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NintendoFanKimmy: Legend in the Making - Chapter Fifteen

 

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NintendoFanKimmy:
Legend in the Making



Chapter Fifteen: The Split-Up and A User Of This’s
Pikmin Army



        “What do you mean by
the second Avatar?” NintendoFanKimmy said, shocked. “Aang died twelve years ago?
That doesn’t make any sense!” Then, the old trainer chuckled and walked over to
Kimmy. “No, child. Aang is not dead. What I mean by second Avatar is that you
are coexisting with another one right now. And that is Aang. That simply does
not happen. An Avatar is one who can control all elements: water, earth, fire,
and air. Usually, another Avatar would come into being right after the death of
the previous one. I’m astounded. This is either a phenomenon, or some cheap
set-up.” Kimmy looked at her hands. She felt the ability to summon water, fire,
earth, or air anytime she wanted to. “I- I want to test it…” she began. The old
man stepped out of the way. “Go ahead.” Then, she fired a bolt of flames
towards the target. It was a bull’s eye, and the paper burned down. Then, she
summoned a slow-moving breeze. Everyone’s hair was flowing slowly, and then
Kimmy stopped the breeze. She pulled up large mountains and moved them around,
being careful not to break anything, and then returned them to the underground.
Afterwards, she motioned the water from the nearby lake out of the window into
the air and swirled it around before plopping it back in. Then, she turned to
the trainer. He smiled. “You are a mystery, Kimmy. It would be an honor to be
your master.” Then, NintendoFanKimmy bowed. “It is my pleasure to be your
student.” Then, he made a shooing gesture with his hands and sent them off.
“Run along, now, young ones. And, Kimmy, your first class begins tomorrow. Try
not to be late, eh? See you there!” Then, he closed the door and walked away.
After that, A user of this, Matthew2321, Mr. Zed, and Jerry stared at
NintendoFanKimmy impressed, jaws dropped open. Then, greenluigi frowned. He
walked between Kimmy and the rest and waved his arm in their faces. “Hey, hey,
hey! So what if she can control all elements? We all have a power of our own,
don’t we?” Everyone he was talking to nodded. “Well, yeah, but-” Green shushed
them. “Well, then,” he turned to Kimmy. “You’re not more special than all of us
are, you know? Just because you can play around with a bunch of water and other
stuff doesn’t mean you should go around thinking you’re better than us. We all
have potential just as strong as yours!” NintendoFanKimmy never thought she was
superior to the rest. “Hey, I never said I was strong-” Then, greenluigi
started to walk away. “Just go train, you o’ so special ‘legend in the making’.”
Then, the others ran behind him to persuade him to lighten up. Their efforts
were failing from what Kimmy saw, so she put her hands in her jeans pockets and
started walking towards the fountain in the center of the village. Then, she
sat down and sighed. “Maybe it’s for the best right now… I need to focus on my
training at the moment.” Then, she got up and starting sulking in a different direction.
Suddenly, she was greeted by a “hey”. NintendoFanKimmy turned around. It was
DenzGamer135, her acquaintance. “Why are you down? Is it because Master won’t
let you train at the dojo anymore?” Kimmy kicked a rock. “No, actually. He discovered
I am the second Avatar-” “WHAT?!” cried Denz, nearly falling over. “Aang died
twelve years ago?” Then, Kimmy face-palmed. She proceeded to relay to Denz what
her trainer had said to her. “Oh… So, you’re back in?” NintendoFanKimmy nodded.
“Yep.” DenzGamer was still confused. “Why are you upset, then?” Kimmy took a
deep breath and told him everything about what happened between her and the
group. “Ouch. It’s only green who is not your friend anymore, though, right?”
She wasn’t sure at that point. “To be honest, I don’t even know right now. They
all followed him and not me…” He raised an eyebrow. “Odd. My friends Matt, User
and Zed would never do something like that. Although, Kimmy, you just might
have been running too fast for them to catch up to you. And, don’t fret. You’ve
got other friends. Me, that Clifton guy, the trainer…” Kimmy smiled. “I guess
you’re right.” Meanwhile, with our other heroes, Mr. Zed tugged greenluigi’s
