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NintendoFanKimmy: Legend in the Making - Chapter Fourteen

 

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NintendoFanKimmy:
Legend in the Making



Chapter Fourteen: The Second Avatar



        NintendoFanKimmy
woke up with a start to the sound of her Meganium rustling by the bush inside
her hotel room. “Ouch!” she exclaimed, hitting her head on the clamp attached
to her bed. “Whoa. Déjà-vu-ish.” It had, indeed, rolled along just like the day
her adventure first began. Besides the Pokémon, that is. Kimmy stretched her
arms and yawned. Then, she walked over to Chiko. “Easy, boy…” she calmed it
down, stroking its head. “Return.” Then, she clicked the button on the ball
capsule. Against Chiko’s will, a red beam of light was shot out of the center
of the Pokéball, and it was now back inside. “Odd,” commented Kimmy. “I wonder
why it was so frantic. Chiko’s usually supposed to be carefree un-doubtful
one…” Then, she plopped the capsule into her jacket pocket. “Whatever it is,
it’s something I’ll have to find out later. I’ve got some element bending
lessons to get to,” she suddenly remembered. Then, she dropped her Pokéball
next to the closet. “I’ll be back for you later, buddy!” She called out to it
as she opened the door. Then, she carefully closed it back and wrinkled her
nose; the creak of the door hinges moving was aggravating. Then, she pulled on
her light green gloves with cut-out fingertips and dark green collars around
her wrists. She dashed out of the large, automatic front door and quickly
walked down the same steps she treaded on the way to dinner with Clifton Smith
the prior night. It certainly felt less pressured this time. She swung around
the corner and finally spotted the wide, one-story building where she had first
met her trainer with Jerry and greenluigi. Speaking of which, she bumped into
them, along with the rest of the group along the way. “Ouch,” she muttered once
again, rubbing her forehead and dusting her jeans after getting up. “Oh. It’s
you guys again!” A user of this, Mr. Zed, Matthew231, greenluigi, and Jerry all
had the same facial expressions: “What.” NintendoFanKimmy caught her breath and
proceeded to explain. “You see, I forgot to attend my first lesson yesterday.”
Green sighed. “We sort of noticed that, Kimmy. Why are you in such a hurry?”
Kimmy was confused. “Well, duh! To make sure I don’t miss them this time!”
Then, both green and Jerry smirked. Mr. Zed walked over to her. “I hate to
break it to you, Kimmy, but they probably won’t let you in,” he said. Then,
Kimmy summoned all her courage and confidence. “What makes you think so? The
trainer is a nice guy, after all. Why don’t you guys come with me? I’ll need
some support.” Mr. Zed shrugged. “Sounds good to me.” Then, everyone followed,
trying to keep up with the rushing Kimmy all the way to entrance of the
Japanese-themed building. NintendoFanKimmy took a deep breath, and then
exhaled. She knocked on the wooden door and made a step backward; her friends
eagerly waiting behind her. It was sort of difficult to anticipate what would
happen next. Then, the door slowly opened. All six friends walked into the room
and gulped. Suddenly, the trainer appeared in front of them after they had
their heads turned. Then, he frowned. Kimmy’s hopes suddenly went down the
drain. “Well, that was unexpected. Listen, I’m sorry about yesterday. But it
was only my first lesson!” The old man closed his eyes and shook his head.
Then, he crossed his arms. “Sorry, kid. I can’t afford to train people with no
loyalty or passion to the sport. You obviously don’t have it.” NintendoFanKimmy
suddenly felt a burning rage inside her, but she sighed and tried to keep it
cool and collected. “Listen. I just forgot. I am more passionate about elements
than anyone else you’ll ever meet. Trust me, Master.” Then, her ‘trainer’
scoffed. “Don’t you dare call me Master. People would pity me to think I would
train an oaf such as you.” While trying to stay calm, Kimmy’s rage inside began
to boil. “I will say this one more time, sir. I apologize.” Then, the supposed
trainer made an intriguing glare “Get out of here, Kimmy.” Then,
NintendoFanKimmy’s rage was unleashed. Her whole body temperature was rising,
and everyone backed away in awe. Large sparking flames of fire burned brightly
on both of her hands, yet she was not hurt. In fact, she seemed to have created
the fire, and was controlling it, too. Then, she controlled water, earth, and
air. She began to tear ever so slightly, while still frowning a wielding the
burning flames. “Listen,” she began, trying not to sound threatening. “As you
can see, elements are something I definitely have passion and the heart to
learn how to control. All you didn’t give me was time and a second chance.
Those are two things that most people don’t give to anything – like life. Why
can’t you understand that everything can change? We have been through Hell, and
we are trying to kill of a large threat to our city and the Electronic World.
Each and every single one of us is working on our strengths so we at least have
a chance. Now, all of this suffering and hard work to get to where we are is
for nothing because of an old man giving up on a possible legend in the making
for missing her first bending lesson to live a life for one night for the first
time since the whole XZH mess started?” Everyone was speechless in awe, and the
entire room was quiet for a second. “You are the second Avatar.”


