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People Who Were Turned To Monsters Part 3

 

07-03-13 06:25 AM
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hello everyone this is the last part of the story lets see what happens now shall we? Hope you enjoy reading this

Wendy: so what are we going to do?
(everyone came out of their houses and they were all turned into monsters as well. But Jan was with them she was not a monster)
Monster: if you don't come with us you will never see your friend again!
Jan: please guys help me!
James: what have you done with our parents?!
Monster 2: we are your parents but we are monsters controlling their brains. We even have the voice watch this!
Mrs lavender: hello Kat and Wendy how are you doing?
Kat : mum? No! Its a trick I will not listen to you! Somehow someway we will get our real parents back!
Wendy: mum is that you?
Kat : no Wendy its a trick! Don't listen to her shes not our parent!
Wendy: sorry Kat! Your right leave us alone!
Monster: fine if that's how your going to play. Its too late to save your friend now! Bite her!
James: no! Jan quickly run!
(Jan ran just in time before she got bitten)
Kat : lets get out of here!
Wendy: get into my mums car quickly!
Jan: why?
Wendy: because I'm going to drive!
James: you don't know how to drive
Wendy: oh yes I do!
(Wendy drove them out of danger the monsters followed them)
Monster: get back here!
Kat : no way hoes ay!
(the monster jumped on the car James, Kat, Wendy and Jan started to scream they got bitten by the monsters and that's when Kat woke up)
Kat : what a dream! I swear I will never watched people who were turned into monsters again! I have to tell the others. it will might happen in real life! And I surely don't want to die
(So Kat told the others and they agreed with her and they never watched it again)

THE END
hello everyone this is the last part of the story lets see what happens now shall we? Hope you enjoy reading this

Wendy: so what are we going to do?
(everyone came out of their houses and they were all turned into monsters as well. But Jan was with them she was not a monster)
Monster: if you don't come with us you will never see your friend again!
Jan: please guys help me!
James: what have you done with our parents?!
Monster 2: we are your parents but we are monsters controlling their brains. We even have the voice watch this!
Mrs lavender: hello Kat and Wendy how are you doing?
Kat : mum? No! Its a trick I will not listen to you! Somehow someway we will get our real parents back!
Wendy: mum is that you?
Kat : no Wendy its a trick! Don't listen to her shes not our parent!
Wendy: sorry Kat! Your right leave us alone!
Monster: fine if that's how your going to play. Its too late to save your friend now! Bite her!
James: no! Jan quickly run!
(Jan ran just in time before she got bitten)
Kat : lets get out of here!
Wendy: get into my mums car quickly!
Jan: why?
Wendy: because I'm going to drive!
James: you don't know how to drive
Wendy: oh yes I do!
(Wendy drove them out of danger the monsters followed them)
Monster: get back here!
Kat : no way hoes ay!
(the monster jumped on the car James, Kat, Wendy and Jan started to scream they got bitten by the monsters and that's when Kat woke up)
Kat : what a dream! I swear I will never watched people who were turned into monsters again! I have to tell the others. it will might happen in real life! And I surely don't want to die
(So Kat told the others and they agreed with her and they never watched it again)

THE END
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07-03-13 01:40 PM
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This is a really good, interesting and unique story and I like the way you presented it. I liked all 3 parts of your story and I think you did a fantastic job on this story. I think this is very good work, you are really good with writing them and I hope to see more writing done by you, because this is awesome. Keep up the great work and keep writing! This was a great read by the way!
This is a really good, interesting and unique story and I like the way you presented it. I liked all 3 parts of your story and I think you did a fantastic job on this story. I think this is very good work, you are really good with writing them and I hope to see more writing done by you, because this is awesome. Keep up the great work and keep writing! This was a great read by the way!
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Turning people into Monsters is so cliché. You should kill them, and turn them into zombies. XD

Good story though. And congrats on the summons. XD
Turning people into Monsters is so cliché. You should kill them, and turn them into zombies. XD

Good story though. And congrats on the summons. XD
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Hahah!
Nice!
But I do not really like "it was just a dream" endings.
I just don't like them.
But great story overall!
Make more stories!
I am planning on to make some.
I also enjoyed reading it.
Hahah!
Nice!
But I do not really like "it was just a dream" endings.
I just don't like them.
But great story overall!
Make more stories!
I am planning on to make some.
I also enjoyed reading it.
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well nice story eni. i liked Part 2 better though. But i like this one. keep up the greta stories and have a nice day.
well nice story eni. i liked Part 2 better though. But i like this one. keep up the greta stories and have a nice day.
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