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The Lonely Artist

 

02-28-14 08:15 AM
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This is a more serious, thoughtful poem, in contrast to what I usually do.  It encourages us to accept our flaws, but not to become them.  Flaws can lead to art, but they can also lead to the destruction of such.  

Hope you guys enjoy!

OCD is become me.
I dip my pen into the
Ink and align the page
Squarely with the table.

Oops, it slipped!  Now
I have a papercut, and
Red fills the whiteness.

I make a line with my blood,
And like a flood it pours
Onto the paper.

But I don’t mind, I’m making shapes!
Triangles and squares and circles
All take form from this little cut,
Until the blood stops flowing and
The wound is healed.

It’s incomplete.
Should I cut myself again?

No no NO!
I have enough.  To my red ink
I add the blackness of night!

I dip my pen again into the darkness
And bring it out afresh!

Squiggles and complexities reverberate
With my triangles and squares and circles
Until I am out of ink.

But am I finished?
I say NAY!
I have a card yet left to play!

I put my fingernails to use
And give that paper some abuse
Until both rhyme and reason have left me.

And I am alone again with my OCD

And my anger.
This is a more serious, thoughtful poem, in contrast to what I usually do.  It encourages us to accept our flaws, but not to become them.  Flaws can lead to art, but they can also lead to the destruction of such.  

Hope you guys enjoy!

OCD is become me.
I dip my pen into the
Ink and align the page
Squarely with the table.

Oops, it slipped!  Now
I have a papercut, and
Red fills the whiteness.

I make a line with my blood,
And like a flood it pours
Onto the paper.

But I don’t mind, I’m making shapes!
Triangles and squares and circles
All take form from this little cut,
Until the blood stops flowing and
The wound is healed.

It’s incomplete.
Should I cut myself again?

No no NO!
I have enough.  To my red ink
I add the blackness of night!

I dip my pen again into the darkness
And bring it out afresh!

Squiggles and complexities reverberate
With my triangles and squares and circles
Until I am out of ink.

But am I finished?
I say NAY!
I have a card yet left to play!

I put my fingernails to use
And give that paper some abuse
Until both rhyme and reason have left me.

And I am alone again with my OCD

And my anger.
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