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Tales of Convoluted Origins - Season One: Episode Three
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NON-SPAMMY REPLY OR NO REPLY AT ALL BECAUSE I HAVE OFFICIALLY HAD IT. Tales of Convoluted Origins - Season One: Episode Three: THE POWERLESS AVATAR NintendoFanKimmy and Greenluigi stood in front of the self-proclaimed "Cloaked Bundle of Pure Fabulous" in disbelief. "No way." Remarked Kimmy. "There's no way anyone could ever be THAT fabulous..." Green nodded in agreement. "Yep. You'd better be careful, Claudio. The cops might bust you or perhaps even crack you on the nut for being THAT fabulous. I'm amazed. You're simply dashing!" The tall blond facing the cousins made a soft laugh. "I'm flattered." Green walked up to him and looked up. "Bud. It's called sarcasm." Claudio gasped and took a step backward. "Y-you don't think I'm fabulous? I-I..." He began to sniffle. "I am.. deeply offended. H-how could anyone..." He buried his supposedly weeping face into his hands and began to cry. NintendoFanKimmy and Greenluigi stared at each other. No comment. "Uh, Kimmy?" Green whispered, his hand over his mouth. "What the hell is wrong with this guy?" Kimmy shrugged. "Beats me. If you ask me, I'd say he's faking it." Claudio made an even louder gasp. "Oh, my God! First, you don't think I'm fabulous, and next you actually accuse me of faking?" He began to cry even harder and buried his face into his hands once again. Kimmy rolled her eyes and began to walk away with Green. "Let's move our camp somewhere else." Suddenly, Mr. Fabulous ran over to the duo and laughed. "Oh, don't worry, my little dah-lings, I was merely making a joke. A simple gut-buster, really." Green and Kimmy stared at him. "Oh-kay..." They started walking away once again. Claudio caught up to the fast-moving friends once again. "Hold on, little ones! Surely you aren't leaving without me, are you?" Green dropped the rolled-up tent and threateningly walked over to Claudio. He put his hand on his shoulder. "Listen here, pal. Just who the hell are you, and what is your problem?" Their 'new friend' smiled. "I'm Claudio, also known as the Cloaked Bundle of Pure Fabulous. And I have no problem. A mere request is all. Just a tiny question." Greenluigi raised an eyebrow. "And question may that be? And please be quick about it, won't you? We don't have all day." Claudio started walking away from Green. "Delighted. But it doesn't concern you, my boy." He grabbed NintendoFanKimmy's hand and continued walking. "Come along." Green stood there impatiently. He mumbled to himself. "This better be quick." 
Kimmy and Claudio sat down on a horizon-like spot where the blinding sun seemed nearby. "Hurry up," ordered Kimmy, tapping her shoes impatiently. "Of course," replied the fabulous meister, re-adjusting his red beret. "I won't dally. Straight to the point. No extra details. Not at all. No, siree. I can assure you that-" He was interrupted by Kimmy's ear-splitting, "ASK THE DARN QUESTION, WILL YOU?" Claudio cleared his throat."Ahem. Of course." He proceeded to explain to NintendoFanKimmy that he was well-aware of her element-bending powers. "I know you're the second Avatar, or so they say," he told Kimmy. "My question is simple... Would it be possible if... Well... Perhaps you could... I, um... Uh..." Kimmy frowned and made a fist. He cleared his throat once again and continued with his question. "Oh, yes. Uh, right. Heh, heh... Okay. Would it be possible for you to transfer your powers to me?" Kimmy bolted up. "EXCUSE ME?" Claudio sat her back down. "Now now, dear, no need to overreact. All I need is a 'yes' or 'no', that's all." NintendoFanKimmy's frown grew deeper. "Most certainly not, Mr. Fabuleu!" Claudio was shocked. "How did you know my last name?" Kimmy rolled her eyes and looked back at him with her death stare, which was actually quite intimidating. "Hasta la vista, pal. I'm out of here." He stopped her one last time and begged her to hear him out. "Hear my plea, child. All I ask is a few minutes of your time to hear my motive." Kimmy crossed her arms. "You have two minutes. Go." Claudio told her that she barely seemed to ever use her powers, and that they would be of greater use to him. "Please!" he begged, joining his hands together. "Is there ANY way you could give me your powers? I'm sure you won't be needing them as much I will in the future." NintendoFanKimmy motioned her hands. "Do not make me get violent," she warned. "As you know, I can control water. Here's a fact. I can also freeze water. I'm able to impale you with my icicles whenever I want to. Don't make me do it." Claudio sat back and smirked. "Give it your best shot." Kimmy couldn't believe her ears. Surely he had some plan behind this. Nevertheless, her anger ceased any questions from popping up in her mind and she aimed and shot her icicles towards Claudio. Suddenly, just before she moved her hand to direct the water, Claudio grabbed it, and the icicles, still above Kimmy, melted and spilled down on top of her as water. Soaking wet, she gasped in confusion. Why weren't her powers working? 
