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07-16-11 04:16 PM
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I am here to tell you that I have started my book! This book the best way to put it is kind of like Forrest Gump but is definently a book all my own. I will be keeping you posted on when chapters are done and what not, and I might give you all a link to the book once it is finished! I will have to give it to my inner posse first. Sorry, have to let them do the editing. Hope I got you all excited!

Update 1: The intro to the book is done and I have to say that there is quite a lot of language in it. I am sorry that is just how I write.

Update 2: I have finished the 1st chapter and I am now moving to a mad editing session with both of the chapters. I will move onto chapter 2 this week.
I am here to tell you that I have started my book! This book the best way to put it is kind of like Forrest Gump but is definently a book all my own. I will be keeping you posted on when chapters are done and what not, and I might give you all a link to the book once it is finished! I will have to give it to my inner posse first. Sorry, have to let them do the editing. Hope I got you all excited!

Update 1: The intro to the book is done and I have to say that there is quite a lot of language in it. I am sorry that is just how I write.

Update 2: I have finished the 1st chapter and I am now moving to a mad editing session with both of the chapters. I will move onto chapter 2 this week.

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souns awesome the closest Ive been to writing a book is writing a full song for band class( by full I mean a part for everyone) so good luck
souns awesome the closest Ive been to writing a book is writing a full song for band class( by full I mean a part for everyone) so good luck

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hnnn : I should do fine as far as finishing it because normally I write all of the time, I hope that I can get it done sometime in this year or the next but I am really not sure. I love to write so this is no biggie.
hnnn : I should do fine as far as finishing it because normally I write all of the time, I hope that I can get it done sometime in this year or the next but I am really not sure. I love to write so this is no biggie.

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A book? That'll be interesting to see, coming from you...
A book? That'll be interesting to see, coming from you...

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Someone70 : Ha ha ha ha what is that supposed to mean? Are you saying that my book is going to be bad? Well I guess if that is your opinion you are entitled to it so just keep in mind it is WRONG. LOL all I have to say is it is coming along nicely.

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Someone70 : Ha ha ha ha what is that supposed to mean? Are you saying that my book is going to be bad? Well I guess if that is your opinion you are entitled to it so just keep in mind it is WRONG. LOL all I have to say is it is coming along nicely.

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billythekidmonster : Oh no, I didn't mean to say it was bad! I was just curious as to how it would go. I haven't seen Forest Gump anyways, so I don't know what you mean when you reference it. But good to know that you're getting through and I really can't wait until you finish it.
billythekidmonster : Oh no, I didn't mean to say it was bad! I was just curious as to how it would go. I haven't seen Forest Gump anyways, so I don't know what you mean when you reference it. But good to know that you're getting through and I really can't wait until you finish it.

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I'll probably put a link up to my stories sometime as well.


But I really want to spell check all the current chapters before that happens. Because I have so many typos on a lot of them it isn't even funny.
I'll probably put a link up to my stories sometime as well.


But I really want to spell check all the current chapters before that happens. Because I have so many typos on a lot of them it isn't even funny.

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Vincent Swiftstrike : If you put them up I will read them I love to read and write si I would love to read a fellow writers story's.

Someone70 : What I mean when I reference it is that it is a story about life really. The highs and the lows. Though I doubt my book will compare to Forrest Gump, just because that film is classic.

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Vincent Swiftstrike : If you put them up I will read them I love to read and write si I would love to read a fellow writers story's.

Someone70 : What I mean when I reference it is that it is a story about life really. The highs and the lows. Though I doubt my book will compare to Forrest Gump, just because that film is classic.

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billythekidmonster :

My story is already 25 or so chapters long.

Some of these chapters are rather short though. Instead of doing a lot of "He said" kind of thing, I do all the character's dialogue in a play script format. However, I put up character faces with various expressions so people can clearly see how they are describing their dialogue. It also makes dialogue a bit more humorous too.


My second story doesn't use this though. The faces are really long to make and are actually rather boring. So my second story uses "normal" format I guess.
billythekidmonster :

My story is already 25 or so chapters long.

Some of these chapters are rather short though. Instead of doing a lot of "He said" kind of thing, I do all the character's dialogue in a play script format. However, I put up character faces with various expressions so people can clearly see how they are describing their dialogue. It also makes dialogue a bit more humorous too.


My second story doesn't use this though. The faces are really long to make and are actually rather boring. So my second story uses "normal" format I guess.

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billythekidmonster : Hey that is really great, and as you said it's your own....
billythekidmonster : Hey that is really great, and as you said it's your own....

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seanne : Yep totally my own I am writing it all from scratch with out any help in the writing aspect. Though I may have some people help me with the editing aspect.

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seanne : Yep totally my own I am writing it all from scratch with out any help in the writing aspect. Though I may have some people help me with the editing aspect.

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billythekidmonster : Everyone needs help in the editing aspect. The way good critcism works is to see several different perspectives of different people. Helps to find all the ups and downs your writing has.


And typos and little errors like that are just typos and little errors.
billythekidmonster : Everyone needs help in the editing aspect. The way good critcism works is to see several different perspectives of different people. Helps to find all the ups and downs your writing has.


And typos and little errors like that are just typos and little errors.

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Vincent Swiftstrike : Yes, if you edit your own stuff then you tend to miss a lot of little things where if you have a lot of different people edit it then it can become a whole lot better. People will find the stuff you would miss.


Vincent Swiftstrike : Yes, if you edit your own stuff then you tend to miss a lot of little things where if you have a lot of different people edit it then it can become a whole lot better. People will find the stuff you would miss.

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