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Dragon Ball Elniër chapter 2

 

11-06-14 05:58 AM
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 Chapter 2 the Akaians

1 month later, Akaia

It was late in the evening as king Flodo and queen Oceana were talking to the kionko king Diamond alongside queen Crystal and prince Obsidian.

They were talking about business when an Akaian entered.

Excuse me your majesty but I have information for the prince, the Elniër Orange has been sighted on planet Earth The Akaian said.

Oh no, if he gets his elniër form he will be unmatched in strength, we have to capture him now Obsidian said.

Shush, it’s nothing to worry about Flodo said.

His base form is stronger than frieza or cooler, In his elniër form he will be even stronger then the Kai's Obsidian said.

That could be a slight problem Diamond said.

Indeed, I will send my strongest Akaian to capture him Flodo said.

Who is this guy then Obsidian asked.

His name is Potanto and he will take Orange to your planet Obsidian said.

He will bring Oranges corpse to them Flodo thought.

Thanks a lot my friend Diamond said to him.

Meanwhile from a secret camera was a spying kionko.

So Orange is that powerful huh, then it’s time to get the 2 Akaians the Kink said.

A few hours later. A girl was walking in the city when she saw a friend of hers.

Hey Potanto she said. 

oh hey princess Shellana Potanto said.

What are you doing Shellana asked.

Your father said he had a mission for me Potanto answered.

Well then good luck on your mission Shellana said.

Thanks I will come back once it’s over Potanto said.

Shellana watched Potanto leave and continued walking.

Suddenly someone grabbed Shellana and punched her.

Shellana recovered and shot Ki blasts at him but it had no effect.

The guy then kicked Shellana in the back of her head, knocking her out.

He picked her up and flew to a teleport machine.

He used the machine to go to an uninhabited planet and threw Shellana in a cage.

Weak akaians the guy said.

Meanwhile Potanto opened the doors to the kings room.

You called for me majesty Potanto asked.

Yeah there is a problem Flodo said.

What is the problem Potanto asked.

There is a elniër with unbelievable strength on Earth, you need to kill him before he reaches his strongest form Flodo commanded.

Yes your majesty Potanto said as he flew towards the teleportation machine.

Potanto then used it to go to the new Saiyan planet.

A few hours later a akaian came to king Flodo.

Your majesty we have found out something important the Akaian said.

What is it said Flodo.

Princess Shellana has been kidnapped by someone way stronger then her the Akaian said.

WHAT, HOW IS THAT POSSIBLE Flodo screamed.

W-we don’t know your majesty the Akaian said.

DO YOU HAVE ANY IDEA HOW BIG YOU GUYS ARE IN TROUBLE, HOW CAN YOU LOSE THE ONE YOU WHERE SUPPOSED TO GUARD Flodo said.

S-sorry your majesty we will start a search right now the Akaian said.

Do it then and kill the kidnapper, you know what will happen if you fail on this search don’t you Flodo said.

Yes majesty the akaian said as he ran off.

Flodo sat back, this could be huge trouble for Akaia, Obsidian better not fail me on this one Flodo thought.

authors note sorry if this seems crappy.

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 Chapter 2 the Akaians

1 month later, Akaia

It was late in the evening as king Flodo and queen Oceana were talking to the kionko king Diamond alongside queen Crystal and prince Obsidian.

They were talking about business when an Akaian entered.

Excuse me your majesty but I have information for the prince, the Elniër Orange has been sighted on planet Earth The Akaian said.

Oh no, if he gets his elniër form he will be unmatched in strength, we have to capture him now Obsidian said.

Shush, it’s nothing to worry about Flodo said.

His base form is stronger than frieza or cooler, In his elniër form he will be even stronger then the Kai's Obsidian said.

That could be a slight problem Diamond said.

Indeed, I will send my strongest Akaian to capture him Flodo said.

Who is this guy then Obsidian asked.

His name is Potanto and he will take Orange to your planet Obsidian said.

He will bring Oranges corpse to them Flodo thought.

Thanks a lot my friend Diamond said to him.

Meanwhile from a secret camera was a spying kionko.

So Orange is that powerful huh, then it’s time to get the 2 Akaians the Kink said.

A few hours later. A girl was walking in the city when she saw a friend of hers.

Hey Potanto she said. 

oh hey princess Shellana Potanto said.

What are you doing Shellana asked.

Your father said he had a mission for me Potanto answered.

Well then good luck on your mission Shellana said.

Thanks I will come back once it’s over Potanto said.

Shellana watched Potanto leave and continued walking.

Suddenly someone grabbed Shellana and punched her.

Shellana recovered and shot Ki blasts at him but it had no effect.

The guy then kicked Shellana in the back of her head, knocking her out.

He picked her up and flew to a teleport machine.

He used the machine to go to an uninhabited planet and threw Shellana in a cage.

Weak akaians the guy said.

Meanwhile Potanto opened the doors to the kings room.

You called for me majesty Potanto asked.

Yeah there is a problem Flodo said.

What is the problem Potanto asked.

There is a elniër with unbelievable strength on Earth, you need to kill him before he reaches his strongest form Flodo commanded.

Yes your majesty Potanto said as he flew towards the teleportation machine.

Potanto then used it to go to the new Saiyan planet.

A few hours later a akaian came to king Flodo.

Your majesty we have found out something important the Akaian said.

What is it said Flodo.

Princess Shellana has been kidnapped by someone way stronger then her the Akaian said.

WHAT, HOW IS THAT POSSIBLE Flodo screamed.

W-we don’t know your majesty the Akaian said.

DO YOU HAVE ANY IDEA HOW BIG YOU GUYS ARE IN TROUBLE, HOW CAN YOU LOSE THE ONE YOU WHERE SUPPOSED TO GUARD Flodo said.

S-sorry your majesty we will start a search right now the Akaian said.

Do it then and kill the kidnapper, you know what will happen if you fail on this search don’t you Flodo said.

Yes majesty the akaian said as he ran off.

Flodo sat back, this could be huge trouble for Akaia, Obsidian better not fail me on this one Flodo thought.

authors note sorry if this seems crappy.

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Great chapter dude!

It's just awesome that you put my own race, the Akaians here! I love that! 

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Great chapter dude!

It's just awesome that you put my own race, the Akaians here! I love that! 

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imamonster : yeah I've finally learned how to do it. It seemed really cool to have other guys races in it as well
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