"Wha-?" She continuously tried to motion the water back up, but it was to no effect. "Wait a second." She got up and turned around. She attempted to summon a grand mountain from the earth beneath her feet, but nothing happened. Then, she faced Claudio, raging mad. "What have you DONE?" she asked, furious. Then, he got up and began to laugh. He laughed harder and harder, and he eventually began to tear. With every passing second, Kimmy's rage built up faster. Then, he sighed, put his fallen beret back on and wiped the tear off of his face. "NintendoFanKimmy," he said, smiling, "your powers are officially mine." Then, he tested them. Rocks, mountains, droplets, waves, flames, fires, winds; he had it all. "This is satisfying," he said, pleased. Kimmy then got even more angry when she discovered she couldn't convey that anger via fire. But then, that anger quickly turned into fear. This guy could kill her and Green in the blink of an eye now that he wielded the power she once had. Then, she gulped. Claudio turned to her with a confused expression. Then, he began to laugh. "Oh, please don't tremble, my dear; I'll spare both you and your dear cousin's lives. You two are fun to toy with - it would be a catastrophe if I had lost you. Anyway, no time to explain how I absorbed your powers. I'll tell you this, though. I am a genius and a scientist work-to-be." He waved and started running away. "Toodles!" He quickly ruffled Green's hair as he dashed by. "I won't forget you either, Greenluigi, darling. See you all!" Then, he disappeared back into the same bush he had first come from. This just made NintendoFanKimmy feel worse. No one was to ruffle Green's hair except for her! Then, Green sighed in relief. "Glad that's over. Time to go see what the question was about." He quickly ran to NintendoFanKimmy, who was trembling with anger. "Uh-oh," he thought to himself as he made his way to her. "This doesn't look good." 
Nearly breathless, Greenluigi ran up to Kimmy from behind, panting and wheezing. He poked her shoulder. "Kimmy? Are you okay?" Then, NintendoFanKimmy turned around. "Does it LOOK like I'm okay?!" Green stepped back. "No." After a few moments of silence, Kimmy sighed. "Sorry for snapping at you like that, Green. But I think I might just be in the worst situation ever." Green walked closer to the brunette. "And what may that be?" Kimmy's rage subsided and she inhaled and exhaled. "You know my powers to control the elements and stuff? The reason our friends back in Vizzed call me 'The Avatar'?" Greenluigi nodded. "Yeah... I don't like where this is going..." Searching for words, Kimmy sighed. "Well... They're gone. He took them. He took them all. He said he was some sort of scientist. As I was about to attack him for getting on my nerves after repeating the same question countless times, he grabbed my hand, and I suddenly lost control of all my powers. I don't have them anymore. Perhaps it was some sort of chemical in his hand or something." Greenluigi suddenly bolted up and got angry. "He WHAT?!" NintendoFanKimmy looked down. "You heard right. Anyway, Green, I'm not like you. You know that. I'm not a skilled direct-combat sword-fighter person. I'm absolutely nothing without my powers. What are we going to do?" Then, the duo stood in silence. They knew it was true. And they knew that there was, in fact, nothing they could do. Not for the time being at least. Finally, Green spoke. "Kimmy... Don't worry." He put his hand on her shoulder and patted her reassuringly. "No matter what it takes, you and I are going to stop at nothing to get your powers back, right?" She nodded, but she stayed silent and glum-looking. Everything at the moment seemed futile. "Don't despair, Kimmy," he said once again. "It'll be alright." 
