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This is how it's done (story by Galacta)

 

09-18-11 11:51 AM
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I've been asking myself the same question over and over and over. "What did I do to deserve this?"
You might be wondering now, "What is this?"

Let me start from the beginning.

I was walking home from school. I usually walk with friends, but I was alone this time. There was nothing unusual about today, except for the fact that my best friend suddenly became what he calls "a ladies man". He's always been a weird guy in so many ways. 

So like I was saying, I was walking home alone today. All the cars were driving at what seemed the speed of light, but that's just from a guy who's walking's perspective. 

So, as I was walking, I feel a sudden movement. I looked behind me, saw nothing. Looked at my sides, saw nothing. When I looked forward, the ground started shaking. It knocked me off my feet, making me unconscious.
When I woke up, I was in the same exact spot. I got up and saw a ginormous crack in the sidewalk.
 
I had no choice but to go and investigate.


When I found the cause of the huge crack, I was amazed. It was a rock half the size of the moon.
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That's all I have for now. Maybe I'll make more. Maybe I won't. All in due time.
I've been asking myself the same question over and over and over. "What did I do to deserve this?"
You might be wondering now, "What is this?"

Let me start from the beginning.

I was walking home from school. I usually walk with friends, but I was alone this time. There was nothing unusual about today, except for the fact that my best friend suddenly became what he calls "a ladies man". He's always been a weird guy in so many ways. 

So like I was saying, I was walking home alone today. All the cars were driving at what seemed the speed of light, but that's just from a guy who's walking's perspective. 

So, as I was walking, I feel a sudden movement. I looked behind me, saw nothing. Looked at my sides, saw nothing. When I looked forward, the ground started shaking. It knocked me off my feet, making me unconscious.
When I woke up, I was in the same exact spot. I got up and saw a ginormous crack in the sidewalk.
 
I had no choice but to go and investigate.


When I found the cause of the huge crack, I was amazed. It was a rock half the size of the moon.
_______________


That's all I have for now. Maybe I'll make more. Maybe I won't. All in due time.
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09-19-11 05:18 PM
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A rock half the size of the moon didn't instantly kill him? That's surprising to know...

An okay start. I can see what you're trying to create with an intro like this. If you don't mind, I could provide some constructive criticism to help improve it a bit.
A rock half the size of the moon didn't instantly kill him? That's surprising to know...

An okay start. I can see what you're trying to create with an intro like this. If you don't mind, I could provide some constructive criticism to help improve it a bit.
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09-19-11 05:35 PM
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Is this real?
Is this real?
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09-19-11 05:37 PM
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Someone70 : I'm most likely not going to continue this, but thank you for the offer

dsqwer : obviously not
Someone70 : I'm most likely not going to continue this, but thank you for the offer

dsqwer : obviously not
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