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Dragon ball Elniër the christmas special

 

12-25-14 05:51 AM
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Elric - well here is our way of saying, MERRY CHRISTMAS. begin.

Special 2
saving Christmas



It was
Christmas eve.

Santa Claus got on his sleigh and prepared to take off when a
man stood in the way.

So, this is Santa Claus huh the man said. Who are you
Santa Claus asked.

My name doesn’t matter the man said.

Suddenly the man
changed into an gas and got inside Santa Claus.

The man took the body over.


Meanwhile.

This is terrible King Kai said.

What is it Gohan asked.

A evil
spirit took Santa Claus his body over King Kai said.

That’s terrible, who knows
what he could do Gohan said.

I’m going to ask the z fighters for help King Kai
said.

Yeah, they could do it Gohan said.

Meanwhile.

The z fighters were
training on Akaia.

Elric looked forward to the finals.

Oh man, if we could
fight with no distractions, that would be awesome Elric said.

We know, you told
us that already Vegeta said.

Ah is poor Vegeta angry Elric said.

Vegeta
growled.

Hello, are you guys hearing me King Kai said.

King Kai is that you
Goku asked.
 
Yes it’s me, is everybody listening King Kai said.

Yes we’re all
hearing you Piccolo said.

Great, now listen King Kai said.

What now Vegeta
said.

A evil spirit took over Santa Claus’s 
body King Kai said.

Who is Santa Claus Elric and Yellow asked.

You mean you don't know Goten said.

We used to travel around planets, pretty sure we didn't have time for him Elric said.

Goku
explained quickly.

That sounds awesome Yellow said.

So an evil spirit took over
Elric said.

Yes King Kai said. I can do it, I’ve beaten a body stealing spirit
before Yellow said.

You got it out of me, after that I defeated him Elric said.


True Yellow said.

Alright Goku teleport us to Earth Elric said.

I’m coming too
Kakarott Vegeta said.

All Saiyans except Future Trunks, Tien, Piccolo and Yellow grabbed Goku.

Goku
teleported to Earth with the fighters that grabbed him.

Once on Earth Elric
used his senses to find Santa.

I found him, and he’s strong Elric said.

I’m
fighting him Vegeta said.

Depends, now let’s go Piccolo said.

Everyone flew
towards Santa.

Santa smiled when he saw the fighters, but then his face got
angry when he saw Yellow.

YOU Santa yelled.

W-wait, you’re the spirit from
before Yellow said.

I WILL TAKE MY REVENGE NOW Santa yelled.

A yellow light
emerged from Yellow that got a hold on Santa.

Santa growled.

A invisible blast
came throwing Yellow backwards.

He needs to be weakened, then I can drive him
out Yellow said.

We can do that Elric said, full of confidence.

How do you know
that Goku said.

I defeated him last time as a ssj1, I can turn ssj3 now Elric
said.

Tien rushed towards Santa and kicked him.

Santa punched Tien and kicked
him away.

KAMEHAMEHA Tien screamed.

IANTONIO Santa screamed.

Santa’s attack
overpowered, knocking Tien out.

Tien Elric said. Vegeta turned ssj1.

I’ll
defeat you, like I defeated Nappa Vegeta said.

Pff so easy Elric said.

Vegeta
rapidly kicked Santa and punched him to the ground.

FINAL FLASH Vegeta
screamed.

The attack hit Santa.

IANTONIO Santa screamed.

The attack hit Vegeta.


Vegeta punched Santa.

Santa punched Vegeta and kicked him away.

BIG BANG ATTACK
Vegeta screamed.

Santa dodged and kicked Vegeta, knocking him out.

So a ssj1
isn’t enough this time huh Elric said.

Piccolo removed his weights.

This better
be interesting Piccolo said.

Piccolo kicked Santa to the ground.

LIGHT GRENADE
Piccolo screamed.

Santa was hit. Santa kicked Piccolo.

Piccolo rapidly kicked
Santa.

SPECIAL BEAM CANNON Piccolo screamed.

Santa was hit.

Santa rapidly
punched Piccolo and kicked him down.

Santa kicked Piccolo, knocking him out.

Elric,
Potanto and Goku turned ssj3 at the same time.

Goten and Trunks fused.

Gotenks
appeared as a ssj3.

I will stop your evil ways, because I’m the hero of justice
Gotenks said.

