed this Story. Also this part hasn't new Vizzed users in it, but don't worry, more will appear later! Link to Part 1: https://www.vizzed.com/boards/thread.php?id=62446 Link to Part 2: https://www.vizzed.com/boards/thread.php?id=62503 TornadoMudkip ~ We are again in Newbie Town! SadSecrets ~ ''We''? TornadoMudkip ~ Oh sorry, you was never here before right? SadSecrets ~ And.. That's true, anyway let's go to VizRoute 1. In VizRoute 1 they see Miner, who is training hard. Miner talks to himself. Mr_Miner_092 ~ Why!? Why, do I have to lose against a girl! What I need is some more training for Torchic. Next time we'll beat that Eniitan! TornadoMudkip ~ I see, you want to beat Eniitan... TornadoMudkip ~ WAIT WHAT?! You lost against Enii? Mr_Miner_092 ~ Yes, when she became Angry or Fired Up, she became really strong.. SadSecrets ~ That Friend of yours Mudkip seems to be really strong! TornadoMudkip ~ DON'T CALL ME MUDKIP! I'M TORNADO! Anyway, I can beat her easy! SadSecrets ~ I don't think that you come far with only your Mudkip.. I think you should catch some more Pokémon. TornadoMudkip ~ You can say the same to yourself, you also have only one Pokémon.. ' Mr_Miner_092 ~ Can I.. Can I travel with you girls? TornadoMudkip ~ Sure you can, I'm glad that finally a boy joins our team! SadSecrets ~ WE AREN'T A TEAM, We only travel with each other. TornadoMudkip ~ Lets catch a Pokémon! Mr_Miner_092 and SadSecrets ~ YEAH! They are now in GroundGame City. Tornado runs away from the others, she wants to meet Enii.. TornadoMudkip ~ Enii.. Enii.. Where are you? Later, it seems that Tornado can't find her.. ??? ~ Are you searching for something? TornadoMudkip ~ ARGH! Woah... You scared me! ??? ~ Oh sorry, Anyway I'm an Agent who's trying to stop Team RockViz. The name is Black Bot, just call me Black. Miner and Secrets came to Tornado and Black. SadSecrets ~ There you are! Finally, we found you! Black Bot ~ Okay, these are your Friends, they seems to keep this secret. Black Bot ~ Going to explain something about Team RockViz, they are an evil Team in this Region. One of there Members talked with a girl with a Bulbasaur in this city and asked to join their Team, it seems that the girl joined their Team.. I hope we can beat them soon! TornadoMudkip ~ Nooo! That can't be true, Eniitan joined the bad ones! Mr_Miner_092 ~ Tornado... TornadoMudkip ~ ... I need to stop her, that's my goal from now on! SadSecrets ~ Tornado! You can do it! Mr_Miner_092 ~ So, if we want to keep up with them, we should go to VizRoute 2 now. TornadoMudkip ~ That sounds good, the Gym is closed now so we need to go back later. Black Bot ~ Could I join you, you seem to be strong so if we find the evil ones, we can battle with them and beat them forever! TornadoMudkip ~ Sure you can, Glad that you would join us. In VizRoute 2, they see a Pokémon. Miner decided to catch that Pokémon. A Taillow appears! Mr_Miner_092 ~ That one is mine! Go Torchic and use Ember! Taillow is angry and uses Peck. Aww that hurts! Torchic fainted.. Mr_Miner_092 ~ Come on! Simple I use now a Poké Ball. What happened? He caught the Pokémon! Mr_Miner_092 ~ Yeah, I did it, I caught my first Pokémon! They came now in Retro Woods and they see a Caterpie. TornadoMudkip ~ That one is mine! GO! Poké Ball! TornadoMudkip ~ That was easy! I have a Caterpie! SadSecrets ~ Congrats but the next time you need to do it like Miner did. TornadoMudkip ~ I don't want that Mudkip faints! They are walking in the Forest until they see a trainer who likes to battle with Tornado.. Trainer ~ Hey, lets battle, I'm Youngster Joey. TornadoMudkip ~ Sure, I love to... Wait.. Not you from TV the annoying Trainer with a Rattata. Joey ~ I'M NOT ANNOYING, just lets battle now! TornadoMudkip ~ Fine but I don't want your phone number.. Go Caterpie! Joey ~ Go Rattata and use Tackle the whole time! TornadoMudkip ~ Does that Rattata knows more moves? Joey ~ No and I don't care, Tackle is the strongest move in the whole world. TornadoMudkip ~ I don't believe that, but still.. Caterpie use String Shot! Joey ~ No! My Rattata! Use Tackle. But that doesn't work so Caterpie can use Tackle to beat Rattata, so the Pokémon does. Rattata fainted, Caterpie wins + evolves. Black Bot ~ Your Pokémon evolves.. into.. Metapod and learns Harden! TornadoMudkip ~ That's amazing! Metapod you're the hero of this day! Joey ~ Crap I lost again, need to train! Do you want my phone number? Everyone (Joey not) ~ NO! And Joey runs away for some training for his Rattata. SadSecrets ~ I could beat him easy too, he is annoying, glad you won Tornado. Mr_Miner_092 ~ Actually we need to go to RockGame City, so it's handy to walk now. Black Bot ~ Sure, we need also to keep up with Team RockViz and Tornado can beat in RockGame a new Gym for a Badge. Mr_Miner_092 ~ I want to collect Badges too! Look there, we are at the end of this Forest! But then... ??? and ??? ~ STOP NOW! Black Bot ~ That are 2 Members of Team RockViz.. The boy is called supercool22 they call him Discord, the girl is called.... TornadoMudkip ~ ENIITAN! WHAT ARE YOU DOING WITH TEAM ROCKVIZ!? Eniitan ~ I don't care, lets do a Double Battle, lets see who's the strongest here, my goal is becoming an Admin of Team RockViz + the Pokémon Champion in the world, I need to be the strongest here. TornadoMudkip ~ Eniitan... supercool22 ~ You don't have a choice, you need to Battle, if you don't we steal your Pokémon. SadSecrets ~ Who of us should Battle with them? I think Tornado needs a rest with her Battle against that annoying kid. TornadoMudkip ~ I must Battle with Enii... so Black, lets fight against them together! Black Bot ~ Okay! Lets do this! Mr_Miner_092 ~ But I also want to fight with Enii... TornadoMudkip ~ You can Battle the next time! Supercool22 ~ Go Zubat! Eniitan ~ Go Ralts! Mr_Miner_092 ~ It seems that they both have some new Pokémon. SadSecrets ~ Yeah, I hope that Tornado and Black win.. TornadoMudkip ~ Don't worry, we'll win! Go Metapod! Black Bot ~ This is the first time that I use this Pokémon! Go Machop! Someone is looking at them. ??? ~ Do your best, win against that evil people... To be continued... Part 4 is coming soon, I hope that you enjoyed this Story. Also this part hasn't new Vizzed users in it, but don't worry, more will appear later! |
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I think that you are doing a great job with these Pokémon stories, they are getting really good and you have all of the story elements put into this, including a good plot and setting. I enjoy reading these and I think that you are doing a great job with writing them. I cannot wait for part 4 and I know that it is going to be great. Keep up the awesome work and keep writing more of these awesome stories! You are really good at it! |
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Not bad I'll be waiting for part sometime soon! I also have to say is that this was a pretty good idea combining vizzed and Pokemon, so really this isn't bad actually. |
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