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Pokemon Mystery Dungeon: Explorers of Surprise (Part Three)
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10-11-15 03:04 PM
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So, after Julie finishes with her sleep, Bronco interrupts with a message for her.
Bronco: Julie! There's these Magnemites that want us to save another Magneton!
Julie: ....They can wait..... I need to shop for stuff that's..... Important, I guess....
Bronco: Well... Okay. I'll give you some of my money so you can go out and buy some stuff.
Julie: Thank you. Now go away, I don't want to see you at all.
*Bronco exits his own house, wondering "Why am I getting kicked out of my own house?"*
*Julie hops out of bed, goes outside, checks the mailbox, finds an explorer kit, some money, and some news.*
Julie: This'll go in the house... Just to make sure I know where it is when I come back after shopping...
*Julie takes the explorer kit and the news and stores them in a drawer, while she keeps the money for herself. She then goes to the Kecleon Shop.*
Julie: I want a Reviver Seed. Give me a Reviver Seed.
Kecleon: ..Okay... Pay up.
*Julie gives Kecleon 1 US Dollar, calling it extremely rare.*
Julie: You see this? This is one of the rarest things in this world. It's currency from an alternate universe or something along those lines.
Kecleon: And... What about it? Would I really care if it was rare or not? What universe is it from?
Julie: It's from Planet Earth where a bunch of humans live. It's common there, but this is the only one in this entire spot. It's like legendary money.
Kecleon: Okay.... Go ahead, and take a Reviver Seed. *Kecleon hands Julie a Reviver Seed.*
Julie: Thank you. Now give me 5 more.
Kecleon: I don't understand why you'd need these, but here. *Kecleon gives Julie 5 more Reviver seeds.* Now give me some iconic money.
*Julie hands Kecleon a random amount of (P).*
Julie: Thank you! *Julie rushes over to Bronco's house, meeting Bronco there.*
Bronco: Julie, what did you go and buy?
Julie: 6 reviver seeds.
Bronco: With what money?
Julie: Oh, some human change. You obviously don't know what it is.
Bronco: ...Show me, then I'll know what it is.
*Julie takes out a crinkling US dollar, showing off.*
Julie: With this. Dude, let's go save those Magnemites you were talking about.
Bronco: ..Oh yeah! Those guys! Let's go ahead and rescue some Magnemites. Actually, only two. *Bronco, again, grabs Julie and escorts her to Thunderwave Cave.*
Julie: Where exactly are we going?
Bronco: We're going to a totally safe cave, trust me.
*Bronco rushes past the Magnemite at the entrance and quickly rushes through the first floor while beating up more stuff. (2F)*
Bronco: The first floor is of no importance. Okay, Julie. Take those eyepatches off and throw some leaves at people. *Bronco gets out of front and pits Julie against a Nidoran.*
Julie: Umm... Well, you're forcing me, so I pretty much have to do it. *she says in a sarcastic tone.* *Julie uses Razor Leaf against the Nidoran repeatedly, which does nearly nothing.. The Nidoran attacks her with a Tackle, which doesn't do as nearly nothing as Razor Leaf but still does absolutely pathetic damage. Then, Julie Tackles the Nidoran, making it fade into nothing.* That just happened. Is it physics? That thing just literally faded into nothing just now. Physics?
Bronco: Don't question it. Trying to question it makes you look stupid. *Bronco switches in front with Julie, and he proceeds to wander around mindlessly like always until he finds the next stair case, then going up it.*
Julie: You know, I'll go ahead and discard this Voltorb over here.... *Julie proceeds to throw leaves at the Voltorb. However, it actually requests to join their team.*
Voltorb: Hey! Hey! Can I join your team, please?
Bronco: *mutters* oh crap, I forgot to name our team....... Okay! Go ahead! We'll name you.....
Julie: I wanna name it "Ball"!
Ball: Yaaay! I'm a Ball! Woohoo!
Bronco: *mutters* something tells me that this thing is going to be pretty much useless.....
Ball: I can direct you to the next floor immediately once per dungeon!
Bronco: I was wrong immediately... *Bronco randomly wanders the floor again, beating up a Ratatta, Poochyena, two Elekids, and a Plusle. He then goes to the next floor. (4F)* Ball, direct us to the next floor right now.
