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12-31-15 09:29 AM
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This story... About Oscar... It wasn't complete! But i found the other part on my attic. So don't worry!

Chapter 3: Zoe

???: "Oscar!!"
Oscar: "No... It's... It's..."
Suddenly, a 14-year old girl was standing there. It was Tama10. She seemed to be relaxed, though the place isn't very inviting...
Tama: "Oscar... I've heard about you. Take your wife with you and come with me to escape!"
Oscar: "Who..."
Tama: "No time to explain. I've stolen a car, and we can escape with it. Hurry up!"
The three were running as hard as they could, with the suffering Zoe in Oscar's arms. Later on, they're finally upstairs in the building where they were: A hotel.
The car was parked there, at the other side of the road. Oscar and Zoe were sitting at the back, while Natalia was driving. Suddenly, Oscar heard some noises from behind.
Tama: "Oh, never mind that noise... It's a friend of mine who didn't want to come with me..."
Oscar: "Who are you?!"
Tama: "I'm Natalia. They call me Tama10. But that's not important. What important is, is that you are going with us to escape from your cruel world..."
Zoe: "Ow!... *sniff* ...Please, Tama... Bring me to... OWW!!! ...a hospital!"
Oscar: "Please... Natalia... Wait... Cruel world? Escaping?"
Tama: "Your planet Earth is going to contain glitches in every single videogame, and every device there will be destroyed after it hurted it's owner..."
Zoe: "WHAT!? OW!!"
Oscar: "Oh my god... Can't we just turn the whole process around?"
Tama: "I'm afraid not... But hold on: We're going to my home!"
Oscar: "Wha..."
Suddenly, a portal opened. They went through the portal.

Once they were there...

Oscar with his eyes closed: "Is... It over?"
Tama: "Yep. Welcome in 2026!"
Oscar: "You're from the future?!"
Tama: "Nah. I fled from 2016 too."
A young man walked up to our friends. His name was Lunar.
Lunar: "Wow. Tama10, you did it! Another two survivors!"
Tama: "Actually, LunarDarkness2, they were stuck in 1916. So i had to bring them and Eniitan here."
Lunar: "Wait... Eniitan's here too? Where is she?"

Suddenly, the trunk(?) opened itself and another female came out of it. Her name was Eniitan.

Eniitan: "Wow, i'm so sick of your driving techniques, Tama10... Ugh..."
Tama: "Sorry..."
Eniitan: "And i told you not to pick me up to go here! In... ugh... the land of Vizzed..."
Tama: "But, Eniitan... King Davideo7 wanted to see you."
Eniitan: "Alright, then..."
She walked towards the palace of Davideo7, the king of the land of Vizzed.
Lunar: "Ugh... As always: She's not happy that you didn't asked her to come with you, Tama10..."
Oscar: "Uhm... Guys?... Zoe here, my wife, is having a baby... I don't know if you heard her suffering, but it's a fact."
Lunar: "Alright... *sigh* Tama10, you take care of 'Zoe'."
Tama: "Okay."
Tama10 helped Zoe to go to a treehouse. And speaking of it: There were about 76 treehouses and 78 normal houses in the whole area. The sky was orange, as if the sun was going down. Or up.

Oscar, Lunar and Eniitan were going to the treehouse of Tama10.

Oscar: "So... This is a land? But... What country is it ACTUALLY?"
Lunar: "Only King Davideo7 knows. We are just his followers."
Eniitan: "I have to help him with gathering supplies from the other worlds..."
Lunar: "I gotta help him advertise stuff..."
???: "I got the best task though!"

There was a mysterious man in the treehouse of Tama10. It was no one other than mrfe, the mysterious worker in the land of Vizzed.

mrfe also had a nickname: Felix. (This nickname is only been used in this story.)
Felix: "I got the task to bring golden ducks to the palace."
Oscar: "Golden... ducks?"
Lunar: "Sure, Felix... You're trying to be the best in everything..."
Eniitan: "...and that's how you got a friend of the king..."
Felix: "I know, it's a bit too much... For you guys. For me, it's a pleasure to do it. I hope you guys will agree too."
Eniitan: "Ok..."
Lunar: "Alright... You're our boss, so..."
Felix: "Exactly.
He jumps away. Oscar, Lunar and Eniitan were going to the treehouse where Tama10 and Zoe were. They didn't know that Zoe and Tama10 were there, though.

