The last ëlnier  
Prologue
Elniër world
It was a good morning. A 4 year old was playing in his garden excited about having learned how to fly.
 
His father was looking with a smile and his mother was feeding a baby.

the boys father - *stands up* he's here. *scared* 

The boys mother - *eyes widen* Orange get over here.

Orange - *walks over to his mother* what is it mommy?

the boys mother - Take Yellow and run now.

Orange - *nods* *takes the baby* bye daddy bye mommy. *flies off.*

A guy with saiyan armour arrived
 
 ??? - where are the kids Brown.

the boys father - What kids are you talking about. 

??? - Don’t toy with me Grey. 

Grey - Why would I Obsidian?

Obsidian - *sighs* *punches a hole in Brown.*
 
Grey - BROWN NO  *rushes towards Obsidian.*

Obsidian *throws a Ki wave at Grey destroying all his cells.*
 
Obsidian - Don’t worry Grey I will find your kids and I will use them so that I can rule my own planet.

Meanwhile

Orange - *sees a Yardrat* excuse me sir, but can you take us to your planet? 

the Yardrat - sure. *teleports them to yardrat.*

They would now roam the universe.

This is awesome appelmoes, I already told you a tip but it's still great for a new story.

Anyway, I really loved how it played out in typical Super hero fashion, the main character's parents dies.


greenluigi : You might wanna check this out, it's just the prologue.

Thanks imamonster

yeah I know of that clichÈ but I didn't really have anything else in mind for them so I did this

appelmoesFTW : I actually like it, it's not even a cliche. It's just really cool dude! I really like it.

Actually in almost every superhero movie, the hero has dead parents