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Pokemon Mystery Dungeon: Explorers of Surprise (Part One)
Something I wrote in my free time that I'll probably make some other parts for it too.
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10-11-15 12:17 PM
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It is a mildly sunny day, in an alternate universe of the region Unova. 2 unevolved starter Pokemon, Chikorita and Squirtle, wake up in a bright forest on a very sunny day. The Chikorita is laying down, paralyzed, unknowing of where he is.

Squirtle: ...Excuse me.... The Squirtle pokes the Chikorita, confused.
Chikorita: yawn Moomm... I don't want to go to school toda---- *The Chikorita sees a Squirtle in front of herself. She is completely stunned for a minute.*
Squirtle: Umm.... What's wrong? Are you sick?
Chikorita: Uhh... uhh.... She wipes her eyes. Yes? Uhm... My name is... Julie. Yeah. Julie.
Squirtle: Well, hello Julie..... My name is Bronco... What are you doing in this forest alone?
Julie: ...I don't know what I'm doing! Last night I went to sleep in a huge bed, and now I find myself in a random forest! What the heck exactly are YOU doing here?
Bronco: I was just strolling through the forest. What do you recall the last thing you did was, Mrs. Chikorita?
Julie: ...Chikorita? But--but... I thought I was a perfectly normal human being! What is happening here?!?!?!
Bronco: But... You aren't a perfectly normal human being. You really look like a perfectly Chikorita. You're really messed up.
Julie has her eyes open wide. She looks over to her arms, and she drops her leaf. She has her mouth closed, angry. She starts squealing angrily.
Bronco: Well, since you can't really do anything else right now, I'm going to introduce you to the town I live.
Bronco grabs Julie by the leaf and starts dragging her around the Town Square.
Bronco: So, at the entrace, we have the Kecleon Shop.
Julie: Is this where we shop Kecleons?
Bronco: No.... Not like that. This is where you by misceallaneous stuff, like TMs, Reviver Seeds, seeds in general, and stuff that helps the adventurers here progress through dungeons. There's a lot of other stuff, but let me show you the most important part in this entire town.
Bronco starts rushing Julie over to the Pelipper Post Office, discarding every other building in his way.
Bronco: This is the Pelipper Post Office. This is where you get requests to save people and give items and do super special things.... So, let's go back to your definite habitat, the forest.
Julie: You're not letting me decide anythi----
Bronco:
SHHHHHH.... I'll show everything else to you LATER.
As Bronco is rushing Julie over to the forest, they encounter a Butterfree begging for help. To be continued.
(Here ends part one of my PMDRRT-based story.)
It is a mildly sunny day, in an alternate universe of the region Unova. 2 unevolved starter Pokemon, Chikorita and Squirtle, wake up in a bright forest on a very sunny day. The Chikorita is laying down, paralyzed, unknowing of where he is.

Squirtle: ...Excuse me.... The Squirtle pokes the Chikorita, confused.
Chikorita: yawn Moomm... I don't want to go to school toda---- *The Chikorita sees a Squirtle in front of herself. She is completely stunned for a minute.*
Squirtle: Umm.... What's wrong? Are you sick?
Chikorita: Uhh... uhh.... She wipes her eyes. Yes? Uhm... My name is... Julie. Yeah. Julie.
Squirtle: Well, hello Julie..... My name is Bronco... What are you doing in this forest alone?
Julie: ...I don't know what I'm doing! Last night I went to sleep in a huge bed, and now I find myself in a random forest! What the heck exactly are YOU doing here?
Bronco: I was just strolling through the forest. What do you recall the last thing you did was, Mrs. Chikorita?
Julie: ...Chikorita? But--but... I thought I was a perfectly normal human being! What is happening here?!?!?!
Bronco: But... You aren't a perfectly normal human being. You really look like a perfectly Chikorita. You're really messed up.
Julie has her eyes open wide. She looks over to her arms, and she drops her leaf. She has her mouth closed, angry. She starts squealing angrily.
Bronco: Well, since you can't really do anything else right now, I'm going to introduce you to the town I live.
Bronco grabs Julie by the leaf and starts dragging her around the Town Square.
Bronco: So, at the entrace, we have the Kecleon Shop.
Julie: Is this where we shop Kecleons?
Bronco: No.... Not like that. This is where you by misceallaneous stuff, like TMs, Reviver Seeds, seeds in general, and stuff that helps the adventurers here progress through dungeons. There's a lot of other stuff, but let me show you the most important part in this entire town.
Bronco starts rushing Julie over to the Pelipper Post Office, discarding every other building in his way.
Bronco: This is the Pelipper Post Office. This is where you get requests to save people and give items and do super special things.... So, let's go back to your definite habitat, the forest.
Julie: You're not letting me decide anythi----
Bronco:
SHHHHHH.... I'll show everything else to you LATER.
As Bronco is rushing Julie over to the forest, they encounter a Butterfree begging for help. To be continued.
(Here ends part one of my PMDRRT-based story.)
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10-11-15 08:27 PM
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weeniedog12 :

Wow, you're really pumping these stories out, already three parts in one day! Nice!

I couldn't help but laugh when I saw how Bronco basically interrupts Julie. It reminded me of the time I said something to my friend about how it doesn't even give you a choice - like what if I want to be in Gengar's posse of meanies?

So far so good
weeniedog12 :

Wow, you're really pumping these stories out, already three parts in one day! Nice!

I couldn't help but laugh when I saw how Bronco basically interrupts Julie. It reminded me of the time I said something to my friend about how it doesn't even give you a choice - like what if I want to be in Gengar's posse of meanies?

So far so good
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10-11-15 08:36 PM
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I really just made this series because I was really interested in PMD, like pretty much obsessed, just like my layout says. I wasn't really trying to be that serious with this series. I just wanted it to have the same points, places in Red Rescue Team, but with a lot of extra comedy with it and some huge twists. It's like in the beginning of the game, the partner questions why the heck you're here of all places. Checkaroo, that's here. You tell your partner your name. Chekaroo, that's also here. I'm not really sure that the main character actually remembers anything outside of being a human. The main character, in this thing, does remember where she/he slept. The main character in the game screams "WHY AM I A POKEMON?!?!" while the main character here just squeals angrily. The partner introduces the main character, in the game, every part of the town. Here, however, (since I was actually kind of lazy to write something for that.) the partner rudely grabs one of the main character's body parts and rushes them through only two places. Also, what I'm sure is the best part of this post, "SHHHHHH..... I'll show everything else to you LATER." just makes the partner look rude, the thing I was going for since I started this.
I really just made this series because I was really interested in PMD, like pretty much obsessed, just like my layout says. I wasn't really trying to be that serious with this series. I just wanted it to have the same points, places in Red Rescue Team, but with a lot of extra comedy with it and some huge twists. It's like in the beginning of the game, the partner questions why the heck you're here of all places. Checkaroo, that's here. You tell your partner your name. Chekaroo, that's also here. I'm not really sure that the main character actually remembers anything outside of being a human. The main character, in this thing, does remember where she/he slept. The main character in the game screams "WHY AM I A POKEMON?!?!" while the main character here just squeals angrily. The partner introduces the main character, in the game, every part of the town. Here, however, (since I was actually kind of lazy to write something for that.) the partner rudely grabs one of the main character's body parts and rushes them through only two places. Also, what I'm sure is the best part of this post, "SHHHHHH..... I'll show everything else to you LATER." just makes the partner look rude, the thing I was going for since I started this.
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