15 minutes later...


Oscar was sitting there. On the trunk of a car. Waiting for his wife to give birth to their child.

Finally, Tama10 is going out of Tama's bedroom, where Zoe was.
Tama: "Oscar?"
Oscar: "Yeah?"
He looked up to Tama. She wasn't very happy.
Tama: "I don't think you wanna hear this..."
Oscar: "Wait... You don't say that..."
He stood up and ran inside the bedroom. Zoe was still crying of the pain, but became weaker. The baby is born, though. And he's healthy.
Oscar: "No... Z-zoe..."
Zoe: "Take... care... of... Max...... Honey..."
They were kissing each other, as she was starting to die.
She laid her head on a pillow and died.

3 weeks later, Oscar is stuck in the land of Vizzed. He got a nickname as well, but he gave it to another boy in there. That nickname is MrBeingcool1. He said he was writing stories that actually happened in the real life. Oscar's story is written by MrBeingcool1.


To be continued...

This story... About Oscar... It wasn't complete! But i found the other part on my attic. So don't worry!

Chapter 3: Zoe

???: "Oscar!!"
Oscar: "No... It's... It's..."
Suddenly, a 14-year old girl was standing there. It was Tama10. She seemed to be relaxed, though the place isn't very inviting...
Tama: "Oscar... I've heard about you. Take your wife with you and come with me to escape!"
Oscar: "Who..."
Tama: "No time to explain. I've stolen a car, and we can escape with it. Hurry up!"
The three were running as hard as they could, with the suffering Zoe in Oscar's arms. Later on, they're finally upstairs in the building where they were: A hotel.
The car was parked there, at the other side of the road. Oscar and Zoe were sitting at the back, while Natalia was driving. Suddenly, Oscar heard some noises from behind.
Tama: "Oh, never mind that noise... It's a friend of mine who didn't want to come with me..."
Oscar: "Who are you?!"
Tama: "I'm Natalia. They call me Tama10. But that's not important. What important is, is that you are going with us to escape from your cruel world..."
Zoe: "Ow!... *sniff* ...Please, Tama... Bring me to... OWW!!! ...a hospital!"
Oscar: "Please... Natalia... Wait... Cruel world? Escaping?"
Tama: "Your planet Earth is going to contain glitches in every single videogame, and every device there will be destroyed after it hurted it's owner..."
Zoe: "WHAT!? OW!!"
Oscar: "Oh my god... Can't we just turn the whole process around?"
Tama: "I'm afraid not... But hold on: We're going to my home!"
Oscar: "Wha..."
Suddenly, a portal opened. They went through the portal.

Once they were there...

Oscar with his eyes closed: "Is... It over?"
Tama: "Yep. Welcome in 2026!"
Oscar: "You're from the future?!"
Tama: "Nah. I fled from 2016 too."
A young man walked up to our friends. His name was Lunar.
Lunar: "Wow. Tama10, you did it! Another two survivors!"
Tama: "Actually, LunarDarkness2, they were stuck in 1916. So i had to bring them and Eniitan here."
Lunar: "Wait... Eniitan's here too? Where is she?"

Suddenly, the trunk(?) opened itself and another female came out of it. Her name was Eniitan.

Eniitan: "Wow, i'm so sick of your driving techniques, Tama10... Ugh..."
Tama: "Sorry..."
Eniitan: "And i told you not to pick me up to go here! In... ugh... the land of Vizzed..."
Tama: "But, Eniitan... King Davideo7 wanted to see you."
Eniitan: "Alright, then..."
She walked towards the palace of Davideo7, the king of the land of Vizzed.
Lunar: "Ugh... As always: She's not happy that you didn't asked her to come with you, Tama10..."
Oscar: "Uhm... Guys?... Zoe here, my wife, is having a baby... I don't know if you heard her suffering, but it's a fact."
Lunar: "Alright... *sigh* Tama10, you take care of 'Zoe'."
Tama: "Okay."
Tama10 helped Zoe to go to a treehouse. And speaking of it: There were about 76 treehouses and 78 normal houses in the whole area. The sky was orange, as if the sun was going down. Or up.