NintendoFanKimmy:
Legend in the Making



Chapter Fourteen: The Second Avatar



        NintendoFanKimmy
woke up with a start to the sound of her Meganium rustling by the bush inside
her hotel room. “Ouch!” she exclaimed, hitting her head on the clamp attached
to her bed. “Whoa. Déjà-vu-ish.” It had, indeed, rolled along just like the day
her adventure first began. Besides the Pokémon, that is. Kimmy stretched her
arms and yawned. Then, she walked over to Chiko. “Easy, boy…” she calmed it
down, stroking its head. “Return.” Then, she clicked the button on the ball
capsule. Against Chiko’s will, a red beam of light was shot out of the center
of the Pokéball, and it was now back inside. “Odd,” commented Kimmy. “I wonder
why it was so frantic. Chiko’s usually supposed to be carefree un-doubtful
one…” Then, she plopped the capsule into her jacket pocket. “Whatever it is,
it’s something I’ll have to find out later. I’ve got some element bending
lessons to get to,” she suddenly remembered. Then, she dropped her Pokéball
next to the closet. “I’ll be back for you later, buddy!” She called out to it
as she opened the door. Then, she carefully closed it back and wrinkled her
nose; the creak of the door hinges moving was aggravating. Then, she pulled on
her light green gloves with cut-out fingertips and dark green collars around
her wrists. She dashed out of the large, automatic front door and quickly
walked down the same steps she treaded on the way to dinner with Clifton Smith
the prior night. It certainly felt less pressured this time. She swung around
the corner and finally spotted the wide, one-story building where she had first
met her trainer with Jerry and greenluigi. Speaking of which, she bumped into
them, along with the rest of the group along the way. “Ouch,” she muttered once
again, rubbing her forehead and dusting her jeans after getting up. “Oh. It’s
you guys again!” A user of this, Mr. Zed, Matthew231, greenluigi, and Jerry all
had the same facial expressions: “What.” NintendoFanKimmy caught her breath and
proceeded to explain. “You see, I forgot to attend my first lesson yesterday.”
Green sighed. “We sort of noticed that, Kimmy. Why are you in such a hurry?”
Kimmy was confused. “Well, duh! To make sure I don’t miss them this time!”
Then, both green and Jerry smirked. Mr. Zed walked over to her. “I hate to
break it to you, Kimmy, but they probably won’t let you in,” he said. Then,
Kimmy summoned all her courage and confidence. “What makes you think so? The
trainer is a nice guy, after all. Why don’t you guys come with me? I’ll need
some support.” Mr. Zed shrugged. “Sounds good to me.” Then, everyone followed,
trying to keep up with the rushing Kimmy all the way to entrance of the
Japanese-themed building. NintendoFanKimmy took a deep breath, and then
exhaled. She knocked on the wooden door and made a step backward; her friends
eagerly waiting behind her. It was sort of difficult to anticipate what would
happen next. Then, the door slowly opened. All six friends walked into the room
and gulped. Suddenly, the trainer appeared in front of them after they had
their heads turned. Then, he frowned. Kimmy’s hopes suddenly went down the
drain. “Well, that was unexpected. Listen, I’m sorry about yesterday. But it
was only my first lesson!” The old man closed his eyes and shook his head.
Then, he crossed his arms. “Sorry, kid. I can’t afford to train people with no
loyalty or passion to the sport. You obviously don’t have it.” NintendoFanKimmy
suddenly felt a burning rage inside her, but she sighed and tried to keep it
cool and collected. “Listen. I just forgot. I am more passionate about elements
than anyone else you’ll ever meet. Trust me, Master.” Then, her ‘trainer’
scoffed. “Don’t you dare call me Master. People would pity me to think I would
train an oaf such as you.” While trying to stay calm, Kimmy’s rage inside began
to boil. “I will say this one more time, sir. I apologize.” Then, the supposed
trainer made an intriguing glare “Get out of here, Kimmy.” Then,
NintendoFanKimmy’s rage was unleashed. Her whole body temperature was rising,
and everyone backed away in awe. Large sparking flames of fire burned brightly
on both of her hands, yet she was not hurt. In fact, she seemed to have created
the fire, and was controlling it, too. Then, she controlled water, earth, and
air. She began to tear ever so slightly, while still frowning a wielding the
burning flames. “Listen,” she began, trying not to sound threatening. “As you
can see, elements are something I definitely have passion and the heart to
learn how to control. All you didn’t give me was time and a second chance.
Those are two things that most people don’t give to anything – like life. Why
can’t you understand that everything can change? We have been through Hell, and
we are trying to kill of a large threat to our city and the Electronic World.
Each and every single one of us is working on our strengths so we at least have
a chance. Now, all of this suffering and hard work to get to where we are is
for nothing because of an old man giving up on a possible legend in the making
for missing her first bending lesson to live a life for one night for the first
time since the whole XZH mess started?” Everyone was speechless in awe, and the
entire room was quiet for a second. “You are the second Avatar.”


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woah kimmy i really liked this one. especially the ending was very impressive
woah kimmy i really liked this one. especially the ending was very impressive
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NintendoFanKimmy : I have a question: in a chapter I'm I gonna get the sword of vizzed?
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Woah! Nice twist at the end. I like where this story is going!

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If you're taking suggestions, I'd like a Pikmin army. Please? :3
Woah! Nice twist at the end. I like where this story is going!

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If you're taking suggestions, I'd like a Pikmin army. Please? :3
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A user of this : You;re lucky, I was just about to start writing the next chapter! Coming right up !

greenluigi : I'm still thinking about it.
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