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A Short Film I Made

 

01-16-14 07:44 PM
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So as some of you know I have a YouTube channel, and for the first time I decided to try to make a more professional looking video. This one is a short film entitled "Revelation". There's a bunch of hidden meanings behind shots and stuff and I just really wanted to see if anyone could give me some feedback.
(Ex. Telling me what I could of done better, what I did good on, etc. )






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So as some of you know I have a YouTube channel, and for the first time I decided to try to make a more professional looking video. This one is a short film entitled "Revelation". There's a bunch of hidden meanings behind shots and stuff and I just really wanted to see if anyone could give me some feedback.
(Ex. Telling me what I could of done better, what I did good on, etc. )






(P.S I am sorry if this is in the wrong section. Please move if necessary )



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I really enjoyed watching your video, Donnie! It was really, really good. I loved the parts where the film speeds up when you walk and about everything from :24 afterwards.

The only thing that might need improvement is the transition from video clip to video clip from :12 - :24. It goes a little too quickly and the rapid transitions strain my eyes a little. That's minor compared to how great the video was, good job!
I really enjoyed watching your video, Donnie! It was really, really good. I loved the parts where the film speeds up when you walk and about everything from :24 afterwards.

The only thing that might need improvement is the transition from video clip to video clip from :12 - :24. It goes a little too quickly and the rapid transitions strain my eyes a little. That's minor compared to how great the video was, good job!

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EideticMemory : Thank you for the amazing feedback. I love your face

EideticMemory : Thank you for the amazing feedback. I love your face


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That was actually a good looking video. I was half expecting to watch a crappy fipcam video. I think you have potential to make even better videos too. This really had me wondering what was going on though it blew my mind for a bit lol.

I think the one bit of criticism I could give would be if you slowed down the video a bit to make it look smoother. But other than that I thought it was wonderful.
That was actually a good looking video. I was half expecting to watch a crappy fipcam video. I think you have potential to make even better videos too. This really had me wondering what was going on though it blew my mind for a bit lol.

I think the one bit of criticism I could give would be if you slowed down the video a bit to make it look smoother. But other than that I thought it was wonderful.

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Blubcreator : I would never post a flipcam video. xD I got a fancy camcorder for xmas so I thought it would be cool to make this video. So thanks for the feedback!


Blubcreator : I would never post a flipcam video. xD I got a fancy camcorder for xmas so I thought it would be cool to make this video. So thanks for the feedback!



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