Elric face palmed.

Gotenks kicked Santa and punched him away.

Hey
Goku, maybe we should fuse Elric said.

Maybe that would help Goku said.

They
saw Gotenks and Santa do an punching fest with Santa having the advantage.

Let
me try first then Potanto said.

Deal Elric said.

You just want to see his techniques Goku said.

KAMIKAZE GHOST ATTACK Gotenks
screamed.

The ghosts hit Santa.

Santa rapidly punched Gotenks and kicked him
down.

IANONIO Santa screamed.

The attack hit Gotenks.

BIG TREE CANNON Gotenks
screamed.

the attack hit Santa.

Santa rapidly punched Gotenks and kicked him,
knocking him out.

Potanto grunted and flew in the air.

What do you want to do, I’m on fire Santa said.


Well then. time to cool you down Potanto said.

IANTONIO Santa screamed.

WATARIA Potanto
screamed.

The water shielded Potanto from the attack.

The water surrounded
Santa. 

Santa flew through the water and kicked Potanto.

SUPER SUISHIO BLAST
Potanto screamed.

The attack hit Santa.

They did an punching fest.

Potanto shot
Ki blasts at Santa, most hitting.

Santa rapidly kicked Potanto and punched him
down.

DANKOTIO Potanto screamed.

The attack hit Santa.

Santa kicked Potanto,
knocking him out.

Ready Goku Elric said.

I won’t let you succeed Santa said.

DODON RAY
they heard someone scream.

The attack hit Santa.

Chiaotzu appeared.

Fuse now,
I’ll keep him busy Chiaotzu said.

Chiaotzu kicked him away.

Elric and Goku got
in position.

Santa kicked Chiaotzu.

FUSION HAH Goku and Elric yelled.

Santa
punched Chiaotzu, knocking him out.

Suddenly Santa felt a great power.

He
turned and saw the fusion.

Where are the 2 Saiyans, who are you Santa said.

I’m
neither of them, I’m Elku, the 1 who defeats evil like you Elku said.

Oh yeah,
let’s see about that Santa said.

Elku turned ssj2.

They did an punching fest with Elku
having the advantage.

Elku kicked Santa forward and then backwards.

Elku kicked
Santa upwards.

Elku rapidly punched Santa and kicked him to the ground.

E … J …
L … Elku began.

IANTONIO Santa screamed.

The attack hit Elku.

Elku appeared out
of the smoke unharmed.

KAMEHAMEHA Elku fired the combination attack.

The attack
hit Santa.

Santa fell on the ground.

Elku flew down and kicked Santa.

Now, go
Yellow Elku said.

A yellow light emerged form Yellow and separated Santa and
the evil spirit.

EJL KAMEHAMEHA Elku screamed.

The attack blasted the evil
spirit away.

Elku defused.

Good job Goku, and you too Yellow Elric said.

You too
Goku said.
 
Yeah, you both were amazing Yellow said.

The others woke up.

I need
to thank you all Santa said.

You don’t need to thank me Elric said.

Happy to
help Goku and Goten said.

Hmm Vegeta said.

Always ready to help Trunks said.

Me
too Tien and Chiaotzu said.

I did what I could Piccolo said.

Well I need to
bring presents for the children, but this is for you guys Santa said.

He gave
everyone something.

Santa flew away.

Let’s go back to Akaia and train further
for the tournament Elric said.

Goku teleported everyone to Akaia.

They all
started to train again.

Still, fusing doesn’t seem that fun anymore Elric said.

Author - merry Christmas

imamonster :
greenluigi :
juuldude :






Elric - well here is our way of saying, MERRY CHRISTMAS. begin.

Special 2
saving Christmas



It was
Christmas eve.

Santa Claus got on his sleigh and prepared to take off when a
man stood in the way.

So, this is Santa Claus huh the man said. Who are you
Santa Claus asked.

My name doesn’t matter the man said.

Suddenly the man
changed into an gas and got inside Santa Claus.

The man took the body over.


Meanwhile.

This is terrible King Kai said.

What is it Gohan asked.

A evil
spirit took Santa Claus his body over King Kai said.

That’s terrible, who knows
what he could do Gohan said.

I’m going to ask the z fighters for help King Kai
said.

Yeah, they could do it Gohan said.

Meanwhile.

The z fighters were
training on Akaia.

Elric looked forward to the finals.

