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Vizzed + Pokémon Story Part 3

 

07-21-13 09:58 AM
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Vizzed + Pokémon Story Part 3, Tornado catches a Pokémon!

Link to Part 1: https://www.vizzed.com/boards/thread.php?id=62446
Link to Part 2: https://www.vizzed.com/boards/thread.php?id=62503

TornadoMudkip ~ We are again in Newbie Town!
SadSecrets ~ ''We''?
TornadoMudkip ~ Oh sorry, you was never here before right?
SadSecrets ~ And.. That's true, anyway let's go to VizRoute 1.

In VizRoute 1 they see Miner, who is training hard.
Miner talks to himself.
Mr_Miner_092 ~ Why!? Why, do I have to lose against a girl! What I need is some more training for Torchic. Next time we'll beat that Eniitan!
TornadoMudkip ~ I see, you want to beat Eniitan...
TornadoMudkip ~ WAIT WHAT?! You lost against Enii?
Mr_Miner_092 ~ Yes, when she became Angry or Fired Up, she became really strong..
SadSecrets ~ That Friend of yours Mudkip seems to be really strong!
TornadoMudkip ~ DON'T CALL ME MUDKIP! I'M TORNADO! Anyway, I can beat her easy!
SadSecrets ~ I don't think that you come far with only your Mudkip.. I think you should catch some  more Pokémon.
TornadoMudkip ~ You can say the same to yourself, you also have only one Pokémon.. '
Mr_Miner_092 ~ Can I.. Can I travel with you girls?
TornadoMudkip ~ Sure you can, I'm glad that finally a boy joins our team!
SadSecrets ~ WE AREN'T A TEAM, We only travel with each other.
TornadoMudkip ~ Lets catch a Pokémon!
Mr_Miner_092 and SadSecrets ~ YEAH!

They are now in GroundGame City.
Tornado runs away from the others, she wants to meet Enii..
TornadoMudkip ~ Enii.. Enii.. Where are you?
Later, it seems that Tornado can't find her..
??? ~ Are you searching for something?
TornadoMudkip ~ ARGH! Woah... You scared me!
??? ~ Oh sorry, Anyway I'm an Agent who's trying to stop Team RockViz. The name is Black Bot, just call me Black.
Miner and Secrets came to Tornado and Black.
SadSecrets ~ There you are! Finally, we found you!
Black Bot ~ Okay, these are your Friends, they seems to keep this secret.
Black Bot ~ Going to explain something about Team RockViz, they are an evil Team in this Region.
One of there Members talked with a girl with a Bulbasaur in this city and asked to join their Team, it seems that the girl joined their Team.. I hope we can beat them soon!
TornadoMudkip ~ Nooo! That can't be true, Eniitan joined the bad ones!
Mr_Miner_092 ~ Tornado...
TornadoMudkip ~ ... I need to stop her, that's my goal from now on!
SadSecrets ~ Tornado! You can do it!
Mr_Miner_092 ~ So, if we want to keep up with them, we should go to VizRoute 2 now.
TornadoMudkip ~ That sounds good, the Gym is closed now so we need to go back later.
Black Bot ~  Could I join you, you seem to be strong so if we find the evil ones, we can battle with them and beat them forever!
TornadoMudkip ~ Sure you can, Glad that you would join us.

In VizRoute 2, they see a Pokémon. Miner decided to catch that Pokémon.
A Taillow appears! Mr_Miner_092 ~ That one is mine! Go Torchic and use Ember!
Taillow is angry and uses Peck. Aww that hurts! Torchic fainted..
Mr_Miner_092 ~ Come on! Simple I use now a Poké Ball.
What happened? He caught the Pokémon!
Mr_Miner_092 ~ Yeah, I did it, I caught my first Pokémon!

