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Golden Tales Chapter 3
01-18-14 05:26 PM
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Chapter 3:A reincarnation (Chapter two: https://www.vizzed.com/boards/thread.php?id=70567 ) A user of this was very confused. His favorite video game was Legend of Zelda Majora's Mask, and it seemed like the game came to life. In the game, the Deku king is angry about his daughter being kidnapped. Eirinn seemed like Kafei, and Barathemos could have been the monkey. Mohammed would probably be the role of either the Happy Mask Salesman or Tatl. Skull Kid? Unknown. Anyways, he had to go to these mountains, which could be like Snowhead. There's some monster's base there, and as we saw last time, the kingdom is in peril. "Okay, I guess I'm going to this monster's base," User said, with a sigh. "You'll need a compass to get there. It's easy to get lost. Take this compass," Eirinn gave User the compass, and User was set to go. User had been a littler nervous about this, but he was taking Mohammed's word. Speaking of Mohammed..."I'll go right now if you take Mohammed out of that insane ward, jail or whatever..." "Torture chamber," King Razor interrupted. "TORTURE CHAMBER? Anyways, as I was going to say, I want Mohammed out of the torture chamber." The king stared at User for a moment, then realized he had no choice, because of his kingdom having a plight. "Fine. Zed!" "YAAARRRGGGG. Y-y-yes sir?" "You and the other guards. Free Mohammed right now, or you're the one that's gonna be worshiped at the shrine! Know what I mean?" "SIR, YES, SIR." Zed and the other guards got Mohammed and brought him to User. "USER! My man!" Mohammed ran to give User a hug, but the guards stopped him at the last moment. "You're still a wanted man, so you don't go near him. You're not coming with him right after the princess's accident!" "URRRGGGGHHH," Denz cried. Denz was still a hairy caveman from some curse that was unknown. Since User had the power of the Kotorkea Gem, which contains the power of the three gods, maybe he could undo the curse. User went up to Denz and held up the stone. A blue glow shined in everyone's faces, and suddenly, Denz was back to normal, but for some reason, he was NICE! "User! What happened?!?" "Long story, Denz," SUX2BU replied. User left the castle to advance to the snowy mountains, and he was a few miles away from the castle. Suddenly he heard a strange sound out of nowhere. It sounded like when Jason Voorhees from Friday the 13th was sneaking up on a victim. Sounded like a train whispering. ("Choo, choo, choo. Huh huh huh...") "BOO!" "YAAAR!" User was frightened. He thought it was another monster. He was swinging his sword like a mad man, but the figure was blocking the attacks with its shield. "Heh heh. It's me, Prince Eirinn!" "Pptttsss. Don't scare me like that!" "Heh heh. Sorry. Anyways, I've got a present for you. I hope it will help you!" Eirinn handed user an iron shield that had a white cross on the front. Now User was equipped with a melee weapon and a shield that would provide good coverage. "So, User, I've decided to come with you! I've always wanted to go on an adventure, but my father stops me from doing so. He's known for making nimble and horrible decisions." "Kinda like Barack Obama," User said. "Who?" "Never mind..." Eirinn and User were walking towards the direction of the mountains, still. "So you're the 'hero who will save our kingdom,' eh?" "I guess so," User replied....."Thanks for the shield. I'm sure it will be useful for going to this monster's lair later down the road in the mountains." "You're welcome....you know, ever since my sister Eniitan, the princess you know, has been missing, I've kinda gone through a lot of depression. She's a great sibling to have..." "Huh. Well we know she's in this monster's lair, so we should find her soon, and..." "But," Eirinn interrupted, "What if she's DEAD? You haven't seen the creatures that lurk around here. It's happened ever since Mohammed and Zed have been away for some 'adventure.' So you know them?" "Yeah. Mohammed greeted me at Earth, and Zed was kinda that crazy guy we both ran into when I arrived with Mohammed. Anyways, I'm sorry about your sister. I highly doubt Barathemos is the one who caused all of this. He's obviously innocent, he probably could do nothing when it came to rescuing her." "You know, according to my father, whoever catches the culprit who caused this gets to marry Eniitan. Heh, she's thirteen by the way. " "That's MY age!" "Oh. Well that works out fine then, User." Eirinn gave User a wink, and User just chuckled. "Eirinn...tell me more about these three gods creating this universe. I