Ball:  OKAY! *Ball gives Bronco a Warp Seed.*
Bronco: What do I do with thi---
Ball: JUST. EAT. IT.
Bronco: Umm.. okay.... *Bronco eats it, and then warps to the staircase. He then goes up it, finding the Magnemite.* Okay, we'll take you and go back to the basement floor, and then show you to the Magnemites outside!
*A victory chime from a radio plays.*
Magnemites: YAY. NOW WE CAN SUCCESFULLY BECOME MAGNETON. THANK YOU FOR YOUR HELP. *And, those Magnemites give Bronco and Julie some stuff and then they go straight to their resting places. Julie puts everything she and Bronco have and stuff them into a drawer. Then, right after that, she goes straight to sleep.*
(To be continued. This is the last PMDEoSU thing I'm posting today.)
So, after Julie finishes with her sleep, Bronco interrupts with a message for her.
Bronco: Julie! There's these Magnemites that want us to save another Magneton!
Julie: ....They can wait..... I need to shop for stuff that's..... Important, I guess....
Bronco: Well... Okay. I'll give you some of my money so you can go out and buy some stuff.
Julie: Thank you. Now go away, I don't want to see you at all.
*Bronco exits his own house, wondering "Why am I getting kicked out of my own house?"*
*Julie hops out of bed, goes outside, checks the mailbox, finds an explorer kit, some money, and some news.*
Julie: This'll go in the house... Just to make sure I know where it is when I come back after shopping...
*Julie takes the explorer kit and the news and stores them in a drawer, while she keeps the money for herself. She then goes to the Kecleon Shop.*
Julie: I want a Reviver Seed. Give me a Reviver Seed.
Kecleon: ..Okay... Pay up.
*Julie gives Kecleon 1 US Dollar, calling it extremely rare.*
Julie: You see this? This is one of the rarest things in this world. It's currency from an alternate universe or something along those lines.
Kecleon: And... What about it? Would I really care if it was rare or not? What universe is it from?
Julie: It's from Planet Earth where a bunch of humans live. It's common there, but this is the only one in this entire spot. It's like legendary money.
Kecleon: Okay.... Go ahead, and take a Reviver Seed. *Kecleon hands Julie a Reviver Seed.*
Julie: Thank you. Now give me 5 more.
Kecleon: I don't understand why you'd need these, but here. *Kecleon gives Julie 5 more Reviver seeds.* Now give me some iconic money.
*Julie hands Kecleon a random amount of (P).*
Julie: Thank you! *Julie rushes over to Bronco's house, meeting Bronco there.*
Bronco: Julie, what did you go and buy?
Julie: 6 reviver seeds.
Bronco: With what money?
Julie: Oh, some human change. You obviously don't know what it is.
Bronco: ...Show me, then I'll know what it is.
*Julie takes out a crinkling US dollar, showing off.*
Julie: With this. Dude, let's go save those Magnemites you were talking about.
Bronco: ..Oh yeah! Those guys! Let's go ahead and rescue some Magnemites. Actually, only two. *Bronco, again, grabs Julie and escorts her to Thunderwave Cave.*
Julie: Where exactly are we going?
Bronco: We're going to a totally safe cave, trust me.
*Bronco rushes past the Magnemite at the entrance and quickly rushes through the first floor while beating up more stuff. (2F)*
Bronco: The first floor is of no importance. Okay, Julie. Take those eyepatches off and throw some leaves at people. *Bronco gets out of front and pits Julie against a Nidoran.*
Julie: Umm... Well, you're forcing me, so I pretty much have to do it. *she says in a sarcastic tone.* *Julie uses Razor Leaf against the Nidoran repeatedly, which does nearly nothing.. The Nidoran attacks her with a Tackle, which doesn't do as nearly nothing as Razor Leaf but still does absolutely pathetic damage. Then, Julie Tackles the Nidoran, making it fade into nothing.* That just happened. Is it physics? That thing just literally faded into nothing just now. Physics?
Bronco: Don't question it. Trying to question it makes you look stupid. *Bronco switches in front with Julie, and he proceeds to wander around mindlessly like always until he finds the next stair case, then going up it.*
Julie: You know, I'll go ahead and discard this Voltorb over here.... *Julie proceeds to throw leaves at the Voltorb. However, it actually requests to join their team.*
Voltorb: Hey! Hey! Can I join your team, please?
