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MONSTER: A tale of An akaian chapter 22 ''A secret'' True version

 

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There are some differences here, that are what it was really supposed to be, I had to rewrite some stuff, and this is the true version

This is an essential remake, all the old versions are now not official.

MONSTER: A tale of an Akaian Chapter 22 ‘’A secret’’

Monster, Faded and Shellana were playing Crash Team Racing.

‘’AAAHHH! I never win at this stupid game!!’’ Monster yelled as he threw the special edition chicken controller to the ground.
‘’Hey, monster! That’s my special chicken edition controller, don’t throw with it!’’ Said an Irritated Faded

‘’Hey, you 2, care to play an Akaian board game?’’ Shellana asked Monster and Faded.
‘’Board game…? I haven’t played a board game in over fifty chicken years!’’ Faded said with a confused look on his face
‘’What is it?’’ Asked a still rather mad Monster

Shellana went upstairs, opened up a closet Faded and Monster didn’t even knew existed, and came back downstairs.
‘’Here it is’’ Shellana said as she showed a gigantic box.
‘’Holy MLG, that thing is enormous’’ yelled a shocked Faded
‘’ Expara da Artho’’ Was on the box

‘’What kinda language is that?’’ Faded asked.
‘’ It’s Sandiaze, the language spoken in a lot of countries on planet Akaia, including the one Monster’s mother, and I come from.’’
‘’If it’s in Japanese..’’ Faded said until he was interrupted by Monster ‘’Sandiaze!’’
‘’Alright, alright, if it’s in.. sandblese, how do we play it?’’ Faded asked
‘’Well, I can explain the rules in English.’’ Shellana replied
‘’It translates to, Expidition on Earth. It was released a few years after Akaian astronauts arrived on earth’’ Shellana said


‘’WAIT!? You mean to tell me, there were aliens on earth, that weren’t the super buff jacked chicken heads!?’’ Asked a surprised Faded


‘’Yes.. Faded.’’ Shelllana said, she continued ‘’Anyway, the rules are as follows: You’re an Akaian trying not to be noticed as different, it’s really a game of luck, there are spaces which make you spin.. this weel’’ She picked a Wheel out of the box. ‘’This determines what actions you take, like shoot a crystal beam through a building, or eat popcorn, and stuff like that.’’ Your goal is to make it to New bark City You begin in aussiecountry. Here,is the dice.


They played for a while, and Monster and Faded had a lot of fun.
They went to bed, but before that* (Author’s note, I have something to say about the following scene: GREEN TOLD ME TO!)

 



Monster walked up to Shellana, and did what he hadn't done before since he left Planet Akaia he kissed

 

 Shellana.
‘’Well, that's been a while.’’ Said a shocked Shellana
Monster said nothing, and went to take a shower.
The next day, Faded wanted to play Expedition on Earth again, but he noticed something was up, by the way Monster and Shellana were acting.


‘’Why are you two acting so weird? Is it because you are in awe of how amazing, and sexy I am?’’ Faded asked with a confused look on his face
Monster and Shellana didn’t reply.


‘’I wanted to play a fun game with you guys! But your just acting like you had your first kiss, which I bet is not the case, I mean look at Shellana, she’s as hot as a.. sorry, Monster’’ Monster looked very angry at Faded when he said it.


‘’Well, I’m gonna go to Vizo Café, guys! You guys are welcome, too, Except if you act like how your acting now, then I’d rather have you stay here.’’
Faded headed out to the Vizo Café


‘’Soo… how’s it going, Shella?’’ Monster asked
‘’Fine, what about you?’’ She replied
‘’I’m doing alright, too. Very nervous, though..’’
‘’Why is that, Potanto?’’ Asked Shellana


‘’There’s just somethings, I need to do, gonna go to the busy city today, to buy some stuff.’’ Said Monster
‘’Oh, can I come with you? I still need some new clothes.’’


‘’Nah, Shellana, i’d rather go on my own, it’s your birthday on the 15th of may, so maybe I need to get some stuff.’’
‘’Well, your birthday is on the 19th, so maybe I need to get some stuff, too!’’
‘’Alright... you come with me, then.’’ Monster ultimately said


‘’Jeez, still can’t buy it.. well, maybe when she’s not around, or something..’’ Were one of the many things that went through Monster’s head.
They went to the Vizo Café to tell Faded that they were going to the city.
Faded said, ‘’It seems like you two are still acting weird, so I’m happy about, that.’’ Faded said and he continued his story about the buff chicken aliens.


‘’And they had 50 inch pythons!!!’’
Faded And Shellana bought clothes.. video games for Faded, and both bought presents for each other, which they hid.
‘’By the way.. just don’t spend a lot of money until I say you can.. okay?’’
‘’Why is that, Monster?’’
‘’I just want to be safe with the money, alright?’’

