Edited for plagiarism.

While lengthwise this review is pretty good, in the future, you should separate the review into categories such as:

Graphics: 9/10 -then explain why you feel this way here-

If you do that, the review will be more organized, which makes it better. Other than that though I think this is a good review.

Like gamerforlife said, your review would be improved by separating the different sections to make it more readable.

Otherwise it's a fine review. I loved your description of the Wii; I'm not very familiar with that console. You gave some details about what you liked about the game but you could have also included a comparison with similar games (or other Metroid games) along with a more in-depth analysis of the game (like how well-developed Samus is in that game). 

XxHowiexX7 : Not to be rude, but, I've played Metroid: Other M once, maybe twice, and it doesn't have anything about 20 different weapons, 3D effect, off-screen play, tiny screen, or gyroscope function in it. And it doesn't have a cartoony style.

XxHowiexX7 : I hate to tell you that you're wrong, but oh my are you wrong. There is no co-op whatsoever. The graphics are more Final Fantasy meets Mortal Kombat. There is no 3D effect on the game, let alone on the Wii. If you're going to make a review, Play the game first.

Metroid Other M is considered non-cannon to the metroid storyline BECAUSE it is so bad. It takes Samus Aran's silent character, and throws her into the crapper. They replace her with a whiny and monotone voice actor in a dumbed down suit design. This game is practically a Metroid Fusion Wii port, only Metroid Fusion made the linearity work. This game dragged on so far with side stories that nobody cared about. This isn't a metroid game. It could POSSIBLY be good as another game, but this is NO metroid game whatsoever. The entire theme of the metroid series: Silence, Isolation, Exploration, Difficulty, Rewarding experiences, They are all removed from this game. At least Fusion had an exploration factor. And the storyline jumps back and forth like no other. This game is a COMPLETE waste of time and money. Only buy this if you are expecting a crappy game. The graphics and gameplay arent bad, but it doesnt feel like metroid. The sensemove feature basically allows you to dodge ANY AND ALL attacks from any enemy. This completely removes the difficulty from the game completely. This game DESERVES a 2 out of 10 because it is not a metroid game, despite the name and characters. This game set back the metroid series to square one. The ONLY thing that allows me to give this game a 2 rather than a 0 is that the gameplay is decently enjoyable. 

I'm struggling on deciding whether this review is a joke or not..

I'm shocked that nobody realized it was plagiarized. Seems the fact that it referred to the Wii as a current system would give it away.

Anyway, plagiarism is against Vizzed rules. Sorry. I'll have to trash this.