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So I was trying my best to create a spoken word poem rather than my normal stuff I write and this is what came of it. Any critics wanna tell me how bad it is and what I can do better? xD


">https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=aZsHshHlJEs&list=UUaLCSjdpsz5hUQq5R3tK2zg' frameborder='0'>


Also If I can't code the youtube thing correctly here is a link to the video
( https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=aZsHshHlJEs&list=UUaLCSjdpsz5hUQq5R3tK2zg )
So I was trying my best to create a spoken word poem rather than my normal stuff I write and this is what came of it. Any critics wanna tell me how bad it is and what I can do better? xD


">https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=aZsHshHlJEs&list=UUaLCSjdpsz5hUQq5R3tK2zg' frameborder='0'>


Also If I can't code the youtube thing correctly here is a link to the video
( https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=aZsHshHlJEs&list=UUaLCSjdpsz5hUQq5R3tK2zg )
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