They came now in Retro Woods and they see a Caterpie.
TornadoMudkip ~ That one is mine! GO! Poké Ball!
TornadoMudkip ~ That was easy! I have a Caterpie!
SadSecrets ~ Congrats but the next time you need to do it like Miner did.
TornadoMudkip ~ I don't want that Mudkip faints!

They are walking in the Forest until they see a trainer who likes to battle with Tornado..
Trainer ~ Hey, lets battle, I'm Youngster Joey.
TornadoMudkip ~ Sure, I love to... Wait.. Not you from TV the annoying Trainer with a Rattata.
Joey ~ I'M NOT ANNOYING, just lets battle now!
TornadoMudkip ~ Fine but I don't want your phone number.. Go Caterpie!
Joey ~ Go Rattata and use Tackle the whole time!
TornadoMudkip ~ Does that Rattata knows more moves?
Joey ~ No and I don't care, Tackle is the strongest move in the whole world.
TornadoMudkip ~ I don't believe that, but still.. Caterpie use String Shot!
Joey ~ No! My Rattata! Use Tackle.
But that doesn't work so Caterpie can use Tackle to beat Rattata, so the Pokémon does.
Rattata fainted, Caterpie wins + evolves.
Black Bot ~ Your Pokémon evolves.. into.. Metapod and learns Harden!
TornadoMudkip ~ That's amazing! Metapod you're the hero of this day!
Joey ~ Crap I lost again, need to train! Do you want my phone number?
Everyone (Joey not) ~ NO!
And Joey runs away for some training for his Rattata.
SadSecrets ~ I could beat him easy too, he is annoying, glad you won Tornado.
Mr_Miner_092 ~ Actually we need to go to RockGame City, so it's handy to walk now.
Black Bot ~ Sure, we need also to keep up with Team RockViz and Tornado can beat in RockGame a new Gym for a Badge.
Mr_Miner_092 ~  I want to collect Badges too! Look there, we are at the end of this Forest!

But then...

??? and ??? ~ STOP NOW!
Black Bot ~ That are 2 Members of Team RockViz.. The boy is called supercool22 they call him Discord, the girl is called....
TornadoMudkip ~ ENIITAN! WHAT ARE YOU DOING WITH TEAM ROCKVIZ!?
Eniitan ~ I don't care, lets do a Double Battle, lets see who's the strongest here, my goal is becoming an Admin of Team RockViz + the Pokémon Champion in the world, I need to be the strongest here.
TornadoMudkip ~ Eniitan...
supercool22 ~ You don't have a choice, you need to Battle, if you don't we steal your Pokémon.
SadSecrets ~ Who of us should Battle with them? I think Tornado needs a rest with her Battle against that annoying kid.
TornadoMudkip ~ I must Battle with Enii... so Black, lets fight against them together!
Black Bot ~ Okay! Lets do this!
Mr_Miner_092 ~ But I also want to fight with Enii...
TornadoMudkip ~ You can Battle the next time!
Supercool22 ~ Go Zubat!
Eniitan ~ Go Ralts!
Mr_Miner_092 ~ It seems that they both have some new Pokémon.
SadSecrets ~ Yeah, I hope that Tornado and Black win..
TornadoMudkip ~ Don't worry, we'll win! Go Metapod!
Black Bot ~ This is the first time that I use this Pokémon! Go Machop!

Someone is looking at them.
??? ~ Do your best, win against that evil people...

To be continued...

Part 4 is coming soon, I hope that you enjoyed this Story.
Also this part hasn't new Vizzed users in it, but don't worry, more will appear later!
Vizzed + Pokémon Story Part 3, Tornado catches a Pokémon!

Link to Part 1: https://www.vizzed.com/boards/thread.php?id=62446
Link to Part 2: https://www.vizzed.com/boards/thread.php?id=62503

TornadoMudkip ~ We are again in Newbie Town!
SadSecrets ~ ''We''?
TornadoMudkip ~ Oh sorry, you was never here before right?
SadSecrets ~ And.. That's true, anyway let's go to VizRoute 1.