Oh man, if we could
fight with no distractions, that would be awesome Elric said.

We know, you told
us that already Vegeta said.

Ah is poor Vegeta angry Elric said.

Vegeta
growled.

Hello, are you guys hearing me King Kai said.

King Kai is that you
Goku asked.
 
Yes it’s me, is everybody listening King Kai said.

Yes we’re all
hearing you Piccolo said.

Great, now listen King Kai said.

What now Vegeta
said.

A evil spirit took over Santa Claus’s 
body King Kai said.

Who is Santa Claus Elric and Yellow asked.

You mean you don't know Goten said.

We used to travel around planets, pretty sure we didn't have time for him Elric said.

Goku
explained quickly.

That sounds awesome Yellow said.

So an evil spirit took over
Elric said.

Yes King Kai said. I can do it, I’ve beaten a body stealing spirit
before Yellow said.

You got it out of me, after that I defeated him Elric said.


True Yellow said.

Alright Goku teleport us to Earth Elric said.

I’m coming too
Kakarott Vegeta said.

All Saiyans except Future Trunks, Tien, Piccolo and Yellow grabbed Goku.

Goku
teleported to Earth with the fighters that grabbed him.

Once on Earth Elric
used his senses to find Santa.

I found him, and he’s strong Elric said.

I’m
fighting him Vegeta said.

Depends, now let’s go Piccolo said.

Everyone flew
towards Santa.

Santa smiled when he saw the fighters, but then his face got
angry when he saw Yellow.

YOU Santa yelled.

W-wait, you’re the spirit from
before Yellow said.

I WILL TAKE MY REVENGE NOW Santa yelled.

A yellow light
emerged from Yellow that got a hold on Santa.

Santa growled.

A invisible blast
came throwing Yellow backwards.

He needs to be weakened, then I can drive him
out Yellow said.

We can do that Elric said, full of confidence.

How do you know
that Goku said.

I defeated him last time as a ssj1, I can turn ssj3 now Elric
said.

Tien rushed towards Santa and kicked him.

Santa punched Tien and kicked
him away.

KAMEHAMEHA Tien screamed.

IANTONIO Santa screamed.

Santa’s attack
overpowered, knocking Tien out.

Tien Elric said. Vegeta turned ssj1.

I’ll
defeat you, like I defeated Nappa Vegeta said.

Pff so easy Elric said.

Vegeta
rapidly kicked Santa and punched him to the ground.

FINAL FLASH Vegeta
screamed.

The attack hit Santa.

IANTONIO Santa screamed.

The attack hit Vegeta.


Vegeta punched Santa.

Santa punched Vegeta and kicked him away.

BIG BANG ATTACK
Vegeta screamed.

Santa dodged and kicked Vegeta, knocking him out.

So a ssj1
isn’t enough this time huh Elric said.

Piccolo removed his weights.

This better
be interesting Piccolo said.

Piccolo kicked Santa to the ground.

LIGHT GRENADE
Piccolo screamed.

Santa was hit. Santa kicked Piccolo.

Piccolo rapidly kicked
Santa.

SPECIAL BEAM CANNON Piccolo screamed.

Santa was hit.

Santa rapidly
punched Piccolo and kicked him down.

Santa kicked Piccolo, knocking him out.

Elric,
Potanto and Goku turned ssj3 at the same time.

Goten and Trunks fused.

Gotenks
appeared as a ssj3.

I will stop your evil ways, because I’m the hero of justice
Gotenks said.

Elric face palmed.

Gotenks kicked Santa and punched him away.

Hey
Goku, maybe we should fuse Elric said.

Maybe that would help Goku said.

They
saw Gotenks and Santa do an punching fest with Santa having the advantage.

Let
me try first then Potanto said.

Deal Elric said.

You just want to see his techniques Goku said.

KAMIKAZE GHOST ATTACK Gotenks
screamed.

The ghosts hit Santa.

Santa rapidly punched Gotenks and kicked him
down.

IANONIO Santa screamed.

The attack hit Gotenks.

BIG TREE CANNON Gotenks
screamed.

the attack hit Santa.

Santa rapidly punched Gotenks and kicked him,
knocking him out.

Potanto grunted and flew in the air.

What do you want to do, I’m on fire Santa said.


Well then. time to cool you down Potanto said.

IANTONIO Santa screamed.

WATARIA Potanto
screamed.

