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The New Vizzed: Chapter One

 

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Beginnings

"Come one User,you can do better than that." - A white cat like figure said, encouraging his fellow PSI user.
"Easy for you to say Ginger," - User said, picking himself up. "You have always been a prodigy for these types of things."
"But It's easy, just try to do it like I do" - Gingercream said. "PSI Shield!" In a minute, his entire body was covered by blue triangles, protecting him.
"See? It's easy. Now, you try it!" - Gingercream said, lowering the shield around him.
"Alright, seems easy enough..." - User said. He closed his eyes, and started thinking, reaching inside himself, pulling the PSI out. "PSI Shield!". He started glowing a bit, with a few purple hexagons forming around him.
"You're doing it User! Don't stop!" - Gingercream shouted, encouraging him.
User didn't stop, he was going all out. The hexagons forming around his body were becoming bigger, and eventually filled an entire shield around it.
"User! You did! That's amazing!" - Gingercream shouted excitedly, hopping for joy.
User opened his eyes, and looked around in awe. He had done it, his first successful PSI since coming to this strange place.
"I-I... I did it. You could say it's now PS-Easy no?" - User said, chuckling at his own bad joke. The shield was now deforming, as he was losing his focus.
Gingercream let out a small groan at his friend's bad sense of humor.

TIME FOR TRAINING IS NOW OVER

Both Ginger and User had heard the booming voice. It was an automatic message, meaning that, well, training time was over. It was now time for a small break, which they used to sit down on a nearby bench and started chatting up.
"So, User, do you remember anything before you came here?" - Ginger said, sitting down.
"Not really. I don't think I lived a very interesting life, I barely remember it. All I remember is that I stumbled upon a Particle Accelerator, I don't even remember how, and next thing I knew, I was here. Vizzed, you said it was called?" - User explained, sitting down next to his cat-like friend.
"Vizzed, yup. New town, I heard it was. Whoever runs this place is one mysterious fellow, every one of his announcements is computer-generated and played through one of the many microphones around town." - Ginger replied.
"Really? Do you think that the one controlling all of this could be, you know, evil?" - User said.
"What? Of course not! Could an evil person make something like this?" - Gingercream said, pointing around the town.
User had to admit, it was a very nice town, there were houses, which were all unique and full of live, and not one street was without a food supply, which seemed to regenerate during the night.
"Still, he has commands, and he controls everything. Even us! That seems a bit... evil to me." - User said, over exaggerating the situation.
"User, you are over thinking this." - Ginger said, trying to calm his jumpy friend down.

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Monster was walking a lonesome trail. He had abandoned his group, they were getting in his way. Could they just not understand that he could do everything by himself?
Either way, the sun was up, and was blazing down on him. The only thing he had to comfort him was the light. He could bend it, and he used it so that he could see where to go. He needed to get to the nearest town, just to stock up on supplies. He had some gold coins from doing some jobs in the last town he visited, which had gained him a good amount of them.
"Well, what do we have here?" - A feminine voice spoke up from behind Monster.
He instantly turned back, readying for a fight, before calming down.
"Oh, it's only a girl" - Monster said shyly, whilst blushing.
"Oh, did I make you nervous? Oh, I'm so sorry" - The girl said, sarcastically, before laughing.
"W-What's so funny?" - Monster asked the new girl in front of him.
"Oh, nothing. Just the fact that I can make you blush just by saying hi to you" - The girl said.
"Y-You... never said hi" - Monster said awkwardly.
"Oh? Didn't I? Well, Hello. I am Suxy. And this here is my kitten, Frostbite." - Suxy said. After hearing it's name, Frostbite came out of her bag, and started purring near Suxy's legs.
"N-Nice kitty..." - Monster said, turning his head down.
"Why, thank you. Now, could I ask for one, small favor?" - Suxy said while flirting, approaching Monster.
"O-Of course. W-What would that be?" - Monster said putting up a crooked, embarrassed smile.
Suxy quickly went behind him, and he felt something cold as well. Suxy had been making an icy knife behind his back, and had put it near his throat.
"Give me everything you have and don't make a big fuss out of this, it's just business" - Suxy said, her voice changing from a sweet one to a threatening. voice

