ah, this one i remember, i play it on the gamecube and now here on vizzed!
ok, so your casual story is that zelda is kidnapped by ganon you to save her blah blah but this is so hard to find out so if you have hyrule historia like me you sould know so anyways on with it
so im gessing it takes place before the 1st one so yea, on with it so the story is that story 6
link is now living in the kokori forest and the deku tree takes care of link and all the kokori and then links grows up to be 7 and now "lives" there and then your adventure begins! graphics are good better if playing on the 3ds! this game is really adictive so expect you playing this alot, ok ok the depth is big so its nine so its pretty hard so its 6 the sound 6 is amazing so i give this game a: COMPLETE IT so its 10 in over all p.s sorry about last time vizzed T_T plus you hurt my feelings...... DIE!!!! but not you errin!

You have only gone into any depth about the story, and even then explained very little. You have absolutely no punctuation, using a line break instead of full stops. Ocarina of Time's story is not hard to find out - all you need to do is actually play through it. Depth and difficulty are two different things.

Two things that don't affect it much: The game was not on the GameCube. (as far as I know)
Also, I find it odd (but awesome) that you gave the game a 10/COMPLETE IT.

tailsliker345 : ok review. but it needs work. there is some flaws I need to point out. 1st off random spacing you have some random spacing parts in your review. 2 Random caps there was a few parts of random caps Like THIS IS SO HARD TO FIND OUT that was a random place to use caps. 3rd misspelling some words gessing would be an example because its guessing using the simple spell check on your post bar should help correcting that . 4 very little detail and information about the categories that goes for your description of graphics sound addictiveness depth they all have very little detail and information they should all have a long description that is very well detailed and full of explanations. 5 random use of exclamation marks 3ds! It doesn't really need an exclamation mark. 6 use some periods punctuation marks and grammar in your review proof read them and make sure to always spell check to correct your mistakes. so my rating will for this review will be a 1 or a 2

A review is a full analysis on the game. You didn't put in a lot of effort in explaining how good this game is. It actually sounded like you don't know this game that well with what is written here. Try to edit it and put more detail in your review.

Tails the Fox :
SuperCrash64 :
play4fun :
Whoa hold on. lol Guys, let's remember he's nine and this is his first review. What has been said is all true, but a bit more harsh than it had to be, considering everything. No disrespect here, just saying that it could be a little more considerate of the reviewer personally. We all had to learn what we know now, and hopefully are still learning.

tailsliker345 : There are some real issues here, but don't lose heart. Just try to take the instructions here, and apply them to the next review. To recap on it, add a breakdown of each category (graphics, sound, etc.) and tell us why you rated it what you did in each category, and proofread your review before submitting it. That will make a good start.

Eirinn : You are like... the nicest person on the planet or something. You can find the good in everything! I'm extremely envious of that...

tailsliker345 : Hey buddy. As some of the other people have said, there is work to be done with this. However, being 9, I'm glad that you got to play the game and experience it for the awesomeness that it is! I know a lot of kids now who complain about the graphics not looking like real life now, even if the game was made before they were born, so I'm happy you appreciate the game! You'll be much better off for it as you continue to play some of the older games, trust me!

Tails the Fox : There are two ports of this game for the Gamecube, one on a disc that included The Legend of Zelda, The Legend of Zelda II: Adventure of Link, and Majora's mask. The second was the Legend of Zelda: Ocarina of Time and Legend of Zelda: Ocarina of Time Master Quest edition of the game.

Tails the Fox : actuality i have the special editors edition gamecube version thats included with master quest

Tails the Fox : I would cut him some slack he is a beginner at reviews I guess. He does need work I agree be let's just keep him on the safe side at least it is 100 words or more long lol.

tailsliker345 : I agree that this game deserves a 10! It's one of the greatest video games of all time!