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Need help for story

 
Who should I kill off in my story?
Will
 
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Prisoner-4279
 
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Andap
 
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03-20-14 11:43 PM
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I'm writing a story for language arts, and I want to kill one of the main characters in the book, but I'm having a tough choice on who. So that's why I'm asking the Vizzed community!!!
So who should i kill:
Will: A lazy, drunk, rude, mean, evil, government official that smokes, and then turns into a good guy, and quits smoking (but not drinking).
OR
Prisoner-4279: A extremely smart little girl, very shy, and scared. Has Post traumatic stress disorder after seeing her parents eyes being gouged out and then dying.
OR
Andap: A young boy, son of the President of Antarctica. Has schizophrenia, not smart, but extremely brave. He is also in love with his platinum knife.
Suggestions welcome!
To help with voting::
Quote from book for prisoner-4279:? In the same city as Will, a scared little
girl witnesses the death of her parents, an image that no one should ever see,
or live through. Especially in the way Prisoner-4279, the little girl, parents
had died. At the moment of death, there was ocean of glistening blood, pooling
around Prisoner-4279. Forced to watch her parents scared, pleading, eyes being
gouged out of their sockets, leaving nothing but two gaping holes, surrounded
by red. Their eyes were volcanoes oozing red liquid.
Quote for Andap (he lives through this every day:
???“You are weak and pitiful. You can barely lift 2 pounds, much less 50…” a voice whispered in the
head of Andap.
???“You are dumb. Stupid. An idiot. You
don’t deserve to hear my voice inside your head. I am stronger. I will control
you.”
Quote for Will : The bus moved forward. And then it happened. The tires slid. People screamed.
Crash. Scream. Shout. Blood. Will’s vision was blurred as he started moving.
**** that ice. **** that ice. Those were the only words he could think. Over
and over again; **** that ice, **** that ice,**** that ice. Then everything turned red, orange and yellow. A wave of heat moved over his
face. Then he blacked out.

See here for the full story (or at least what I have typed ) :   https://www.vizzed.com/boards/thread.php?id=74116
I'm writing a story for language arts, and I want to kill one of the main characters in the book, but I'm having a tough choice on who. So that's why I'm asking the Vizzed community!!!
So who should i kill:
Will: A lazy, drunk, rude, mean, evil, government official that smokes, and then turns into a good guy, and quits smoking (but not drinking).
OR
Prisoner-4279: A extremely smart little girl, very shy, and scared. Has Post traumatic stress disorder after seeing her parents eyes being gouged out and then dying.
OR
Andap: A young boy, son of the President of Antarctica. Has schizophrenia, not smart, but extremely brave. He is also in love with his platinum knife.
Suggestions welcome!
To help with voting::
Quote from book for prisoner-4279:? In the same city as Will, a scared little
girl witnesses the death of her parents, an image that no one should ever see,
or live through. Especially in the way Prisoner-4279, the little girl, parents
had died. At the moment of death, there was ocean of glistening blood, pooling
around Prisoner-4279. Forced to watch her parents scared, pleading, eyes being
gouged out of their sockets, leaving nothing but two gaping holes, surrounded
by red. Their eyes were volcanoes oozing red liquid.
Quote for Andap (he lives through this every day:
???“You are weak and pitiful. You can barely lift 2 pounds, much less 50…” a voice whispered in the
head of Andap.
???“You are dumb. Stupid. An idiot. You
don’t deserve to hear my voice inside your head. I am stronger. I will control
you.”
Quote for Will : The bus moved forward. And then it happened. The tires slid. People screamed.
Crash. Scream. Shout. Blood. Will’s vision was blurred as he started moving.
**** that ice. **** that ice. Those were the only words he could think. Over
and over again; **** that ice, **** that ice,**** that ice. Then everything turned red, orange and yellow. A wave of heat moved over his
face. Then he blacked out.

See here for the full story (or at least what I have typed ) :   https://www.vizzed.com/boards/thread.php?id=74116
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(edited by Mangepic on 03-23-14 01:56 PM)    

03-21-14 08:33 PM
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I say Andap. If he's as brave as you say he is, you can make it so he dies in some sort of heroic fashion, or dies doing something extremely adventurous. 
I say Andap. If he's as brave as you say he is, you can make it so he dies in some sort of heroic fashion, or dies doing something extremely adventurous. 
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All of them.  Blow up the world!!!!!  Just kidding.  I really think it depends on where you want to take the story.  Think hard about it, but not too hard.  Consider your options.  Depending on your choice, you will lose and gain opportunities to develop your story in meaningful ways.  I don't know who I'd kill off, since I don't know enough about your story.  That must be your decision.
All of them.  Blow up the world!!!!!  Just kidding.  I really think it depends on where you want to take the story.  Think hard about it, but not too hard.  Consider your options.  Depending on your choice, you will lose and gain opportunities to develop your story in meaningful ways.  I don't know who I'd kill off, since I don't know enough about your story.  That must be your decision.
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Welp, Andap seems like the least likable character in my opinion. So I'm voting for him... He's gotta go! Nobody obsessed with a knife is good.
Welp, Andap seems like the least likable character in my opinion. So I'm voting for him... He's gotta go! Nobody obsessed with a knife is good.
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