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"Vei, come here, I need to talk to you" - Verma said, sitting down on one of the now-empty bar stools.
Vei looked at her with a cold stare, before hovering towards her.
"What do you want?" - Vei asked.
Verma put her feet on top of the bar table. "One beer." She told the bartender, who quickly got it for her.
"I want to know when I am going to get payed" - Verma asked her hovering "boss"
"When they decide to pay us" - Vei responded.
"But who is going to pay us? I'm only doing this job for the money, I need to know who and how I am going to get payed." - Verma said before taking a sip of her beer.
Vei didn't appear to like this, as he shot a lighting bolt straight to the beer can, knocking it out of her hands.
"Hey, I was drinking that." - Verma said shocked. She got up and looked straight into his eyes, hers flaring with anger.
"What? Are you trying to pick a fight? Don't be silly. Now let's go" - Vei told her, walking out of the bar.
With a small sigh, Verma followed him outside.
"Where are we going?" - She asked the mysterious fellow in front of her.
"Vizzed" - Was the only thing Vei said to her.
After a long time of walking and silence, Verma decided she wanted to learn more about the dark person who had hired her.
"So, care to tell me about yourself?" - She asked him
Vei looked at her for a moment, then back at the road without answer the question.
"Ugh. What about the people that hired me?" - She tried asking another question.
"We hired you for a special task. That's all you need to know." - Vei told her.
"We? You say it as if there were more of you" - Verma asked, intrigued.
"Yes. Let's just say that we're a... company" - Vei said, struggling to find the last word.
Verma settled with that answer, knowing full well that she wasn't going to get any other information from him.

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Zander kept walking, tired and hungry. He knew he had to keep going, as he would meet one person what would change his life. Well, that's what he had dreamt of. This whole thing was still a bit new to him, even after 3 years of it. He was a smart person, but he couldn't make out how or why he was granted the power he now had. He wasn't anything out of the ordinary, or special.
He looked up. The road was still long. He could make out a person, growing bigger. He walked towards it, before realizing it wasn't growing bigger, if not running towards him.
"Blood Spear!" - A male voice boomed out. In a second, Zander saw something moving quickly towards him. He had barely any time to react.
"I hope this still works" - He said to no-one. He quickly start to meditate while standing still on the street. He had done this some other times before, but he still didn't have the hang of it. He opened his eyes in fear.
Nothing. No sound, no movement, the object now standing frozen in time in front of his face.
"Whoa, one more second and I would have been dead" - Zander said thinking out loud.
He studied the object closely, and soon found out it was "living" in a sense. It took him but a second to realize it was pure blood.
"Having fun there?" - The male voice called out again, catching Zander by surprise. He turned back, and saw another person, around his age and size.
"Hey, you look familiar. Have we met before?" - Zander asked the mysterious character.
"I'm not sure. You seem to have been stalking me for a while. A reason why?" - The teen said.
"Stalking you? I have done no such thing!" - Zander responded.
"Well, sure looked like it." - The guy said, now mere inches away from him.
"Tell me, how did you do this?" - The guy said, intrigued by the flooding blood.
"What do you mean?" - Zander asked befuddled.
"Well, you seemed to have stopped my blood in mid air. How does one achieve such a thing?" - He asked.
"I have the ability to control time. Stop and slow it down at least." - Zander said. "I'm assuming you have the ability to control blood, uh..."
"Blackthorne. My name is Blackthorne. And yes, well, only my blood." - The now named Blackthorne said.
"This is your blood? Don't you get dizzy, or sick?" - Zander asked him
"Not at all. I did learning it, but as a Pro Blood Magic User, I can control the effects, none of that know." - Blackthorne answered.
"So, where are you going?" - Zander asked him curiously.
"Vizzed. I heard it was a nice town to start a new life. Just what I need at this point." - Blackthorne said, before walking away. Zander decided it might be a good idea to follow him.
"Hey, wait up!" - Zander shouted, catching up to him.