NON-SPAMMY REPLY OR NO REPLY AT ALL BECAUSE I HAVE OFFICIALLY HAD IT. Tales of Convoluted Origins - Season One: Episode Three: THE POWERLESS AVATAR NintendoFanKimmy and Greenluigi stood in front of the self-proclaimed "Cloaked Bundle of Pure Fabulous" in disbelief. "No way." Remarked Kimmy. "There's no way anyone could ever be THAT fabulous..." Green nodded in agreement. "Yep. You'd better be careful, Claudio. The cops might bust you or perhaps even crack you on the nut for being THAT fabulous. I'm amazed. You're simply dashing!" The tall blond facing the cousins made a soft laugh. "I'm flattered." Green walked up to him and looked up. "Bud. It's called sarcasm." Claudio gasped and took a step backward. "Y-you don't think I'm fabulous? I-I..." He began to sniffle. "I am.. deeply offended. H-how could anyone..." He buried his supposedly weeping face into his hands and began to cry. NintendoFanKimmy and Greenluigi stared at each other. No comment. "Uh, Kimmy?" Green whispered, his hand over his mouth. "What the hell is wrong with this guy?" Kimmy shrugged. "Beats me. If you ask me, I'd say he's faking it." Claudio made an even louder gasp. "Oh, my God! First, you don't think I'm fabulous, and next you actually accuse me of faking?" He began to cry even harder and buried his face into his hands once again. Kimmy rolled her eyes and began to walk away with Green. "Let's move our camp somewhere else." Suddenly, Mr. Fabulous ran over to the duo and laughed. "Oh, don't worry, my little dah-lings, I was merely making a joke. A simple gut-buster, really." Green and Kimmy stared at him. "Oh-kay..." They started walking away once again. Claudio caught up to the fast-moving friends once again. "Hold on, little ones! Surely you aren't leaving without me, are you?" Green dropped the rolled-up tent and threateningly walked over to Claudio. He put his hand on his shoulder. "Listen here, pal. Just who the hell are you, and what is your problem?" Their 'new friend' smiled. "I'm Claudio, also known as the Cloaked Bundle of Pure Fabulous. And I have no problem. A mere request is all. Just a tiny question." Greenluigi raised an eyebrow. "And question may that be? And please be quick about it, won't you? We don't have all day." Claudio started walking away from Green. "Delighted. But it doesn't concern you, my boy." He grabbed NintendoFanKimmy's hand and continued walking. "Come along." Green stood there impatiently. He mumbled to himself. "This better be quick."
Kimmy and Claudio sat down on a horizon-like spot where the blinding sun seemed nearby. "Hurry up," ordered Kimmy, tapping her shoes impatiently. "Of course," replied the fabulous meister, re-adjusting his red beret. "I won't dally. Straight to the point. No extra details. Not at all. No, siree. I can assure you that-" He was interrupted by Kimmy's ear-splitting, "ASK THE DARN QUESTION, WILL YOU?" Claudio cleared his throat."Ahem. Of course." He proceeded to explain to NintendoFanKimmy that he was well-aware of her element-bending powers. "I know you're the second Avatar, or so they say," he told Kimmy. "My question is simple... Would it be possible if... Well... Perhaps you could... I, um... Uh..." Kimmy frowned and made a fist. He cleared his throat once again and continued with his question. "Oh, yes. Uh, right. Heh, heh... Okay. Would it be possible for you to transfer your powers to me?" Kimmy bolted up. "EXCUSE ME?" Claudio sat her back down. "Now now, dear, no need to overreact. All I need is a 'yes' or 'no', that's all." NintendoFanKimmy's frown grew deeper. "Most certainly not, Mr. Fabuleu!" Claudio was shocked. "How did you know my last name?" Kimmy rolled her eyes and looked back at him with her death stare, which was actually quite intimidating. "Hasta la vista, pal. I'm out of here." He stopped her one last time and begged her to hear him out. "Hear my plea, child. All I ask is a few minutes of your time to hear my motive." Kimmy crossed her arms. "You have two minutes. Go." Claudio told her that she barely seemed to ever use her powers, and that they would be of greater use to him. "Please!" he begged, joining his hands together. "Is there ANY way you could give me your powers? I'm sure you won't be needing them as much I will in the future." NintendoFanKimmy motioned her hands. "Do not make me get violent," she warned. "As you know, I can control water. Here's a fact. I can also freeze water. I'm able to impale you with my icicles whenever I want to. Don't make me do it." Claudio sat back and smirked. "Give it your best shot." Kimmy couldn't believe her ears. Surely he had some plan behind this. Nevertheless, her anger ceased any questions from popping up in her mind and she aimed and shot her icicles towards Claudio. Suddenly, just before she moved her hand to direct the water, Claudio grabbed it, and the icicles, still above Kimmy, melted and spilled down on top of her as water. Soaking wet, she gasped in confusion. Why weren't her powers working?