The water shielded Potanto from the attack.

The water surrounded
Santa. 

Santa flew through the water and kicked Potanto.

SUPER SUISHIO BLAST
Potanto screamed.

The attack hit Santa.

They did an punching fest.

Potanto shot
Ki blasts at Santa, most hitting.

Santa rapidly kicked Potanto and punched him
down.

DANKOTIO Potanto screamed.

The attack hit Santa.

Santa kicked Potanto,
knocking him out.

Ready Goku Elric said.

I won’t let you succeed Santa said.

DODON RAY
they heard someone scream.

The attack hit Santa.

Chiaotzu appeared.

Fuse now,
I’ll keep him busy Chiaotzu said.

Chiaotzu kicked him away.

Elric and Goku got
in position.

Santa kicked Chiaotzu.

FUSION HAH Goku and Elric yelled.

Santa
punched Chiaotzu, knocking him out.

Suddenly Santa felt a great power.

He
turned and saw the fusion.

Where are the 2 Saiyans, who are you Santa said.

I’m
neither of them, I’m Elku, the 1 who defeats evil like you Elku said.

Oh yeah,
let’s see about that Santa said.

Elku turned ssj2.

They did an punching fest with Elku
having the advantage.

Elku kicked Santa forward and then backwards.

Elku kicked
Santa upwards.

Elku rapidly punched Santa and kicked him to the ground.

E … J …
L … Elku began.

IANTONIO Santa screamed.

The attack hit Elku.

Elku appeared out
of the smoke unharmed.

KAMEHAMEHA Elku fired the combination attack.

The attack
hit Santa.

Santa fell on the ground.

Elku flew down and kicked Santa.

Now, go
Yellow Elku said.

A yellow light emerged form Yellow and separated Santa and
the evil spirit.

EJL KAMEHAMEHA Elku screamed.

The attack blasted the evil
spirit away.

Elku defused.

Good job Goku, and you too Yellow Elric said.

You too
Goku said.
 
Yeah, you both were amazing Yellow said.

The others woke up.

I need
to thank you all Santa said.

You don’t need to thank me Elric said.

Happy to
help Goku and Goten said.

Hmm Vegeta said.

Always ready to help Trunks said.

Me
too Tien and Chiaotzu said.

I did what I could Piccolo said.

Well I need to
bring presents for the children, but this is for you guys Santa said.

He gave
everyone something.

Santa flew away.

Let’s go back to Akaia and train further
for the tournament Elric said.

Goku teleported everyone to Akaia.

They all
started to train again.

Still, fusing doesn’t seem that fun anymore Elric said.

Author - merry Christmas

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appelmoesFTW : Okay, this Christmas special sure was funny, especially when the man transformed into a gas, and then he went to Santa's body lol. Appel, I'm sure you can improve your writing, so people can understand more the story. Instead of saying this:"So, this is Santa Claus huh the man said", you could say "This is Santa Claus, huh?" The mysterious man said in a deep voice. You should also put the quotations, so we can see a person talking. Make sure you put the comas (,), the exclamation marks (!), the question marks (?) etc... trust me, you'll definitely improve if you do that. Here, for example:"I’ll
defeat you, like I defeated Nappa" Vegeta laughed, kinda underestimates Santa Claus. Good Luck with your improvement! :3. (Oh and, I wasn't offensive in that post, it's just I'm trying to help you.)
appelmoesFTW : Okay, this Christmas special sure was funny, especially when the man transformed into a gas, and then he went to Santa's body lol. Appel, I'm sure you can improve your writing, so people can understand more the story. Instead of saying this:"So, this is Santa Claus huh the man said", you could say "This is Santa Claus, huh?" The mysterious man said in a deep voice. You should also put the quotations, so we can see a person talking. Make sure you put the comas (,), the exclamation marks (!), the question marks (?) etc... trust me, you'll definitely improve if you do that. Here, for example:"I’ll
defeat you, like I defeated Nappa" Vegeta laughed, kinda underestimates Santa Claus. Good Luck with your improvement! :3. (Oh and, I wasn't offensive in that post, it's just I'm trying to help you.)
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(edited by greenluigi on 12-26-14 06:48 AM)    

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greenluigi : alright i'll try, shouldn't be that hard.

  thanks for the tip


greenluigi : alright i'll try, shouldn't be that hard.

  thanks for the tip

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