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"Stupid river" - Cerik said to himself. He had reached a fork in the road not a big while ago, and was now stuck near a river-like thing. It stretched out for miles it seemed, but it was the only way to get to his destination.
"Ugh, why can't there just be a big bridge to help me cross" - Cerik said angrily at the sky.
"Do you need help?" - a big voice called out behind him.
Cerik looked back, and stared in awe. Behind him stood a giant, at least 7 feet tall, looking down on him.
"H-Help? W-What kind of help?" - Cerik asked him nervously.
"Trying to cross the river. You seemed to be shouting angrily at it." - The giant asked him, pointing towards the river.
"Oh, that? It's just I'm trying to get somewhere, and this stupid water is in the way." - Cerik complained.
"Well, maybe I can help you. I can control the water to make a path to help you win." - The giant told him.
"Would you really do that? I've never met someone who actually helped me before" - Cerik said.
"Well, I would be glad to do so. If you would like me to" - The giant responded.
Cerik knew an opportunity like this would not come this easy later on, and decided to take it.
"Alright, I would really enjoy it" - Cerik told the giant.
"Very well, stand back." - The giant said, moving towards the river.
He put his arms in the air, and little by little the water starting moving, each time more and more violently. In a minute, there was a path big enough for both of them to cross in between the water.
"Well, what are you waiting for? Come along now!" - The giant said, his arms still in the air.
Cerik was shocked, he had never seen something like that before. He stood there befuddled by what just happened.
"Huh? Oh, yeah. Going" - He said after dozing off for a second. He started running off towards the path in the river, and stopped near the Giant.
They started walking through the path, that became stretched out when they walked.
"Hey, I don't know your name. Care to tell me it?" - Cerik asked.
"Jules. Saint Jules. Yours?" - The now named Jules responded and asked.
"Name's Cerik" - He told him, before putting on some headphones as they walked.

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"Pika?" - Saph asked the stranger in front of her.
"Oh my, that's the cutest thing ever! Where did you come from?" - Kitty said, gushing over the Pikachu in front of her. She decided to pet it, and it quickly returned the affection.
"Saph? Saph, where are you?" - A voice called out.
"Pika?" - Saph asked, before running away.
"Wait! Come back!" - Kitty said running after her. The pikachu was too fast, so she had to teleport.
"Well, here goes nothing" - She thought out loud. She pictured the forest where they were, and pinpointed where the Pikachu now was. She started disappearing, and appeared in another place instantly.
"AH!" - The same voice shouted out, causing Kitty to fall when she appeared.
"Oh my, I'm so sorry, let me help you up" - He said, holding a hand forwards.
"Thanks" - Kitty told him. She grabbed her hand while he pushed, and in a second she was up again. She starting dusting herself off making sure she was clean.
"Oh wow, so sorry for startling you like that. You just sort of frightened me. How did you appear out of nowhere like that?" - He said astonished.
"Oh that? It's nothing. Just something I have been able to do for quite some time. Haven't been able to master it quite yet, but this time it turned out alright." - Kitty said.
"You got teleportation? That's so amazing!" - He said gushing over her.
"Not the only thing I have." - Kitty started saying.
Beep!
"Oh, that must be my watch. I must have set it for some reason..." - Kitty said, before getting frightened after seeing it.
"OH NO! I have to leave, like now. Uh, it was nice meeting you and stuff, but I really have to go." - Kitty said before flying away at supersonic speed towards the north, becoming invisible due to the trees.-
"Well, Saph, we must get going. We aren't going to get to Vizzed by standing here in awe" - The guy told Saph who was gnawing on a small blue berry.
"Pika!" - She said and started climbing on top of his shoulder, before sitting down on his head.

"Well, what do we have here? Citadel, you were told to dispose of that girl, not let her fly away." - A voice said behind them, after a while of walking.
"Ah, how are you doing today Star? Still being a huge pain in the-" - Citadel started talking, before stopping after seeing her face.
"Don't you dare finish that. You were supposed to kill that Kitty girl. You failed your duty." - Star said angrily.
"Don't tell me how to do my job. I don't tell you how to do yours" - Citadel told her walking away.
"well, considering we are partners now, I do believe I can." - Star told him, catching up.
Saph was scared. She had always been scared of Mean Girl. She was always mistreating her trainer and saying bad things to here. When she was around she hid inside her trainer's bag.
"You still can't. We're equals now. You can't boss me around." - Citadel told her trying to get away.
"Whatever. We need to get to Vizzed anyways. No time to bicker with an idiot like you" - Star responded.
"You're the idiot. You're right, getting to Vizzed is our top priority right now" - Citadel told her.

[End Of Chapter 1]

So yeah, first chapter. Sorry it took so long guys. Any and all feedback would be helpful as long as it's not hurtful or mean.