Bronco: *mutters* oh crap, I forgot to name our team....... Okay! Go ahead! We'll name you.....
Julie: I wanna name it "Ball"!
Ball: Yaaay! I'm a Ball! Woohoo!
Bronco: *mutters* something tells me that this thing is going to be pretty much useless.....
Ball: I can direct you to the next floor immediately once per dungeon!
Bronco: I was wrong immediately... *Bronco randomly wanders the floor again, beating up a Ratatta, Poochyena, two Elekids, and a Plusle. He then goes to the next floor. (4F)* Ball, direct us to the next floor right now.
Ball:  OKAY! *Ball gives Bronco a Warp Seed.*
Bronco: What do I do with thi---
Ball: JUST. EAT. IT.
Bronco: Umm.. okay.... *Bronco eats it, and then warps to the staircase. He then goes up it, finding the Magnemite.* Okay, we'll take you and go back to the basement floor, and then show you to the Magnemites outside!
*A victory chime from a radio plays.*
Magnemites: YAY. NOW WE CAN SUCCESFULLY BECOME MAGNETON. THANK YOU FOR YOUR HELP. *And, those Magnemites give Bronco and Julie some stuff and then they go straight to their resting places. Julie puts everything she and Bronco have and stuff them into a drawer. Then, right after that, she goes straight to sleep.*
(To be continued. This is the last PMDEoSU thing I'm posting today.)
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Poor Bronco. It takes a nice Pokemon to accept being kicked out of their own house!

I wish 1 USD was a lot of money in real life, too haha. I find it offensive that you named voltorb Ball, he's always been a Sphere kind of guy haha!

I am curious, are you writing this as you play, or have you just played that much that you can actually remember and recreate this?
Poor Bronco. It takes a nice Pokemon to accept being kicked out of their own house!

I wish 1 USD was a lot of money in real life, too haha. I find it offensive that you named voltorb Ball, he's always been a Sphere kind of guy haha!

I am curious, are you writing this as you play, or have you just played that much that you can actually remember and recreate this?
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I'm pretty sure Bronco thinks his house was really really cheap and he thinks he can buy one any time.
See, Julie thinks that the seeds in the Pokemon world are the same as on Earth, because they just look like regular old flimsy seeds. As expected, Julie simply just fooled Kecleon into thinking it was rare, and left while laughing hysterically.
I'm actually writing this as I play. I've never really got halfway through Pokemon Mystery Dungeon, Red Rescue Team, but I can thoroughly remember every location in the Explorers series, excluding Sky. So, writing this is a real trouble to me. First, I have to open up wordpad, which is pretty much hidden on my computer. It has a password lock to top that off. Next, I play PMDRRT. For every event I think I could make a funny spin off of, I make a save state on my emulator (because if I quit out of it it crashes for some reason) and then I make one or two lines about it. I use some help from the Bulbapedia about the exact pokemon that can appear on the dungeon, since it confuses me majorly anyways.
I'm pretty sure Bronco thinks his house was really really cheap and he thinks he can buy one any time.
See, Julie thinks that the seeds in the Pokemon world are the same as on Earth, because they just look like regular old flimsy seeds. As expected, Julie simply just fooled Kecleon into thinking it was rare, and left while laughing hysterically.
I'm actually writing this as I play. I've never really got halfway through Pokemon Mystery Dungeon, Red Rescue Team, but I can thoroughly remember every location in the Explorers series, excluding Sky. So, writing this is a real trouble to me. First, I have to open up wordpad, which is pretty much hidden on my computer. It has a password lock to top that off. Next, I play PMDRRT. For every event I think I could make a funny spin off of, I make a save state on my emulator (because if I quit out of it it crashes for some reason) and then I make one or two lines about it. I use some help from the Bulbapedia about the exact pokemon that can appear on the dungeon, since it confuses me majorly anyways.
