Bravery the sacred
gold and the sacred silver chapter 3:
Treasure town!
Prince fou got a
furious outrage sick with anger he said: FAWFUL!!!! TAKE CARE OF THESE CHUMPS! Fawful
came he said: yes sir! Oh if it isn’t Mario, luigi. Peach and team agent huh? Agent
boss said: we’re not here to fight you, we’re here to join you! Prince fou
said: join us eh? FAWFUL! TAKE TEAM AGENT TO JAIL! Fawful said: no problem! Fawful
used a horrible hypnosis at team agent which makes them fall asleep so fawful took
them to jail, peach said: now prince fou give back sycamore’s voice! The evil
prince said: NEVER! THAT’S IT! IM GOING TO MAKE YOU FALL ASLEEP AND TAKE YOU
AWAY IN A FAR AWAY TOWN WHICH IS 10 000 MILES!! Everyone said: 10 000
MILES!?!?!? The evil prince made them fall asleep and he called one of his
assistant: the “Helmaroc King” to take them away to treasure town. Helmaroc
king is a huge bird wearing a mask, a steel mask. The helmaroc king used
whirlwind at the brave heroes they all screamed. In treasure town, Mario woke
up he said: Guys wake up! Where are we?? Peach and luigi woke up they said: we
don’t know where are we but we might find some clues in this town, until luigi
screamed: GUYS!! WHAT’S THAT THERE!! They turned their back and they just
founded a square gold item…

You can do a little better when it comes to the formatting, but other than that, it's pretty good. I feel you should do many more and I believe you can do much better as you write more.