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Beginnings

"Come one User,you can do better than that." - A white cat like figure said, encouraging his fellow PSI user.
"Easy for you to say Ginger," - User said, picking himself up. "You have always been a prodigy for these types of things."
"But It's easy, just try to do it like I do" - Gingercream said. "PSI Shield!" In a minute, his entire body was covered by blue triangles, protecting him.
"See? It's easy. Now, you try it!" - Gingercream said, lowering the shield around him.
"Alright, seems easy enough..." - User said. He closed his eyes, and started thinking, reaching inside himself, pulling the PSI out. "PSI Shield!". He started glowing a bit, with a few purple hexagons forming around him.
"You're doing it User! Don't stop!" - Gingercream shouted, encouraging him.
User didn't stop, he was going all out. The hexagons forming around his body were becoming bigger, and eventually filled an entire shield around it.
"User! You did! That's amazing!" - Gingercream shouted excitedly, hopping for joy.
User opened his eyes, and looked around in awe. He had done it, his first successful PSI since coming to this strange place.
"I-I... I did it. You could say it's now PS-Easy no?" - User said, chuckling at his own bad joke. The shield was now deforming, as he was losing his focus.
Gingercream let out a small groan at his friend's bad sense of humor.

TIME FOR TRAINING IS NOW OVER

Both Ginger and User had heard the booming voice. It was an automatic message, meaning that, well, training time was over. It was now time for a small break, which they used to sit down on a nearby bench and started chatting up.
"So, User, do you remember anything before you came here?" - Ginger said, sitting down.
"Not really. I don't think I lived a very interesting life, I barely remember it. All I remember is that I stumbled upon a Particle Accelerator, I don't even remember how, and next thing I knew, I was here. Vizzed, you said it was called?" - User explained, sitting down next to his cat-like friend.
"Vizzed, yup. New town, I heard it was. Whoever runs this place is one mysterious fellow, every one of his announcements is computer-generated and played through one of the many microphones around town." - Ginger replied.
"Really? Do you think that the one controlling all of this could be, you know, evil?" - User said.
"What? Of course not! Could an evil person make something like this?" - Gingercream said, pointing around the town.
User had to admit, it was a very nice town, there were houses, which were all unique and full of live, and not one street was without a food supply, which seemed to regenerate during the night.
"Still, he has commands, and he controls everything. Even us! That seems a bit... evil to me." - User said, over exaggerating the situation.
"User, you are over thinking this." - Ginger said, trying to calm his jumpy friend down.

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Monster was walking a lonesome trail. He had abandoned his group, they were getting in his way. Could they just not understand that he could do everything by himself?
Either way, the sun was up, and was blazing down on him. The only thing he had to comfort him was the light. He could bend it, and he used it so that he could see where to go. He needed to get to the nearest town, just to stock up on supplies. He had some gold coins from doing some jobs in the last town he visited, which had gained him a good amount of them.
"Well, what do we have here?" - A feminine voice spoke up from behind Monster.
He instantly turned back, readying for a fight, before calming down.
"Oh, it's only a girl" - Monster said shyly, whilst blushing.
"Oh, did I make you nervous? Oh, I'm so sorry" - The girl said, sarcastically, before laughing.
"W-What's so funny?" - Monster asked the new girl in front of him.
"Oh, nothing. Just the fact that I can make you blush just by saying hi to you" - The girl said.
"Y-You... never said hi" - Monster said awkwardly.
"Oh? Didn't I? Well, Hello. I am Suxy. And this here is my kitten, Frostbite." - Suxy said. After hearing it's name, Frostbite came out of her bag, and started purring near Suxy's legs.
"N-Nice kitty..." - Monster said, turning his head down.
"Why, thank you. Now, could I ask for one, small favor?" - Suxy said while flirting, approaching Monster.
"O-Of course. W-What would that be?" - Monster said putting up a crooked, embarrassed smile.
Suxy quickly went behind him, and he felt something cold as well. Suxy had been making an icy knife behind his back, and had put it near his throat.
"Give me everything you have and don't make a big fuss out of this, it's just business" - Suxy said, her voice changing from a sweet one to a threatening. voice