In VizRoute 1 they see Miner, who is training hard.
Miner talks to himself.
Mr_Miner_092 ~ Why!? Why, do I have to lose against a girl! What I need is some more training for Torchic. Next time we'll beat that Eniitan!
TornadoMudkip ~ I see, you want to beat Eniitan...
TornadoMudkip ~ WAIT WHAT?! You lost against Enii?
Mr_Miner_092 ~ Yes, when she became Angry or Fired Up, she became really strong..
SadSecrets ~ That Friend of yours Mudkip seems to be really strong!
TornadoMudkip ~ DON'T CALL ME MUDKIP! I'M TORNADO! Anyway, I can beat her easy!
SadSecrets ~ I don't think that you come far with only your Mudkip.. I think you should catch some  more Pokémon.
TornadoMudkip ~ You can say the same to yourself, you also have only one Pokémon.. '
Mr_Miner_092 ~ Can I.. Can I travel with you girls?
TornadoMudkip ~ Sure you can, I'm glad that finally a boy joins our team!
SadSecrets ~ WE AREN'T A TEAM, We only travel with each other.
TornadoMudkip ~ Lets catch a Pokémon!
Mr_Miner_092 and SadSecrets ~ YEAH!

They are now in GroundGame City.
Tornado runs away from the others, she wants to meet Enii..
TornadoMudkip ~ Enii.. Enii.. Where are you?
Later, it seems that Tornado can't find her..
??? ~ Are you searching for something?
TornadoMudkip ~ ARGH! Woah... You scared me!
??? ~ Oh sorry, Anyway I'm an Agent who's trying to stop Team RockViz. The name is Black Bot, just call me Black.
Miner and Secrets came to Tornado and Black.
SadSecrets ~ There you are! Finally, we found you!
Black Bot ~ Okay, these are your Friends, they seems to keep this secret.
Black Bot ~ Going to explain something about Team RockViz, they are an evil Team in this Region.
One of there Members talked with a girl with a Bulbasaur in this city and asked to join their Team, it seems that the girl joined their Team.. I hope we can beat them soon!
TornadoMudkip ~ Nooo! That can't be true, Eniitan joined the bad ones!
Mr_Miner_092 ~ Tornado...
TornadoMudkip ~ ... I need to stop her, that's my goal from now on!
SadSecrets ~ Tornado! You can do it!
Mr_Miner_092 ~ So, if we want to keep up with them, we should go to VizRoute 2 now.
TornadoMudkip ~ That sounds good, the Gym is closed now so we need to go back later.
Black Bot ~  Could I join you, you seem to be strong so if we find the evil ones, we can battle with them and beat them forever!
TornadoMudkip ~ Sure you can, Glad that you would join us.

In VizRoute 2, they see a Pokémon. Miner decided to catch that Pokémon.
A Taillow appears! Mr_Miner_092 ~ That one is mine! Go Torchic and use Ember!
Taillow is angry and uses Peck. Aww that hurts! Torchic fainted..
Mr_Miner_092 ~ Come on! Simple I use now a Poké Ball.
What happened? He caught the Pokémon!
Mr_Miner_092 ~ Yeah, I did it, I caught my first Pokémon!

They came now in Retro Woods and they see a Caterpie.
TornadoMudkip ~ That one is mine! GO! Poké Ball!
TornadoMudkip ~ That was easy! I have a Caterpie!
SadSecrets ~ Congrats but the next time you need to do it like Miner did.
TornadoMudkip ~ I don't want that Mudkip faints!