Oscar, Lunar and Eniitan were going to the treehouse of Tama10.

Oscar: "So... This is a land? But... What country is it ACTUALLY?"
Lunar: "Only King Davideo7 knows. We are just his followers."
Eniitan: "I have to help him with gathering supplies from the other worlds..."
Lunar: "I gotta help him advertise stuff..."
???: "I got the best task though!"

There was a mysterious man in the treehouse of Tama10. It was no one other than mrfe, the mysterious worker in the land of Vizzed.

mrfe also had a nickname: Felix. (This nickname is only been used in this story.)
Felix: "I got the task to bring golden ducks to the palace."
Oscar: "Golden... ducks?"
Lunar: "Sure, Felix... You're trying to be the best in everything..."
Eniitan: "...and that's how you got a friend of the king..."
Felix: "I know, it's a bit too much... For you guys. For me, it's a pleasure to do it. I hope you guys will agree too."
Eniitan: "Ok..."
Lunar: "Alright... You're our boss, so..."
Felix: "Exactly.
He jumps away. Oscar, Lunar and Eniitan were going to the treehouse where Tama10 and Zoe were. They didn't know that Zoe and Tama10 were there, though.

15 minutes later...


Oscar was sitting there. On the trunk of a car. Waiting for his wife to give birth to their child.

Finally, Tama10 is going out of Tama's bedroom, where Zoe was.
Tama: "Oscar?"
Oscar: "Yeah?"
He looked up to Tama. She wasn't very happy.
Tama: "I don't think you wanna hear this..."
Oscar: "Wait... You don't say that..."
He stood up and ran inside the bedroom. Zoe was still crying of the pain, but became weaker. The baby is born, though. And he's healthy.
Oscar: "No... Z-zoe..."
Zoe: "Take... care... of... Max...... Honey..."
They were kissing each other, as she was starting to die.
She laid her head on a pillow and died.

3 weeks later, Oscar is stuck in the land of Vizzed. He got a nickname as well, but he gave it to another boy in there. That nickname is MrBeingcool1. He said he was writing stories that actually happened in the real life. Oscar's story is written by MrBeingcool1.


To be continued...

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(edited by Eirinn on 01-02-16 03:06 AM)     Post Rating: 1   Liked By: Andvillon,

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Nice job again buddy.
Heh , 10/10 dude.
As I've said keep it up and I'm waitin' to read more chapters.
Nice job again buddy.
Heh , 10/10 dude.
As I've said keep it up and I'm waitin' to read more chapters.
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I edited this to remove the layout, but please remember to remove your layout in future stories. If you haven't already, please give the rules of the Stories/Simulation/Art forum a read. Also your highlighting makes the font extremely difficult to read (especially the green).

Otherwise you're good to go with this story. Love seeing new stories pop up like this. Keep writing!
I edited this to remove the layout, but please remember to remove your layout in future stories. If you haven't already, please give the rules of the Stories/Simulation/Art forum a read. Also your highlighting makes the font extremely difficult to read (especially the green).

Otherwise you're good to go with this story. Love seeing new stories pop up like this. Keep writing!
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Wonderful. This was a fun and funny chapter and me and tama are ion your story! I hope to see more from you. eirinn has already said what needed to be fixed so I don't need to say any of that.
Wonderful. This was a fun and funny chapter and me and tama are ion your story! I hope to see more from you. eirinn has already said what needed to be fixed so I don't need to say any of that.
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Where is number four? I'm still waiting!
Where is number four? I'm still waiting!
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CookieHeroes7 : I'm working on it, CookieHeroes. I just make more time for a new YouTube video, my school and you.
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