Techno Twinswords is my MegaMan fancharacter I created. Over the course of a year and a half, I've thought up a backstory and actual story that i'm making a webcomic of, which will simply be called MegaMan Techno. (I, II, III, IV, and V)

Backstory:

In a small village in a secluded valley, not far from Arcadia's crystal caverns, a young boy named Techno was born. Over the years, he studied hard and became a smart, strong young man. When he was 10 years old, Dr. Wily came barreling in with his army of robots, looking for a crystal of great power and energy. He tore through the village, killing Techno's parents and his little sister in the process. Techno held off what he could of Wily's army with his two swords, but in the end, Techno himself barely survived- he lost his left arm, his right eye, and most of his skin was burned, cut, and brused into oblivion. Techno, the only survivor, left the ruins of his village, walking northward in despair. He wished to die peacefully, but as he laid down in a snowfield, PharaohMan found him and took him to Dr. Cossack's Citadel, where Techno explained everything that happened to him. (This takes place between Mega Man 3 and 4)

Cossack, with Techno's consent, transformed Techno into a half-robot, half- organic fighting machine. He gave his left arm an extremely powerful MegaBuster- the strongest on Arcadia- fitted his skil with matallic armor, and gave him a robotic left eye. Techno traiined his ability to the fullest against Cossack's robots, and eventually left in search for revenge against Dr. Wily.

Eventually, Techno found himself intertwined with the events of MegaMan...

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That's the backstory. Fast forward 6500 years, to a time long after the Wily wars, the maverick wars, and the elf wars, to a time where Arcadia is being assaulted by an extremely powerful being called Multicore. Only one person can stop it and save the planet... The rumored "protector of Arcadia-" Techno Fulmine Twinswords.

During the MegaMan Techno timeline, he battles enemies old and new, while dealing with his own, internal problams. Some in the world see Techno as a savior, a new MegaMan, other see him as a devil- one who will bring war to the planet once again. Can Techno survive against all his enemies, while simultaneously fending off those who fear and despise him and dealing with his own problems?

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I spent a while developing this. I'm still finalizing the design of him, but the comic will be pretty dang sweet with what I have in mind. It'll be a sprite comic, thought i'm not sure that to edit Techno from...

Anyway, what do you think of this? I'd like some input on how to improve it if needed. It's not 100% complete, if so.

Thanks,
-SC