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"Vei, come here, I need to talk to you" - Verma said, sitting down on one of the now-empty bar stools.
Vei looked at her with a cold stare, before hovering towards her.
"What do you want?" - Vei asked.
Verma put her feet on top of the bar table. "One beer." She told the bartender, who quickly got it for her.
"I want to know when I am going to get payed" - Verma asked her hovering "boss"
"When they decide to pay us" - Vei responded.
"But who is going to pay us? I'm only doing this job for the money, I need to know who and how I am going to get payed." - Verma said before taking a sip of her beer.
Vei didn't appear to like this, as he shot a lighting bolt straight to the beer can, knocking it out of her hands.
"Hey, I was drinking that." - Verma said shocked. She got up and looked straight into his eyes, hers flaring with anger.
"What? Are you trying to pick a fight? Don't be silly. Now let's go" - Vei told her, walking out of the bar.
With a small sigh, Verma followed him outside.
"Where are we going?" - She asked the mysterious fellow in front of her.
"Vizzed" - Was the only thing Vei said to her.
After a long time of walking and silence, Verma decided she wanted to learn more about the dark person who had hired her.
"So, care to tell me about yourself?" - She asked him
Vei looked at her for a moment, then back at the road without answer the question.
"Ugh. What about the people that hired me?" - She tried asking another question.
"We hired you for a special task. That's all you need to know." - Vei told her.
"We? You say it as if there were more of you" - Verma asked, intrigued.
"Yes. Let's just say that we're a... company" - Vei said, struggling to find the last word.
Verma settled with that answer, knowing full well that she wasn't going to get any other information from him.

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Zander kept walking, tired and hungry. He knew he had to keep going, as he would meet one person what would change his life. Well, that's what he had dreamt of. This whole thing was still a bit new to him, even after 3 years of it. He was a smart person, but he couldn't make out how or why he was granted the power he now had. He wasn't anything out of the ordinary, or special.
He looked up. The road was still long. He could make out a person, growing bigger. He walked towards it, before realizing it wasn't growing bigger, if not running towards him.
"Blood Spear!" - A male voice boomed out. In a second, Zander saw something moving quickly towards him. He had barely any time to react.
"I hope this still works" - He said to no-one. He quickly start to meditate while standing still on the street. He had done this some other times before, but he still didn't have the hang of it. He opened his eyes in fear.
Nothing. No sound, no movement, the object now standing frozen in time in front of his face.
"Whoa, one more second and I would have been dead" - Zander said thinking out loud.
He studied the object closely, and soon found out it was "living" in a sense. It took him but a second to realize it was pure blood.
"Having fun there?" - The male voice called out again, catching Zander by surprise. He turned back, and saw another person, around his age and size.
"Hey, you look familiar. Have we met before?" - Zander asked the mysterious character.
"I'm not sure. You seem to have been stalking me for a while. A reason why?" - The teen said.
"Stalking you? I have done no such thing!" - Zander responded.
"Well, sure looked like it." - The guy said, now mere inches away from him.
"Tell me, how did you do this?" - The guy said, intrigued by the flooding blood.
"What do you mean?" - Zander asked befuddled.
"Well, you seemed to have stopped my blood in mid air. How does one achieve such a thing?" - He asked.
"I have the ability to control time. Stop and slow it down at least." - Zander said. "I'm assuming you have the ability to control blood, uh..."
"Blackthorne. My name is Blackthorne. And yes, well, only my blood." - The now named Blackthorne said.
"This is your blood? Don't you get dizzy, or sick?" - Zander asked him
"Not at all. I did learning it, but as a Pro Blood Magic User, I can control the effects, none of that know." - Blackthorne answered.
"So, where are you going?" - Zander asked him curiously.
"Vizzed. I heard it was a nice town to start a new life. Just what I need at this point." - Blackthorne said, before walking away. Zander decided it might be a good idea to follow him.
"Hey, wait up!" - Zander shouted, catching up to him.