 
Shellana was confused but said ‘’Alright…’’
‘’Maybe, I want to buy you something cool, it is your birthday tomorrow, after all!
‘’But we’ve already booked a vacation, with all our friends, in the blue sea in Egiptio, right?’’ Shellana asked
‘’Yes, yes.. but still..’’ Monster replied

 

Shellana went to bed early, as she had a lot of packing to do the next day.
Monster had called all the important friends up to tell them something.


‘’Hey, guys, thanks that you all came. I have something to say about Shellana and I.’’ Said a nervous monster

 


‘’Is she pregnant!?’’ Yelled Juul
‘’No, she’s not pregnant’’ Monster replied
‘’Are you guys breaking up?’’ Asked Eirinn


‘’No, no, no, we aren’t breaking up.’’
‘’Then, what is it? You’ve always told me, that you were never going to marry someone’’ Said Oni.
‘’Well, I kind of changed my mind about that. You see, I’ve been saving up money for months, now. And I’m going to the Jewelry shop, and I’m gonna buy a ring with a diamond on it’’
‘’And what if she refuses? Then, you wasted your money.’’ Faded said


There was dead silence, after that, as people didn’t know what to think.
‘’Well, anyway. A diamond, that’s pretty damn expensive, how are you going to afford that?’’ Asked

Eirinn
‘’I got a job at a restaurant, which pays very well.’’ ‘’And Shellana’s twin sister is sort of the princess of Sandia, a country on planet Akaia, so, that helped. Shellana had family problems, and got kicked out of

 

the royal family, so she has no money from the royal family, but her sister is very nice and gave us some! Shellana doesn’t know, though. Her sister asked me it herself.’’


‘’Wait, what.’’ Said yoshi ‘’Is that even legal IS THAT EVEN POSSIBLE, to kick someone out of the Royal Family?’’ Asked Yoshi


‘’Over there it is, her father was also a mayor.’’
‘’ I know this stuff can’t happen here, but it can happen over there, so don’t get too confused’’

‘’But, anyway, when are you going to propose?’’  Asked Eirinn
‘’When we’re on vacation’’ Monster replied
‘’How are you going to, Monster?’’ Asked Eirinn
‘’I am going to show the ring underwater.’’
‘’Isn’t that dangerous?’’

‘’Well, yes, but I’m gonna hold it very tight, and nothing will happen I promise.’’

‘’You know, if it does fall I’ll be underwater to see where it lands, alright?’’ Eirinn asked
‘’Great idea, thanks all you guys, I super appreciate it, even you Juul. And even you Faded..’’
To be Continued…..

There are some differences here, that are what it was really supposed to be, I had to rewrite some stuff, and this is the true version

This is an essential remake, all the old versions are now not official.

MONSTER: A tale of an Akaian Chapter 22 ‘’A secret’’

Monster, Faded and Shellana were playing Crash Team Racing.

‘’AAAHHH! I never win at this stupid game!!’’ Monster yelled as he threw the special edition chicken controller to the ground.
‘’Hey, monster! That’s my special chicken edition controller, don’t throw with it!’’ Said an Irritated Faded

‘’Hey, you 2, care to play an Akaian board game?’’ Shellana asked Monster and Faded.
‘’Board game…? I haven’t played a board game in over fifty chicken years!’’ Faded said with a confused look on his face
‘’What is it?’’ Asked a still rather mad Monster

Shellana went upstairs, opened up a closet Faded and Monster didn’t even knew existed, and came back downstairs.
‘’Here it is’’ Shellana said as she showed a gigantic box.
‘’Holy MLG, that thing is enormous’’ yelled a shocked Faded
‘’ Expara da Artho’’ Was on the box

‘’What kinda language is that?’’ Faded asked.
‘’ It’s Sandiaze, the language spoken in a lot of countries on planet Akaia, including the one Monster’s mother, and I come from.’’
‘’If it’s in Japanese..’’ Faded said until he was interrupted by Monster ‘’Sandiaze!’’
‘’Alright, alright, if it’s in.. sandblese, how do we play it?’’ Faded asked
‘’Well, I can explain the rules in English.’’ Shellana replied
‘’It translates to, Expidition on Earth. It was released a few years after Akaian astronauts arrived on earth’’ Shellana said


‘’WAIT!? You mean to tell me, there were aliens on earth, that weren’t the super buff jacked chicken heads!?’’ Asked a surprised Faded


‘’Yes.. Faded.’’ Shelllana said, she continued ‘’Anyway, the rules are as follows: You’re an Akaian trying not to be noticed as different, it’s really a game of luck, there are spaces which make you spin.. this weel’’ She picked a Wheel out of the box. ‘’This determines what actions you take, like shoot a crystal beam through a building, or eat popcorn, and stuff like that.’’ Your goal is to make it to New bark City You begin in aussiecountry. Here,is the dice.


They played for a while, and Monster and Faded had a lot of fun.
They went to bed, but before that* (Author’s note, I have something to say about the following scene: GREEN TOLD ME TO!)