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Wow, so you actually go pretty in-depth when finding what to write next. I can really respect you for doing that! (Especially going the extra mile and checking Bulbpedia instead of just free balling ideas that may or not make actual sense)
Wow, so you actually go pretty in-depth when finding what to write next. I can really respect you for doing that! (Especially going the extra mile and checking Bulbpedia instead of just free balling ideas that may or not make actual sense)
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Also, from Julie's perspective, she had never seen a Pokémon before and she never knew of three dimensional shapes, so she just called it Ball to not go into hours of naming trouble. I forgot to describe the characters in the actual story post, so I end up randomly confused making a lot of posts while forgetting to put one specific detail into one to make it look neat. Also, fun fact, I actually based the Pokémon here on my EoS playthrough and storylines I have stored on my computer. First, there's Blanky, the Squirtle. (in the storylines) He is very rushed, usually angry, and is only somewhat happy when he's greeting someone. He also has a strange thirst for beating people up, just like Bronco. Then, I have Jolie, the Chikorita. Jolie is very kind and will always stop anything for a cup of tea, but when she's angry, she's not to be reckoned with.
Also, from Julie's perspective, she had never seen a Pokémon before and she never knew of three dimensional shapes, so she just called it Ball to not go into hours of naming trouble. I forgot to describe the characters in the actual story post, so I end up randomly confused making a lot of posts while forgetting to put one specific detail into one to make it look neat. Also, fun fact, I actually based the Pokémon here on my EoS playthrough and storylines I have stored on my computer. First, there's Blanky, the Squirtle. (in the storylines) He is very rushed, usually angry, and is only somewhat happy when he's greeting someone. He also has a strange thirst for beating people up, just like Bronco. Then, I have Jolie, the Chikorita. Jolie is very kind and will always stop anything for a cup of tea, but when she's angry, she's not to be reckoned with.
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I'll sometimes put things that make no actual sense whatsoever, but it's just because of the comedy aspect of this. I find it more funny and less of a kind act than what's actually shown on the game. There's also some parts where this kind of thing happens: "There is a venomous Ariados menacingly hanging above Julie and Ball. (that's right, Ball will actually be somewhat important.) Conveniently, _____ and _____ happens right then." It's because if there's a situation they couldn't deal with regularly, they conveniently have something to help them massively, like Bronco's head or shell or something like that. Maybe a Reviver seed since Julie bought 6 of them at the beginning of this little series.
I'll sometimes put things that make no actual sense whatsoever, but it's just because of the comedy aspect of this. I find it more funny and less of a kind act than what's actually shown on the game. There's also some parts where this kind of thing happens: "There is a venomous Ariados menacingly hanging above Julie and Ball. (that's right, Ball will actually be somewhat important.) Conveniently, _____ and _____ happens right then." It's because if there's a situation they couldn't deal with regularly, they conveniently have something to help them massively, like Bronco's head or shell or something like that. Maybe a Reviver seed since Julie bought 6 of them at the beginning of this little series.
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I also have a sort of schedule on this. So, everyday, I post at least one of these, and if I fail, I have to post 2 threads the day later. Also, if there's something I forget/ am not sure about, I go to Bulbapedia, looking up the events that happen in the following dungeon. Since I already finished the dungeon that I'm trying to post about, I can easily look up the events with no spoilers. It's like if I finish the 10th dungeon, I can go on Bulbapedia, look up the events of the previous dungeon, and then put it in my post while not really having to replay the dungeon again, and then forgetting it again. I've actually did this a lot before. It really saves me a lot of time, since it takes me around 30 minutes to write each thread. And, most of the time, I'm posting on YouTube, going somehwere without wifi, or just generally doing anything but writing what I promised to continue everyday. (Oops, triple post.)
I also have a sort of schedule on this. So, everyday, I post at least one of these, and if I fail, I have to post 2 threads the day later. Also, if there's something I forget/ am not sure about, I go to Bulbapedia, looking up the events that happen in the following dungeon. Since I already finished the dungeon that I'm trying to post about, I can easily look up the events with no spoilers. It's like if I finish the 10th dungeon, I can go on Bulbapedia, look up the events of the previous dungeon, and then put it in my post while not really having to replay the dungeon again, and then forgetting it again. I've actually did this a lot before. It really saves me a lot of time, since it takes me around 30 minutes to write each thread. And, most of the time, I'm posting on YouTube, going somehwere without wifi, or just generally doing anything but writing what I promised to continue everyday. (Oops, triple post.)
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