First of all, the gameplay is quite good as it could be played for some time but it gets repetitive easily. Sound is like having your ears pierced from the inside, and the story is, you're a paperboy. That's it. It doesn't have much to do, all you could do is finish the levels quickly or something. Unfortunately, the controls are quite irritating and just don't feel very smooth at all. It is definitely better left on the snes with better controls and better resolution and such. This game was frankly a kind of disappointment, but at least it would have been good on the go back in the day. 5/10.

This is a good first review. There are some ways that you can improve in the future. One way is to separate your review into seperate categories, for example:

Grpahics: 2/10 *then explain why you gave this category a 2 here*

If you do this with each category, your review will be more organized and if you add more detail to your reviews, you'll earn lots of Viz.

This is decent for a first review, however, I do have some suggestions that could potentially improve your future reviews. Personally, I think the best way to approach reviewing a game is to break it down into categories according to graphics, sound, story, etc. From there, you can discuss the good/bad parts of the game in greater detail. This is a good example:


Graphics: 10

The graphics for this game were outstanding because they were realistic.... (This is a simple example, but you get the idea right?)


You should aim to do this for each section of the review. The explanation is more important than the rating itself, so be sure to talk and explain why that section received the rating you gave it. 


As far as actually organizing your review goes, you can set it up however you'd like. I personally like to bold and underline each section and then discuss it in regular font below. It all comes down to your personal preference. However, I would recommend you give adequate spacing between the sections of your review because no one wants to read a huge block of text. 

I hope this was somewhat helpful. I look forward to seeing your next review! 

Honestly I prefer the NES version of this game, personally. Just because the control isn't quite as fidget-y. The 16 bit versions of the game have the difficulty ramped up 200% as well lol.

The music in these games have never been that great. Even including the arcade original. What was cool about the arcade game was the handlebar controller on the original ;-)

Well, others have already given the advice I was going to give .

One thing I can add though is to compare the game with other from the era/from the series (if it applies). This way it can show people played these *other games* how they compare to the one you are reviewing