They are walking in the Forest until they see a trainer who likes to battle with Tornado..
Trainer ~ Hey, lets battle, I'm Youngster Joey.
TornadoMudkip ~ Sure, I love to... Wait.. Not you from TV the annoying Trainer with a Rattata.
Joey ~ I'M NOT ANNOYING, just lets battle now!
TornadoMudkip ~ Fine but I don't want your phone number.. Go Caterpie!
Joey ~ Go Rattata and use Tackle the whole time!
TornadoMudkip ~ Does that Rattata knows more moves?
Joey ~ No and I don't care, Tackle is the strongest move in the whole world.
TornadoMudkip ~ I don't believe that, but still.. Caterpie use String Shot!
Joey ~ No! My Rattata! Use Tackle.
But that doesn't work so Caterpie can use Tackle to beat Rattata, so the Pokémon does.
Rattata fainted, Caterpie wins + evolves.
Black Bot ~ Your Pokémon evolves.. into.. Metapod and learns Harden!
TornadoMudkip ~ That's amazing! Metapod you're the hero of this day!
Joey ~ Crap I lost again, need to train! Do you want my phone number?
Everyone (Joey not) ~ NO!
And Joey runs away for some training for his Rattata.
SadSecrets ~ I could beat him easy too, he is annoying, glad you won Tornado.
Mr_Miner_092 ~ Actually we need to go to RockGame City, so it's handy to walk now.
Black Bot ~ Sure, we need also to keep up with Team RockViz and Tornado can beat in RockGame a new Gym for a Badge.
Mr_Miner_092 ~  I want to collect Badges too! Look there, we are at the end of this Forest!

But then...

??? and ??? ~ STOP NOW!
Black Bot ~ That are 2 Members of Team RockViz.. The boy is called supercool22 they call him Discord, the girl is called....
TornadoMudkip ~ ENIITAN! WHAT ARE YOU DOING WITH TEAM ROCKVIZ!?
Eniitan ~ I don't care, lets do a Double Battle, lets see who's the strongest here, my goal is becoming an Admin of Team RockViz + the Pokémon Champion in the world, I need to be the strongest here.
TornadoMudkip ~ Eniitan...
supercool22 ~ You don't have a choice, you need to Battle, if you don't we steal your Pokémon.
SadSecrets ~ Who of us should Battle with them? I think Tornado needs a rest with her Battle against that annoying kid.
TornadoMudkip ~ I must Battle with Enii... so Black, lets fight against them together!
Black Bot ~ Okay! Lets do this!
Mr_Miner_092 ~ But I also want to fight with Enii...
TornadoMudkip ~ You can Battle the next time!
Supercool22 ~ Go Zubat!
Eniitan ~ Go Ralts!
Mr_Miner_092 ~ It seems that they both have some new Pokémon.
SadSecrets ~ Yeah, I hope that Tornado and Black win..
TornadoMudkip ~ Don't worry, we'll win! Go Metapod!
Black Bot ~ This is the first time that I use this Pokémon! Go Machop!

Someone is looking at them.
??? ~ Do your best, win against that evil people...

To be continued...

Part 4 is coming soon, I hope that you enjoyed this Story.
Also this part hasn't new Vizzed users in it, but don't worry, more will appear later!
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07-21-13 12:24 PM
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LVL EXP: 43799696
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VIZ: 985840

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I think that you are doing a great job with these Pokémon stories, they are getting really good and you have all of the story elements put into this, including a good plot and setting. I enjoy reading these and I think that you are doing a great job with writing them. I cannot wait for part 4 and I know that it is going to be great. Keep up the awesome work and keep writing more of these awesome stories! You are really good at it!
I think that you are doing a great job with these Pokémon stories, they are getting really good and you have all of the story elements put into this, including a good plot and setting. I enjoy reading these and I think that you are doing a great job with writing them. I cannot wait for part 4 and I know that it is going to be great. Keep up the awesome work and keep writing more of these awesome stories! You are really good at it!
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07-29-13 10:05 PM
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Not bad I'll be waiting for part sometime soon! I also have to say is that this was a pretty good idea combining vizzed and Pokemon, so really this isn't bad actually. 
Not bad I'll be waiting for part sometime soon! I also have to say is that this was a pretty good idea combining vizzed and Pokemon, so really this isn't bad actually. 
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