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12-29-15 07:12 AM
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It was on the first day in the 2nd year on my school in the Netherlands. I had loads of friends in the first year. Somehow, i almost got the whole school as a friend (this is a fact). One of them, Matt, came up to me and said:

Matt: "Hey, dude! How are you?"
Me: "Uh... Well..."
Matt: "It's okay, sometimes i'm having problems too... Hey, uh... You might wanna take a look at that house over there."
Me: "Uhm... Why? C'mon Matt, i got better things to do..."
Matt: "I'm sure you'll entertain yourself! That house is a haunted one! And it's occupant(?) is a zombie! Also, the only thing that is in there, is a washbasin without a tap!"
Me: "That doesn't sound like i can entertain myself..."
Meanwhile, a beautiful, 16-year old girl came up to me. Her name was Lucy, and lucky me: I was her boyfriend. She was kind, beautiful, had a nice voice to listen to... She had a cat in her arms.
Lucy: "Look! I found this cute cat!"
Matt: "Cats aren't allowed on this school, Lucy... ACHOO!! ...because of people who are allergic..."
Me: "What name is he gonna get?"
Lucy: "I think it's a she..."
Matt: "Why are you looking behind the cat? ACHOO!!"
Lucy: "To check if it's a boy or a girl. And it's a she. I give her the name Princess"
Matt: "Twizzles... ACHOO!! Sniff... My god."
Me: "Then i give her the name Pumpkin. That was also the name of my cat."
Lucy: "I like that name. Know what? She's our Pumpkin now!"
Me: "Agree, Matt?"
Matt: "ACHOO!!"
Me: "Okay, then. Pumpkin it is!"
Suddenly, a boy named Billy came up to us. She was older than Matt, who is as old as i am. For short, Billy was the oldest. She was kinda thinking he was the best in every. single. jelly-eating. thing.
Billy: "Hey, newbies! Didn't knew you were here too!"
Matt: "ACHOO!! Hi..."
Billy: "What's up with him? Is he... catching a cold?"
Lucy: "No... He's just allergic for Pumpkin."
Pumpkin: "Meow!"
Billy: "Okay... I don't like cats. They are too aggressive... I don't need that, as i just bought a new car."
Me: "Alright, guys. I'll be inside the school building! If you wanna be late for class, then stay there!"
Lucy: "Wow! Is it that time already?"

Later that day, 8 minutes before midnight...

Matt, Lucy, Pumpkin (She seemed to like Lucy) and i came back to school. Just to figure out what that house actually was. We were climbing over the gate, and were sneaking towards the 'haunted' house.

Me: "Matt! Is this the house you meant?"
Matt: "Y-y-yep... I don't know h-h-how we are g-going inside, t-though..."
Lucy: "You're scared, aren't you, Matt?"
Matt: "Scared? Me?! I was making a funny joke at the girls restroom just to blow every single soap bottle up earlier today!!"
Me: "So that was the explosion..."
Matt: "Young lady, i'm not scared at all! I'm going in there!"
Pumpkin: "Meow!"
Lucy: "Matt! No!"

Matt disappeared in the distance, while Lucy, Pumpkin and i were staring at the house.

Lucy: "Sigh... Now Matt is gone... Who knows what he'll see there?"
Matt: "AAAAARGH!! It's... It's......"
Me: "Oh no... He's be caught by the zombie..."
Matt: "It's the principal!"
Lucy: "What?"
Me: "Huh?"
Principal: "What are you three doing here?! And why is there a cat here!? Go away! Shoo!"
Matt, Lucy, Pumpkin and i were running away, through the gate and going home. The next day, the principal gave us punishment, due to visiting the school building at night, which was breaking in into the building according to the principal...

Now, i'm an user of Vizzed, after i broke up with Lucy. She cheated on me. She more liked Billy.

She's a jelly-eating weird woman... But anyway, enjoyed this small story? There are, as the description says, fake details. So, yeah.