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"Stupid river" - Cerik said to himself. He had reached a fork in the road not a big while ago, and was now stuck near a river-like thing. It stretched out for miles it seemed, but it was the only way to get to his destination.
"Ugh, why can't there just be a big bridge to help me cross" - Cerik said angrily at the sky.
"Do you need help?" - a big voice called out behind him.
Cerik looked back, and stared in awe. Behind him stood a giant, at least 7 feet tall, looking down on him.
"H-Help? W-What kind of help?" - Cerik asked him nervously.
"Trying to cross the river. You seemed to be shouting angrily at it." - The giant asked him, pointing towards the river.
"Oh, that? It's just I'm trying to get somewhere, and this stupid water is in the way." - Cerik complained.
"Well, maybe I can help you. I can control the water to make a path to help you win." - The giant told him.
"Would you really do that? I've never met someone who actually helped me before" - Cerik said.
"Well, I would be glad to do so. If you would like me to" - The giant responded.
Cerik knew an opportunity like this would not come this easy later on, and decided to take it.
"Alright, I would really enjoy it" - Cerik told the giant.
"Very well, stand back." - The giant said, moving towards the river.
He put his arms in the air, and little by little the water starting moving, each time more and more violently. In a minute, there was a path big enough for both of them to cross in between the water.
"Well, what are you waiting for? Come along now!" - The giant said, his arms still in the air.
Cerik was shocked, he had never seen something like that before. He stood there befuddled by what just happened.
"Huh? Oh, yeah. Going" - He said after dozing off for a second. He started running off towards the path in the river, and stopped near the Giant.
They started walking through the path, that became stretched out when they walked.
"Hey, I don't know your name. Care to tell me it?" - Cerik asked.
"Jules. Saint Jules. Yours?" - The now named Jules responded and asked.
"Name's Cerik" - He told him, before putting on some headphones as they walked.

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"Pika?" - Saph asked the stranger in front of her.
"Oh my, that's the cutest thing ever! Where did you come from?" - Kitty said, gushing over the Pikachu in front of her. She decided to pet it, and it quickly returned the affection.
"Saph? Saph, where are you?" - A voice called out.
"Pika?" - Saph asked, before running away.
"Wait! Come back!" - Kitty said running after her. The pikachu was too fast, so she had to teleport.
"Well, here goes nothing" - She thought out loud. She pictured the forest where they were, and pinpointed where the Pikachu now was. She started disappearing, and appeared in another place instantly.
"AH!" - The same voice shouted out, causing Kitty to fall when she appeared.
"Oh my, I'm so sorry, let me help you up" - He said, holding a hand forwards.
"Thanks" - Kitty told him. She grabbed her hand while he pushed, and in a second she was up again. She starting dusting herself off making sure she was clean.
"Oh wow, so sorry for startling you like that. You just sort of frightened me. How did you appear out of nowhere like that?" - He said astonished.
"Oh that? It's nothing. Just something I have been able to do for quite some time. Haven't been able to master it quite yet, but this time it turned out alright." - Kitty said.
"You got teleportation? That's so amazing!" - He said gushing over her.
"Not the only thing I have." - Kitty started saying.
Beep!
"Oh, that must be my watch. I must have set it for some reason..." - Kitty said, before getting frightened after seeing it.
"OH NO! I have to leave, like now. Uh, it was nice meeting you and stuff, but I really have to go." - Kitty said before flying away at supersonic speed towards the north, becoming invisible due to the trees.-
"Well, Saph, we must get going. We aren't going to get to Vizzed by standing here in awe" - The guy told Saph who was gnawing on a small blue berry.
"Pika!" - She said and started climbing on top of his shoulder, before sitting down on his head.

"Well, what do we have here? Citadel, you were told to dispose of that girl, not let her fly away." - A voice said behind them, after a while of walking.
"Ah, how are you doing today Star? Still being a huge pain in the-" - Citadel started talking, before stopping after seeing her face.
"Don't you dare finish that. You were supposed to kill that Kitty girl. You failed your duty." - Star said angrily.
"Don't tell me how to do my job. I don't tell you how to do yours" - Citadel told her walking away.
"well, considering we are partners now, I do believe I can." - Star told him, catching up.
Saph was scared. She had always been scared of Mean Girl. She was always mistreating her trainer and saying bad things to here. When she was around she hid inside her trainer's bag.
"You still can't. We're equals now. You can't boss me around." - Citadel told her trying to get away.
"Whatever. We need to get to Vizzed anyways. No time to bicker with an idiot like you" - Star responded.
"You're the idiot. You're right, getting to Vizzed is our top priority right now" - Citadel told her.

[End Of Chapter 1]

So yeah, first chapter. Sorry it took so long guys. Any and all feedback would be helpful as long as it's not hurtful or mean.

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Wow, this is awesome man! I started to think that you forgot about the story since you didn't tell anything after you shut down your 'asking for story persons thread' but I'm glad you have made this. It came out wonderful and I think every character is being described in a good way.
Wow, this is awesome man! I started to think that you forgot about the story since you didn't tell anything after you shut down your 'asking for story persons thread' but I'm glad you have made this. It came out wonderful and I think every character is being described in a good way.
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