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MARIO Review

 
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01-17-14 09:01 AM
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A supposedly scary (CreepyPasta) game. It starts of weird but it's certainly not scary.

The problem is, it's all to innocent, with the same actual graphics from SMW! Though their is lack of things going on. No enemies but a few in one level. A cheeky, invisible floor level in which you have to remember when not to fall (NOT A SPOILER BUT A WARNING), and odd text when you hit the speakers.

Nice that the old music is in it, a few silent levels and the sound effects are all there.


The game isn't long, this could be finished within 10-15 minutes.

I would rather have played this using a controller than a keyboard, over wise it's easy to use.

OVERALL: I won't be playing this again, fun for a few seconds but doesn't built up to the hype I've heard. Worth a lot, but don't expect much though.

A supposedly scary (CreepyPasta) game. It starts of weird but it's certainly not scary.

The problem is, it's all to innocent, with the same actual graphics from SMW! Though their is lack of things going on. No enemies but a few in one level. A cheeky, invisible floor level in which you have to remember when not to fall (NOT A SPOILER BUT A WARNING), and odd text when you hit the speakers.

Nice that the old music is in it, a few silent levels and the sound effects are all there.


The game isn't long, this could be finished within 10-15 minutes.

I would rather have played this using a controller than a keyboard, over wise it's easy to use.

OVERALL: I won't be playing this again, fun for a few seconds but doesn't built up to the hype I've heard. Worth a lot, but don't expect much though.
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Billows84 : this is a nice review you made. But it still needs work though. You could make it longer and break it down it different categories as well. Overall nice job. Have a nice day.
Billows84 : this is a nice review you made. But it still needs work though. You could make it longer and break it down it different categories as well. Overall nice job. Have a nice day.
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This is not a very good review. I think you could put the categories into sections and add a lot more detail into the review.
This is not a very good review. I think you could put the categories into sections and add a lot more detail into the review.
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It was my first review, so of course it's not going to be good, though I accept your criticism and will use this as a learning curb.


To be honest, it wasn't really worth spreading out to make a long review. It's 10 minutes long, hence my review being short, simple and to the point and yes I know it's got to be over 100 words but that's just to get Viz (Which I don't/haven't use(d)

Anyway, thanks for your time reading the review.
It was my first review, so of course it's not going to be good, though I accept your criticism and will use this as a learning curb.


To be honest, it wasn't really worth spreading out to make a long review. It's 10 minutes long, hence my review being short, simple and to the point and yes I know it's got to be over 100 words but that's just to get Viz (Which I don't/haven't use(d)

Anyway, thanks for your time reading the review.
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Not bad for a first review, but as supercool said, you could break it down into categories and then go from there with talking about each one in depth. So you can categorize it by graphics, sound, addictiveness, etc and then talk about each one in detail and then explain the reason why you gave each one that score. At least you were able to meet the 100 minimum word count, the only thing I can say is to keep reviewing because it is just one of those things that you get better at through mastery, so the more you review, they will start getting better, longer, and more detailed naturally. 

Just keep up the hard work and keep reviewing! 
Not bad for a first review, but as supercool said, you could break it down into categories and then go from there with talking about each one in depth. So you can categorize it by graphics, sound, addictiveness, etc and then talk about each one in detail and then explain the reason why you gave each one that score. At least you were able to meet the 100 minimum word count, the only thing I can say is to keep reviewing because it is just one of those things that you get better at through mastery, so the more you review, they will start getting better, longer, and more detailed naturally. 

Just keep up the hard work and keep reviewing! 
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Okay, I was never expecting a 800+ word count on a creepypasta review, but you could've certainly elaborated a bit further on what to expect here. Like you said, when the game's that short, there isn't much to be said about it and as such, the review is probably going to be short, too. But this is a little bit too short, don't you think? When one of the comments on your review is almost as long as your review, you didn't really try enough.

By the way, I think most creepypasta games are short. That's like a thing. Creepypasta games are games that are simply messed with a little bit and are supposed to give you a quick creepfest or screw with your mind a little bit, but they are usually over in like a minute. The longest creepypasta game I've played was Pokémon Creepy Black, which lasted for the entire actual game.
Okay, I was never expecting a 800+ word count on a creepypasta review, but you could've certainly elaborated a bit further on what to expect here. Like you said, when the game's that short, there isn't much to be said about it and as such, the review is probably going to be short, too. But this is a little bit too short, don't you think? When one of the comments on your review is almost as long as your review, you didn't really try enough.

By the way, I think most creepypasta games are short. That's like a thing. Creepypasta games are games that are simply messed with a little bit and are supposed to give you a quick creepfest or screw with your mind a little bit, but they are usually over in like a minute. The longest creepypasta game I've played was Pokémon Creepy Black, which lasted for the entire actual game.
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This is a good review, but its too short. You did everything right, but next time, try to add more detail to make it a bit longer. I hope you do another one and that you try harder.
This is a good review, but its too short. You did everything right, but next time, try to add more detail to make it a bit longer. I hope you do another one and that you try harder.
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Little bit on the short side. But they can only get better from here, right! Decent review for your first time though
Little bit on the short side. But they can only get better from here, right! Decent review for your first time though
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Billows84 : yea i agree break it up and make it longer the longer and more descriptive it is the more respect you gain
Billows84 : yea i agree break it up and make it longer the longer and more descriptive it is the more respect you gain
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Just to let you know, you DON'T have to break it down into categories. For some reason, a lot of users post that EVERY time there is a review that isn't broken into categories, and it gives the impression that you have to do it for anyone to like it. Review how you want to review. Don't get pushed into doing them just how you are told.
Just to let you know, you DON'T have to break it down into categories. For some reason, a lot of users post that EVERY time there is a review that isn't broken into categories, and it gives the impression that you have to do it for anyone to like it. Review how you want to review. Don't get pushed into doing them just how you are told.
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Billows84 : oh dear... not this mod again THE VOICES THE VOICES GET THEM OUT HE WILL PAY FOR HIS CRIMES MARIO WILL..
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