arm. “Listen, green,” Zed began. You can’t let jealousy take over your mind.
She never presumed she was stronger than all of us. You just immediately
assumed she did.” This only made the blond angrier, however. “Oh, so all of
your guys are suddenly on her side?” Then, everyone was speechless. Matthew2321
frowned. “Look,” said A user of this walking towards Kimmy’s cousin. “You’ve
got to calm do-” “Forget it,” said greenluigi, walking away. “I don’t need any
of you guys to become stronger. I’m off to the nearby The Legend of Zelda World
to train my sword skills. Because direct combat is what I’m good at. Later.”
Then, he was completely out of sight. He had stepped through the wall of ‘Jell-O’.
What was once a close group of six good friends had resulted in a trio
consisting of Zed, Matthew, and User, and a loner, NintendoFanKimmy, in one day
flat. “Wow,” commented Matt. “That happened. Fast.” Then, Mr. Zed sighed. “You
know what, guys?” he began. “Maybe it’s for the best that we split up, too.”
Everyone nodded understandingly. “You’re right, Z. We need some time on our
own. All of us. To let go of our worries and become more in touch with
ourselves and our abilities. We will definitely meet again,” replied User. “Wait!”
exclaimed Matthew2311. “What about Denz? We were originally a group of four
with him when we came. Then, he sort of drifted away from us to practice his
fire-bending skills.” User smiled.  “Then
it became a trio again. All three of us. Then, we met up with green and Kimmy
and that Jerry guy, wherever he is. Let Denz be. He’ll do fine on his own.”
Everyone had come to their decision. “Right then,” they said in unison. “Bye,
everyone.” Then, they walked their separate ways. Matthew was heading back to
the Pokémon World to brush up on his electricity skills, as he was a Pikachu.
Mr. Zed was on his way to the Mario World. He didn’t know what he was going to
do yet. And, A user of this was pacing the village and walking in circles, he
really couldn’t make up his mind. “I’m no good at anything,” said User,
sulking. Then, right when he was about to give up, he felt a tug on his leg.
User looked down. He was surprised to find a small, Yellow Pikmin looking up at
him with pleading eyes. “Wha-?” Then, a Blue Pikmin walked over to him. Soon
after, a Red one followed. After a few seconds, about one hundred Pikmin were
surrounding User looking up at him as if they were ready for war. A user of
this was so shocked that he dropped the chocolate-chip cookie he always had
with him. “Uh,” he let out, majorly confused. “What are all of you little guys
doing here?” Then, a Blue Pikmin jumped into User’s paw after struggling a bit.
User was a Pony resembling Fluttershy, after all. Then, a Red Pikmin grabbed
User’s elbow with its tiny hands and pulled it backward. Then, it let go,
sending the Blue Pikmin flying into the air. It came back unharmed, and placed
its hand above its head, making a “reporting for duty!” gesture. Then, every
single Pikmin bowed. They were ready to cater to User’s every whim. “Y-you guys
want me to be your Captain?” The Yellow one nodded. Then, they all hugged him. “Alright,”
he sighed, giving in to their adorable ways. “I’ll do my best, I guess. Let’s all
practice here, where it’s safe!” Then, all of the little creatures cheered and
started scattering around jollily. “Alright, then” said A user of this with an
evident sense of leadership and enthusiasm. “Let’s get started!” Meanwhile, NintendoFanKimmy
returned to her hotel room and went to sleep, crossing her fingers to not have
any nightmares of flunking up at the next day’s training session. “I can do
this,” she sighed, not entirely believing in her own words. After all,
splitting up with her cousin and best friend, along with her other great pals
did have its psychological stains. It was all a test, though, she decided. To
see how well he could perform on her own. Although, she was not entirely on her
own. She had her friend DenzGamer135, and more-than-just-a-friend, Clifton
Smith. Still, though. Greenluigi was a great loss. He used to play a key role
in her everyday self-esteem. And now it was all gone. She had to test the
limits, however. She would never even stand a chance against XZH if she couldn’t
even deal with losing some friends. “I can do this.”