"Wha-?" She continuously tried to motion the water back up, but it was to no effect. "Wait a second." She got up and turned around. She attempted to summon a grand mountain from the earth beneath her feet, but nothing happened. Then, she faced Claudio, raging mad. "What have you DONE?" she asked, furious. Then, he got up and began to laugh. He laughed harder and harder, and he eventually began to tear. With every passing second, Kimmy's rage built up faster. Then, he sighed, put his fallen beret back on and wiped the tear off of his face. "NintendoFanKimmy," he said, smiling, "your powers are officially mine." Then, he tested them. Rocks, mountains, droplets, waves, flames, fires, winds; he had it all. "This is satisfying," he said, pleased. Kimmy then got even more angry when she discovered she couldn't convey that anger via fire. But then, that anger quickly turned into fear. This guy could kill her and Green in the blink of an eye now that he wielded the power she once had. Then, she gulped. Claudio turned to her with a confused expression. Then, he began to laugh. "Oh, please don't tremble, my dear; I'll spare both you and your dear cousin's lives. You two are fun to toy with - it would be a catastrophe if I had lost you. Anyway, no time to explain how I absorbed your powers. I'll tell you this, though. I am a genius and a scientist work-to-be." He waved and started running away. "Toodles!" He quickly ruffled Green's hair as he dashed by. "I won't forget you either, Greenluigi, darling. See you all!" Then, he disappeared back into the same bush he had first come from. This just made NintendoFanKimmy feel worse. No one was to ruffle Green's hair except for her! Then, Green sighed in relief. "Glad that's over. Time to go see what the question was about." He quickly ran to NintendoFanKimmy, who was trembling with anger. "Uh-oh," he thought to himself as he made his way to her. "This doesn't look good."
Nearly breathless, Greenluigi ran up to Kimmy from behind, panting and wheezing. He poked her shoulder. "Kimmy? Are you okay?" Then, NintendoFanKimmy turned around. "Does it LOOK like I'm okay?!" Green stepped back. "No." After a few moments of silence, Kimmy sighed. "Sorry for snapping at you like that, Green. But I think I might just be in the worst situation ever." Green walked closer to the brunette. "And what may that be?" Kimmy's rage subsided and she inhaled and exhaled. "You know my powers to control the elements and stuff? The reason our friends back in Vizzed call me 'The Avatar'?" Greenluigi nodded. "Yeah... I don't like where this is going..." Searching for words, Kimmy sighed. "Well... They're gone. He took them. He took them all. He said he was some sort of scientist. As I was about to attack him for getting on my nerves after repeating the same question countless times, he grabbed my hand, and I suddenly lost control of all my powers. I don't have them anymore. Perhaps it was some sort of chemical in his hand or something." Greenluigi suddenly bolted up and got angry. "He WHAT?!" NintendoFanKimmy looked down. "You heard right. Anyway, Green, I'm not like you. You know that. I'm not a skilled direct-combat sword-fighter person. I'm absolutely nothing without my powers. What are we going to do?" Then, the duo stood in silence. They knew it was true. And they knew that there was, in fact, nothing they could do. Not for the time being at least. Finally, Green spoke. "Kimmy... Don't worry." He put his hand on her shoulder and patted her reassuringly. "No matter what it takes, you and I are going to stop at nothing to get your powers back, right?" She nodded, but she stayed silent and glum-looking. Everything at the moment seemed futile. "Don't despair, Kimmy," he said once again. "It'll be alright."
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