 



Monster walked up to Shellana, and did what he hadn't done before since he left Planet Akaia he kissed

 

 Shellana.
‘’Well, that's been a while.’’ Said a shocked Shellana
Monster said nothing, and went to take a shower.
The next day, Faded wanted to play Expedition on Earth again, but he noticed something was up, by the way Monster and Shellana were acting.


‘’Why are you two acting so weird? Is it because you are in awe of how amazing, and sexy I am?’’ Faded asked with a confused look on his face
Monster and Shellana didn’t reply.


‘’I wanted to play a fun game with you guys! But your just acting like you had your first kiss, which I bet is not the case, I mean look at Shellana, she’s as hot as a.. sorry, Monster’’ Monster looked very angry at Faded when he said it.


‘’Well, I’m gonna go to Vizo Café, guys! You guys are welcome, too, Except if you act like how your acting now, then I’d rather have you stay here.’’
Faded headed out to the Vizo Café


‘’Soo… how’s it going, Shella?’’ Monster asked
‘’Fine, what about you?’’ She replied
‘’I’m doing alright, too. Very nervous, though..’’
‘’Why is that, Potanto?’’ Asked Shellana


‘’There’s just somethings, I need to do, gonna go to the busy city today, to buy some stuff.’’ Said Monster
‘’Oh, can I come with you? I still need some new clothes.’’


‘’Nah, Shellana, i’d rather go on my own, it’s your birthday on the 15th of may, so maybe I need to get some stuff.’’
‘’Well, your birthday is on the 19th, so maybe I need to get some stuff, too!’’
‘’Alright... you come with me, then.’’ Monster ultimately said


‘’Jeez, still can’t buy it.. well, maybe when she’s not around, or something..’’ Were one of the many things that went through Monster’s head.
They went to the Vizo Café to tell Faded that they were going to the city.
Faded said, ‘’It seems like you two are still acting weird, so I’m happy about, that.’’ Faded said and he continued his story about the buff chicken aliens.


‘’And they had 50 inch pythons!!!’’
Faded And Shellana bought clothes.. video games for Faded, and both bought presents for each other, which they hid.
‘’By the way.. just don’t spend a lot of money until I say you can.. okay?’’
‘’Why is that, Monster?’’
‘’I just want to be safe with the money, alright?’’

 
Shellana was confused but said ‘’Alright…’’
‘’Maybe, I want to buy you something cool, it is your birthday tomorrow, after all!
‘’But we’ve already booked a vacation, with all our friends, in the blue sea in Egiptio, right?’’ Shellana asked
‘’Yes, yes.. but still..’’ Monster replied

 

Shellana went to bed early, as she had a lot of packing to do the next day.
Monster had called all the important friends up to tell them something.


‘’Hey, guys, thanks that you all came. I have something to say about Shellana and I.’’ Said a nervous monster

 


‘’Is she pregnant!?’’ Yelled Juul
‘’No, she’s not pregnant’’ Monster replied
‘’Are you guys breaking up?’’ Asked Eirinn


‘’No, no, no, we aren’t breaking up.’’
‘’Then, what is it? You’ve always told me, that you were never going to marry someone’’ Said Oni.
‘’Well, I kind of changed my mind about that. You see, I’ve been saving up money for months, now. And I’m going to the Jewelry shop, and I’m gonna buy a ring with a diamond on it’’
‘’And what if she refuses? Then, you wasted your money.’’ Faded said


There was dead silence, after that, as people didn’t know what to think.
‘’Well, anyway. A diamond, that’s pretty damn expensive, how are you going to afford that?’’ Asked

Eirinn
‘’I got a job at a restaurant, which pays very well.’’ ‘’And Shellana’s twin sister is sort of the princess of Sandia, a country on planet Akaia, so, that helped. Shellana had family problems, and got kicked out of

 

the royal family, so she has no money from the royal family, but her sister is very nice and gave us some! Shellana doesn’t know, though. Her sister asked me it herself.’’


‘’Wait, what.’’ Said yoshi ‘’Is that even legal IS THAT EVEN POSSIBLE, to kick someone out of the Royal Family?’’ Asked Yoshi


‘’Over there it is, her father was also a mayor.’’
‘’ I know this stuff can’t happen here, but it can happen over there, so don’t get too confused’’

‘’But, anyway, when are you going to propose?’’  Asked Eirinn
‘’When we’re on vacation’’ Monster replied
‘’How are you going to, Monster?’’ Asked Eirinn
‘’I am going to show the ring underwater.’’
‘’Isn’t that dangerous?’’

‘’Well, yes, but I’m gonna hold it very tight, and nothing will happen I promise.’’

‘’You know, if it does fall I’ll be underwater to see where it lands, alright?’’ Eirinn asked
‘’Great idea, thanks all you guys, I super appreciate it, even you Juul. And even you Faded..’’
To be Continued…..

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