NintendoFanKimmy:
Legend in the Making



Chapter Fifteen: The Split-Up and A User Of This’s
Pikmin Army



        “What do you mean by
the second Avatar?” NintendoFanKimmy said, shocked. “Aang died twelve years ago?
That doesn’t make any sense!” Then, the old trainer chuckled and walked over to
Kimmy. “No, child. Aang is not dead. What I mean by second Avatar is that you
are coexisting with another one right now. And that is Aang. That simply does
not happen. An Avatar is one who can control all elements: water, earth, fire,
and air. Usually, another Avatar would come into being right after the death of
the previous one. I’m astounded. This is either a phenomenon, or some cheap
set-up.” Kimmy looked at her hands. She felt the ability to summon water, fire,
earth, or air anytime she wanted to. “I- I want to test it…” she began. The old
man stepped out of the way. “Go ahead.” Then, she fired a bolt of flames
towards the target. It was a bull’s eye, and the paper burned down. Then, she
summoned a slow-moving breeze. Everyone’s hair was flowing slowly, and then
Kimmy stopped the breeze. She pulled up large mountains and moved them around,
being careful not to break anything, and then returned them to the underground.
Afterwards, she motioned the water from the nearby lake out of the window into
the air and swirled it around before plopping it back in. Then, she turned to
the trainer. He smiled. “You are a mystery, Kimmy. It would be an honor to be
your master.” Then, NintendoFanKimmy bowed. “It is my pleasure to be your
student.” Then, he made a shooing gesture with his hands and sent them off.
“Run along, now, young ones. And, Kimmy, your first class begins tomorrow. Try
not to be late, eh? See you there!” Then, he closed the door and walked away.
After that, A user of this, Matthew2321, Mr. Zed, and Jerry stared at
NintendoFanKimmy impressed, jaws dropped open. Then, greenluigi frowned. He
walked between Kimmy and the rest and waved his arm in their faces. “Hey, hey,
hey! So what if she can control all elements? We all have a power of our own,
don’t we?” Everyone he was talking to nodded. “Well, yeah, but-” Green shushed
them. “Well, then,” he turned to Kimmy. “You’re not more special than all of us
are, you know? Just because you can play around with a bunch of water and other
stuff doesn’t mean you should go around thinking you’re better than us. We all
have potential just as strong as yours!” NintendoFanKimmy never thought she was
superior to the rest. “Hey, I never said I was strong-” Then, greenluigi
started to walk away. “Just go train, you o’ so special ‘legend in the making’.”
Then, the others ran behind him to persuade him to lighten up. Their efforts
were failing from what Kimmy saw, so she put her hands in her jeans pockets and
started walking towards the fountain in the center of the village. Then, she
sat down and sighed. “Maybe it’s for the best right now… I need to focus on my
training at the moment.” Then, she got up and starting sulking in a different direction.
Suddenly, she was greeted by a “hey”. NintendoFanKimmy turned around. It was
DenzGamer135, her acquaintance. “Why are you down? Is it because Master won’t
let you train at the dojo anymore?” Kimmy kicked a rock. “No, actually. He discovered
I am the second Avatar-” “WHAT?!” cried Denz, nearly falling over. “Aang died
twelve years ago?” Then, Kimmy face-palmed. She proceeded to relay to Denz what
her trainer had said to her. “Oh… So, you’re back in?” NintendoFanKimmy nodded.
“Yep.” DenzGamer was still confused. “Why are you upset, then?” Kimmy took a
deep breath and told him everything about what happened between her and the
group. “Ouch. It’s only green who is not your friend anymore, though, right?”
She wasn’t sure at that point. “To be honest, I don’t even know right now. They
all followed him and not me…” He raised an eyebrow. “Odd. My friends Matt, User
and Zed would never do something like that. Although, Kimmy, you just might
have been running too fast for them to catch up to you. And, don’t fret. You’ve
got other friends. Me, that Clifton guy, the trainer…” Kimmy smiled. “I guess
you’re right.” Meanwhile, with our other heroes, Mr. Zed tugged greenluigi’s
arm. “Listen, green,” Zed began. You can’t let jealousy take over your mind.
She never presumed she was stronger than all of us. You just immediately
assumed she did.” This only made the blond angrier, however. “Oh, so all of
your guys are suddenly on her side?” Then, everyone was speechless. Matthew2321
frowned. “Look,” said A user of this walking towards Kimmy’s cousin. “You’ve
got to calm do-” “Forget it,” said greenluigi, walking away. “I don’t need any
of you guys to become stronger. I’m off to the nearby The Legend of Zelda World
to train my sword skills. Because direct combat is what I’m good at. Later.”
Then, he was completely out of sight. He had stepped through the wall of ‘Jell-O’.
What was once a close group of six good friends had resulted in a trio