It was on the first day in the 2nd year on my school in the Netherlands. I had loads of friends in the first year. Somehow, i almost got the whole school as a friend (this is a fact). One of them, Matt, came up to me and said:

Matt: "Hey, dude! How are you?"
Me: "Uh... Well..."
Matt: "It's okay, sometimes i'm having problems too... Hey, uh... You might wanna take a look at that house over there."
Me: "Uhm... Why? C'mon Matt, i got better things to do..."
Matt: "I'm sure you'll entertain yourself! That house is a haunted one! And it's occupant(?) is a zombie! Also, the only thing that is in there, is a washbasin without a tap!"
Me: "That doesn't sound like i can entertain myself..."
Meanwhile, a beautiful, 16-year old girl came up to me. Her name was Lucy, and lucky me: I was her boyfriend. She was kind, beautiful, had a nice voice to listen to... She had a cat in her arms.
Lucy: "Look! I found this cute cat!"
Matt: "Cats aren't allowed on this school, Lucy... ACHOO!! ...because of people who are allergic..."
Me: "What name is he gonna get?"
Lucy: "I think it's a she..."
Matt: "Why are you looking behind the cat? ACHOO!!"
Lucy: "To check if it's a boy or a girl. And it's a she. I give her the name Princess"
Matt: "Twizzles... ACHOO!! Sniff... My god."
Me: "Then i give her the name Pumpkin. That was also the name of my cat."
Lucy: "I like that name. Know what? She's our Pumpkin now!"
Me: "Agree, Matt?"
Matt: "ACHOO!!"
Me: "Okay, then. Pumpkin it is!"
Suddenly, a boy named Billy came up to us. She was older than Matt, who is as old as i am. For short, Billy was the oldest. She was kinda thinking he was the best in every. single. jelly-eating. thing.
Billy: "Hey, newbies! Didn't knew you were here too!"
Matt: "ACHOO!! Hi..."
Billy: "What's up with him? Is he... catching a cold?"
Lucy: "No... He's just allergic for Pumpkin."
Pumpkin: "Meow!"
Billy: "Okay... I don't like cats. They are too aggressive... I don't need that, as i just bought a new car."
Me: "Alright, guys. I'll be inside the school building! If you wanna be late for class, then stay there!"
Lucy: "Wow! Is it that time already?"

Later that day, 8 minutes before midnight...

Matt, Lucy, Pumpkin (She seemed to like Lucy) and i came back to school. Just to figure out what that house actually was. We were climbing over the gate, and were sneaking towards the 'haunted' house.

Me: "Matt! Is this the house you meant?"
Matt: "Y-y-yep... I don't know h-h-how we are g-going inside, t-though..."
Lucy: "You're scared, aren't you, Matt?"
Matt: "Scared? Me?! I was making a funny joke at the girls restroom just to blow every single soap bottle up earlier today!!"
Me: "So that was the explosion..."
Matt: "Young lady, i'm not scared at all! I'm going in there!"
Pumpkin: "Meow!"
Lucy: "Matt! No!"

Matt disappeared in the distance, while Lucy, Pumpkin and i were staring at the house.

Lucy: "Sigh... Now Matt is gone... Who knows what he'll see there?"
Matt: "AAAAARGH!! It's... It's......"
Me: "Oh no... He's be caught by the zombie..."
Matt: "It's the principal!"
Lucy: "What?"
Me: "Huh?"
Principal: "What are you three doing here?! And why is there a cat here!? Go away! Shoo!"
Matt, Lucy, Pumpkin and i were running away, through the gate and going home. The next day, the principal gave us punishment, due to visiting the school building at night, which was breaking in into the building according to the principal...

Now, i'm an user of Vizzed, after i broke up with Lucy. She cheated on me. She more liked Billy.

She's a jelly-eating weird woman... But anyway, enjoyed this small story? There are, as the description says, fake details. So, yeah.


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This is a very nice story that you have here. It's very funny and vibrant to read I look forward to reading more chapter from you.
This is a very nice story that you have here. It's very funny and vibrant to read I look forward to reading more chapter from you.
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Eniitan : Thanks, Eniitan!
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I made another story now. I'm thinking making six more.
I made another story now. I'm thinking making six more.
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I liked that part when you asked your friend to agree and he says 'Achoo!' and you say 'Okay, pumpkin it is!'

It's looking good! Keep up the good work!
I liked that part when you asked your friend to agree and he says 'Achoo!' and you say 'Okay, pumpkin it is!'

It's looking good! Keep up the good work!
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Thanks! Sadly, i'm planning to quit these stories. I'm still thinking whats good and whats not good!

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