need more vivid detail." "User...that is a story that I'm sure you will learn later on. Eniitan will probably tell you, I'm sure of it. Say, how'd you know about that?" "Well, Mohammed told me. In not much detail, though, just saying. I want to learn more about this place. Where I truly am. Why I'm killing all these creatures." "I think Mohammed has the answer to that, but I'm not exactly sure. He told us something about aGolden Stone that had some?foreign writing.?" "Wait, a wha-" "We're here," Eirinn interrupted...again. Some of the peaks reached as tall as Mount Everest. There was a strong gust of wind. Eirinn and User forced themselves through the wind, and there was no explanation of where the wind was blowing from. Suddenly they came across a small log cabin. "Someone lives here? Let's investigate." They opened the door, quickly shut it, and collapsed inside. "Hee hee. Welcome, User!" A familiar voice...SUX2BU. "SUX!" User said. "How'd you get here so quick? Some Warp Hall? HA" "Um...yeah, actually I did go through a warp hall." "HUH?" "Anyways..." continued SUX, "My bud Denz is here too! Anyways, what would you and your handsome friend like, User?" "I want the battleaxe!" "You're only thirteen for crying out loud!" "How'd you even know that?!" "...Never mind! So, you boys are here in the mountains, are you. Monster's lair...anyways, Denz and I have prepared you something for the climate! Take these coats. They're super warm!" "Hey, what about me?" Eirinn asked. "Nah, go get hypothermia. Just kidding. You get one too." Eirinn and User were now decked out and ready for the cold. The cabin, by the way, had a ton of tools and weapons, kinda like Ol' Smithy back at the castle area. Scary or not, User was ready for anything. People mentioned: SUX2BU : A user of this : Eirinn : Eniitan : Barathemos : Razor-987 : DenzGamer135 : mohammedroxx3 : A user of this was very confused. His favorite video game was Legend of Zelda Majora's Mask, and it seemed like the game came to life. In the game, the Deku king is angry about his daughter being kidnapped. Eirinn seemed like Kafei, and Barathemos could have been the monkey. Mohammed would probably be the role of either the Happy Mask Salesman or Tatl. Skull Kid? Unknown. Anyways, he had to go to these mountains, which could be like Snowhead. There's some monster's base there, and as we saw last time, the kingdom is in peril. "Okay, I guess I'm going to this monster's base," User said, with a sigh. "You'll need a compass to get there. It's easy to get lost. Take this compass," Eirinn gave User the compass, and User was set to go. User had been a littler nervous about this, but he was taking Mohammed's word. Speaking of Mohammed..."I'll go right now if you take Mohammed out of that insane ward, jail or whatever..." "Torture chamber," King Razor interrupted. "TORTURE CHAMBER? Anyways, as I was going to say, I want Mohammed out of the torture chamber." The king stared at User for a moment, then realized he had no choice, because of his kingdom having a plight. "Fine. Zed!" "YAAARRRGGGG. Y-y-yes sir?" "You and the other guards. Free Mohammed right now, or you're the one that's gonna be worshiped at the shrine! Know what I mean?" "SIR, YES, SIR." Zed and the other guards got Mohammed and brought him to User. "USER! My man!" Mohammed ran to give User a hug, but the guards stopped him at the last moment. "You're still a wanted man, so you don't go near him. You're not coming with him right after the princess's accident!" "URRRGGGGHHH," Denz cried. Denz was still a hairy caveman from some curse that was unknown. Since User had the power of the Kotorkea Gem, which contains the power of the three gods, maybe he could undo the curse. User went up to Denz and held up the stone. A blue glow shined in everyone's faces, and suddenly, Denz was back to normal, but for some reason, he was NICE! "User! What happened?!?" "Long story, Denz," SUX2BU replied. User left the castle to advance to the snowy mountains, and he was a few miles away from the castle. Suddenly he heard a strange sound out of nowhere. It sounded like when Jason Voorhees from Friday the 13th was sneaking up on a victim. Sounded like a train whispering. ("Choo, choo, choo. Huh huh huh...") "BOO!" "YAAAR!" User was frightened. He thought it was another monster. He was swinging his sword like a mad man, but the figure was blocking the attacks with its shield. "Heh heh. It's me, Prince Eirinn!" "Pptttsss. Don't scare me like that!" "Heh heh. Sorry. Anyways, I've got a present for you. I hope it will help you!" Eirinn handed user an iron shield that had a white cross on the front. Now User was equipped with a melee weapon and