The quest of kirb: *kirbmanboggle signs up for vizzed*
kirbmanboggle : hey anybody here?
*a shadowy figure appears becoming more clear with each step*  
imamonster : hey we got a serious problem and we need a newbie kirbmanboggle : thats a little heavy to start i just got this job dude
imamonster : well suck it up because this is happening
kirbmanboggle : well what is it
imamonster : well...we need you to take down jigsaw
kirbmanboggle : but he's an admin i'm just a newb
imamonster : you can do it! you need to climb the ranks and get equipment and make ally's with the few remaining survivor's,and we'll need you to meet our boss david (davideo7)
*at davideo's hidout*
david:ahh so your the new guy i'm sure monster filled you in on whats going on,but i'll tell you how it happened
*flashbacks start*
kirbmanboggle : i though that only happened in cartoons
david:shut up and listen
david:it all happened when i hired jigsaw as my right hand man
JigSaw : david i still feel...underapreciated
david:but you have so much power already
JigSaw : but i want more*jigsaw shoots david in the gut*
*everyone gasps then jigsaw points at davids head*
JigSaw : nobody move i want ownership,NOW!  or he dies
leggy:it has to be done to save his life
*high ranks signs ownership*
david:no...*falls to the ground*
leggy:get him to a doctor!
*flashback ends*
kirbmanboggle : woah dude that pretty bad
david:well no sh-
*kirbmanboggle points at the pg only sign*
david:right sorry now take this wooden sword and start your journey
imamonster : wait! can i join you
*kirby smirks*course man
narrator:as kirb's journey starts he already made a new friend but he'll need much more than that to take down jigsaw

TO BE CONTINUED...

so guys how did you like my first chapter do you think i should make more?