consisting of Zed, Matthew, and User, and a loner, NintendoFanKimmy, in one day
flat. “Wow,” commented Matt. “That happened. Fast.” Then, Mr. Zed sighed. “You
know what, guys?” he began. “Maybe it’s for the best that we split up, too.”
Everyone nodded understandingly. “You’re right, Z. We need some time on our
own. All of us. To let go of our worries and become more in touch with
ourselves and our abilities. We will definitely meet again,” replied User. “Wait!”
exclaimed Matthew2311. “What about Denz? We were originally a group of four
with him when we came. Then, he sort of drifted away from us to practice his
fire-bending skills.” User smiled.  “Then
it became a trio again. All three of us. Then, we met up with green and Kimmy
and that Jerry guy, wherever he is. Let Denz be. He’ll do fine on his own.”
Everyone had come to their decision. “Right then,” they said in unison. “Bye,
everyone.” Then, they walked their separate ways. Matthew was heading back to
the Pokémon World to brush up on his electricity skills, as he was a Pikachu.
Mr. Zed was on his way to the Mario World. He didn’t know what he was going to
do yet. And, A user of this was pacing the village and walking in circles, he
really couldn’t make up his mind. “I’m no good at anything,” said User,
sulking. Then, right when he was about to give up, he felt a tug on his leg.
User looked down. He was surprised to find a small, Yellow Pikmin looking up at
him with pleading eyes. “Wha-?” Then, a Blue Pikmin walked over to him. Soon
after, a Red one followed. After a few seconds, about one hundred Pikmin were
surrounding User looking up at him as if they were ready for war. A user of
this was so shocked that he dropped the chocolate-chip cookie he always had
with him. “Uh,” he let out, majorly confused. “What are all of you little guys
doing here?” Then, a Blue Pikmin jumped into User’s paw after struggling a bit.
User was a Pony resembling Fluttershy, after all. Then, a Red Pikmin grabbed
User’s elbow with its tiny hands and pulled it backward. Then, it let go,
sending the Blue Pikmin flying into the air. It came back unharmed, and placed
its hand above its head, making a “reporting for duty!” gesture. Then, every
single Pikmin bowed. They were ready to cater to User’s every whim. “Y-you guys
want me to be your Captain?” The Yellow one nodded. Then, they all hugged him. “Alright,”
he sighed, giving in to their adorable ways. “I’ll do my best, I guess. Let’s all
practice here, where it’s safe!” Then, all of the little creatures cheered and
started scattering around jollily. “Alright, then” said A user of this with an
evident sense of leadership and enthusiasm. “Let’s get started!” Meanwhile, NintendoFanKimmy
returned to her hotel room and went to sleep, crossing her fingers to not have
any nightmares of flunking up at the next day’s training session. “I can do
this,” she sighed, not entirely believing in her own words. After all,
splitting up with her cousin and best friend, along with her other great pals
did have its psychological stains. It was all a test, though, she decided. To
see how well he could perform on her own. Although, she was not entirely on her
own. She had her friend DenzGamer135, and more-than-just-a-friend, Clifton
Smith. Still, though. Greenluigi was a great loss. He used to play a key role
in her everyday self-esteem. And now it was all gone. She had to test the
limits, however. She would never even stand a chance against XZH if she couldn’t
even deal with losing some friends. “I can do this.”


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oo the second avatar pretty exiting this is getting to be.
oo the second avatar pretty exiting this is getting to be.
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That is such a great story kimmy.. I want to read moreee!!! Keep up the awesome work.. Chapter Fifteen? I must of not got a chance to read some of the earlier chapters but it was still really great and I could keep up with the storyline. Thanks kimmy I have been waiting to read something interesting like this for a while now.
That is such a great story kimmy.. I want to read moreee!!! Keep up the awesome work.. Chapter Fifteen? I must of not got a chance to read some of the earlier chapters but it was still really great and I could keep up with the storyline. Thanks kimmy I have been waiting to read something interesting like this for a while now.
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Very nice work. I find the fact that they're surrounded by Nintendo game worlds and can cross over into them, extremely interesting. The very concept makes this story really intriguing. Keep it up.
Very nice work. I find the fact that they're surrounded by Nintendo game worlds and can cross over into them, extremely interesting. The very concept makes this story really intriguing. Keep it up.
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