a shield that would provide good coverage. "So, User, I've decided to come with you! I've always wanted to go on an adventure, but my father stops me from doing so. He's known for making nimble and horrible decisions." "Kinda like Barack Obama," User said. "Who?" "Never mind..." Eirinn and User were walking towards the direction of the mountains, still. "So you're the 'hero who will save our kingdom,' eh?" "I guess so," User replied....."Thanks for the shield. I'm sure it will be useful for going to this monster's lair later down the road in the mountains." "You're welcome....you know, ever since my sister Eniitan, the princess you know, has been missing, I've kinda gone through a lot of depression. She's a great sibling to have..." "Huh. Well we know she's in this monster's lair, so we should find her soon, and..." "But," Eirinn interrupted, "What if she's DEAD? You haven't seen the creatures that lurk around here. It's happened ever since Mohammed and Zed have been away for some 'adventure.' So you know them?" "Yeah. Mohammed greeted me at Earth, and Zed was kinda that crazy guy we both ran into when I arrived with Mohammed. Anyways, I'm sorry about your sister. I highly doubt Barathemos is the one who caused all of this. He's obviously innocent, he probably could do nothing when it came to rescuing her." "You know, according to my father, whoever catches the culprit who caused this gets to marry Eniitan. Heh, she's thirteen by the way. " "That's MY age!" "Oh. Well that works out fine then, User." Eirinn gave User a wink, and User just chuckled. "Eirinn...tell me more about these three gods creating this universe. I need more vivid detail." "User...that is a story that I'm sure you will learn later on. Eniitan will probably tell you, I'm sure of it. Say, how'd you know about that?" "Well, Mohammed told me. In not much detail, though, just saying. I want to learn more about this place. Where I truly am. Why I'm killing all these creatures." "I think Mohammed has the answer to that, but I'm not exactly sure. He told us something about aGolden Stone that had some?foreign writing.?" "Wait, a wha-" "We're here," Eirinn interrupted...again. Some of the peaks reached as tall as Mount Everest. There was a strong gust of wind. Eirinn and User forced themselves through the wind, and there was no explanation of where the wind was blowing from. Suddenly they came across a small log cabin. "Someone lives here? Let's investigate." They opened the door, quickly shut it, and collapsed inside. "Hee hee. Welcome, User!" A familiar voice...SUX2BU. "SUX!" User said. "How'd you get here so quick? Some Warp Hall? HA" "Um...yeah, actually I did go through a warp hall." "HUH?" "Anyways..." continued SUX, "My bud Denz is here too! Anyways, what would you and your handsome friend like, User?" "I want the battleaxe!" "You're only thirteen for crying out loud!" "How'd you even know that?!" "...Never mind! So, you boys are here in the mountains, are you. Monster's lair...anyways, Denz and I have prepared you something for the climate! Take these coats. They're super warm!" "Hey, what about me?" Eirinn asked. "Nah, go get hypothermia. Just kidding. You get one too." Eirinn and User were now decked out and ready for the cold. The cabin, by the way, had a ton of tools and weapons, kinda like Ol' Smithy back at the castle area. Scary or not, User was ready for anything. People mentioned: SUX2BU : A user of this : Eirinn : Eniitan : Barathemos : Razor-987 : DenzGamer135 : mohammedroxx3 : |
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(edited by PixelBrick on 01-18-14 06:01 PM) Post Rating: 2 Liked By: Mohammedroxx3, SUX2BU,
01-18-14 05:48 PM
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I really love your story pixel I enjoyed this chapter as well. I hope to see more from you very soon. ^-^ |
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Nice chapter! I'm 15 though :V. But I guess all adaptations need a little change. I wonder if my friends and I successfully rescue the princess or not. Nice chapter! I'm 15 though :V. But I guess all adaptations need a little change. I wonder if my friends and I successfully rescue the princess or not. |
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A user of this : Well it's a story. Of course you will. The good guy always wins in every story, except Wringer! And I know you're fifteen, but I wanted the relationship to sound a little less perverted.  |
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It's been a great chapter, and I really enjoyed it. I have a question though. If Eniitan is 13 in the story, how old is Eirinn? |
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