Hello Everyone, here again a Review from TornadoMudkip.
This is my 9th Review, please enjoy! This time about Pokémon Burning Ruby!

Start: Pokémon Burning Ruby is a hack of Pokémon Ruby.

First the Graphics: The biggest change of this Game.
The Graphics in this Game are the Graphics of Pokémon Heart Gold and Pokémon Soul Silver.
The games looks good, the Houses, Trainers, Gyms, Locations like a Tower of Forest and much more!
Pokémon Sprites are good Designed and not to Big or Small, only some! I like them, most of the Pokémon are looking cool and cute. 
Only some sprites are Small, like that one from Mudkip. 
The Colours of the Pokémon's are better then from the previous Pokémon Games. (Like Red and Blue, and even from the Original Ruby!)
All of the Characters have a cool Design!
The Main Male Character looks like Brendan and the Main Female Character is look like May from the Anime.
Through the Cheerful Colours in the Game everywhere, the Graphics are good for me, I'll give a 9.

Second the Sound: The Sound is the same as Pokémon Ruby and Sapphire, but some Locations have a different Sound like Mauville City.
The sound quality good for me.
I really love this Sound. If I'd listen to the Sound, I feel calm through that... The Sound makes me Calm.
The Sound is Nice to hear! Why? The Tunes are a good because it's new Sound to hear! < Only for this Game and the Original Sapphire/Ruby/Emerald. > What I try to say is this Sound is unique. I like that kind of Sound.
Each Location that you traveled gave a little Tune for you to enjoy!
The Pokémon Cry's are Nice to hear to! Why? The Sounds aren't to high! (I like especially the Mudkip one! )
I'll give a 9 for the good Sound.

Third the Addictiveness: This Game is really fun to play!
If you Lose a Battle you can try it again. If you beat the Elite Four + Champion, you can try it again.
You can always try to Catch all of the Pokémon. You can do a lot and automatic you play this Game again and again! You can really enjoy this Game! Because all of the reasons what I write here above!
Sad thing is this Game isn't very long, if you've beaten the Elite Four + Champion then you can only catch all the Pokémon... (You need to Trade to have all the Pokémon and that isn't possible at Vizzed.)
Good new thing is that some Gen 4 Pokémon are in this Game like Froslass and Gallade. Also Lucky you don't need to Trade to get them! Amazing!
I'll give a 9 for this part.

Fourth the Story: The Story is good and is still the same a Pokémon Ruby, 
Pokémon Burning Ruby is Game with the Region Hoenn, Hoenn is based on the island of Kyushu in Japan.
In Hoenn, they kept to the model of Grass, Water, and Fire for the starter Pokémon, Treecko, Mudkip, and Torchic. 
One of these Pokémon is received from Professor Birch after saving him from a wild Poochyena at the start of the Game.
They are good Pokémon if you are a new to Pokémon because all of them learn good Moves and can Level up easy! (Treecko hardly learns good Moves in its Basic form but Treecko is handy against the first Gym. Also Mudkip is handy for the first Gym and if you evolve Torchic then is Torchic also good, what I want try to say is that every Starter is a good choice.)
The Legendary Continent Pokémon, Groudon, expanding the land (Volcano) is the Main Legendary from this Game (You can see that on the Box)
And like always, you can get a Free Potion at the Begin!
This game contains the basic that a Pokémon game has, like catch all of the Pokémon and complete the Pokédex, which is 386 Pokémon in total in this Game + becoming the new Champion.
In Pokémon Burning Ruby you follow the original story of training yourself  to become the very best Trainer in the Region/World!
You can be if you defeat the Elite Four + Champion and Catching all of the Pokémon is your quest.
You can challenge your Rival as you go on your Adventure, which is Brendan if you're May or May if you're Brendan. (Rival is not very Strong but like always your Rival chooses the Pokémon where you are weak against: If you choose Treecko then your Rival chooses Torchic etc.)
In this Game you can defeat 8 Gyms and you can earn Badges! + you can beat Team Magma in this Game.
Team Magma want the Legendary Pokémon called Groudon... How will this end? If you want to know play this Game.
In this Game you can also catch a lot of Legendary Pokémon, 7 in total (In this Game), it's up to you to find them all. < Legendary's are not easy to catch!
That's good, you can do for sure a lot in this Game! + The Story that you follow is good.
I'll give a 9.

Fifth the Depth: The Depth in this Game is the same as the Original Ruby.
This Game is not to long and not to small! It fits good for length, I like that kind of Games.
Like what I said before in the Story: You can defeat 8 Gyms and Elite Four + Champion and more! < Like in a Original Pokémon Game.
The Game offers are good, until you've beaten the Elite Four + Champion, then you can only catch all of the Pokémon and find every Item. (Which is looking impossible for me, well you can always try it!)
I'll give a 8.

