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03-30-15 10:25 PM
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A promising spring in bloom
Comes the promise of the rose
Gently blooming in the sweetness
Of the incoming season

Its petals slowly open
With drops of morning dew
Washing its velvet face and
Washing the night away

A promising scent fills the air
As the rose spreads its sweet scent
Its a promise of a sweet, gentle spring
Slowly awakening from a deep winter slumber

A rose blooms in God's garden
The signal of new life and a promise...
...a promise of Eternity...
Such a sweet promise.

(c) 2015 Jennifer

(Yes, Jennifer is my real name)
A promising spring in bloom
Comes the promise of the rose
Gently blooming in the sweetness
Of the incoming season

Its petals slowly open
With drops of morning dew
Washing its velvet face and
Washing the night away

A promising scent fills the air
As the rose spreads its sweet scent
Its a promise of a sweet, gentle spring
Slowly awakening from a deep winter slumber

A rose blooms in God's garden
The signal of new life and a promise...
...a promise of Eternity...
Such a sweet promise.

(c) 2015 Jennifer

(Yes, Jennifer is my real name)

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That's really good! This kind of got me inspired now! I want to write some poetry!
That's really good! This kind of got me inspired now! I want to write some poetry!

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SilverHyruler : Thanks so much! I'm glad to be a source of inspiration (at least, my work).
SilverHyruler : Thanks so much! I'm glad to be a source of inspiration (at least, my work).

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This is pretty good. I like the repeating elements, it gives it a bit of a flow and makes it nice to read aloud. Good job! 
This is pretty good. I like the repeating elements, it gives it a bit of a flow and makes it nice to read aloud. Good job! 

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Yunimori : Thanks a bunch. I'm glad it's pleasing to you!
Yunimori : Thanks a bunch. I'm glad it's pleasing to you!

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