Sixth Difficulty: All of the Trainers are using the same Pokémon that they are using in Pokémon Ruby.
This Game isn't hard to beat! Why? Because the most Trainers aren't strong.
If you're a Starter to Pokémon, this Game suits perfectly for you! Because you can learn things in this Game like how do you catch a Pokémon.
Even if you're someone who loves/known to Pokémon! This Game is fun, because this Game has more news like Double Battles. < Also into the Orginal Game.
Everyone loses sometimes a Battle! That's okay because if you don't give up you can win this Game! 
I'll give a 6 for this.

Overall: This Game is really good and fun to play.
I like the Graphics of HG/SS. It's pretty fun to see that the Graphics are into a GBA Game.
If I was you, I should play this Game! It's worth playing!
All the things what I said above is the thing what I think of this Game! That's all what I have to say!
I'll give a 9,1! It deserve it!

So this was my 9th Review, if something is wrong please say it to me.
I hope you liked my Review! ^^

tornado this is a good review! Well done!

TornadoMudkip : Great Review, but that's just to be expected of you!

Dean2k13 : Edited that part, I hope it's good now! ^^

Thanks both for reading and enjoying my Review.

TornadoMudkip : Tornado this is a well written review, and I knew that it was going to be from the start when I was reading it. All of your reviews are awesome, and I could learn a few things from them. It had great depth, big detail, and proper grammar on it. I wouldn't say everything was proper though. Anyways great review, and I really enjoyed reading it. I hope you make more soon see you later.

TornadoMudkip : I know you are trying, and this is your original work, but over half of this review is exactly the same as your sixth one. I also noticed that a small bit of the information included was still taken from the Pokémon Wiki, so you need to include a link to that site as a reference. I understand that you don't speak English very well, but the grammar isn't well structured, and you keep using the wrong word forms, such as 'to' and 'too'.
English can be confusing, because often times a single letter difference can mean an entire change in definition, like with 'desert' and 'dessert'. The first is a hot, sandy environment, and the second is a treat you eat after a meal; you have to be careful about grammar, because the spell-checker doesn't point out the differences in word meanings, but only that they are spelled correctly.

You still need to be more opinionated, also. When talking about characters and buildings in the game, instead of describing what they look like, tell us how you feel about them. Telling us exactly what happens during the game or what to expect can spoil the experience, so you have to be careful about how much factual detail you include.

I'm not trying to discourage you, but I'm being hard on you so that you continue to improve. You have potential to be a good writer, but you still have a long way to go if you want to achieve that goal. Since all of this is your original work, I won't revoke rewards on it; however, you still copied a large portion from your sixth review, so I have to ignore the word count. I hope that you continue to write and improve, but I also hope that you would rather me be honest with you, instead of just being nice to save from hurting your feelings. At least you will know when you finally write a review of outstanding quality, that if I tell you it is good, I really mean it.

My offer is still open, if you find that you could use some help. There is nothing wrong with asking someone for help; that is how we learn and grow as adults. I may be an exceptional writer, but I couldn't solve an algebraic problem to save my life. We all have strengths and weaknesses, but it is important that we always strive to do better on both. Keep trying, my friend.

I think in follow up of GuardianZack's comment. I think the issue lies in the topic that you are reviewing. All the reviews that you have done are pokemon games, which is fine, but it does affect your variety in your writing when you write about similar games that close from each other. Even if you try not to write something similar, you will find yourself doing that because of how similar the games are. With that, your writing can start to look old because people will expect what you are writing about as well as being a similar topic. My suggestion is to try review games that are not pokemon. That can give you more insight on your writing and we can see something new. Try out new waters.

GuardianZack : Well yeah, like what you said, my English is not very good.
And it's also true that I copied some things from the Pokémon Wikia but I changed some things, to make it my own Version.
Well if you want helping me... Well I like to have some help, I want to learn more!

play4fun : Well yeah, I think my next Review will be another Game then Pokémon.

TornadoMudkip : Looking forward to it. Have fun!

TornadoMudkip : Just make sure to site your sources if you pull small snippets of info from another website, although I would limit even doing that.

Also, similar to what others have said, the point of a review is to give your OPINION about a game. Facts are great in any review, but you need to back them up with your opinion on them. If you tell me the gress is green, tell me why that's important to the gameplay/experience/etc. Ya know? Otherwise telling me the grass is green or the buildings are tall doesn't really interest me that much.

Try to step out of your comfort zone with regards to your reviews. Do a game that isn't pokemon and I'm sure you will learn a lot about your writing style!

Keep trying and don't give up!

TornadoMudkip : Alright, the next time you write a review, send it to me before you publish it. I'll look it over, and help you to format it properly.
Also, keep this thread in mind when writing, so you can refer back to it for tips.

Hey! Awesome Review, again! You've actually made so much quality reviews!

I read it again;D it's really good! Just work on these things as I have said above -

I would just work on your grammar and spelling, it's been a problem in the past. I know you don't speak/write good English, as you have said. However, it's necessary to use appropriate grammar when writing reviews, it improves the quality of your writing.

Also, as you have stated in my reviews, what I actually told you, an introduction isn't needed. We don't need to know it's your 9th review etc. That's what the description is for. 

Great Review though!

pokemon burning ruby is cool but... i wish it had dirt cheap master balls and legendaries you could find in the grass so it would make the game even better