Wow. Just Derpy Derpzaird! Derpy...but Fun!!!!!!!!!!! Funny too.

This isn't really a review, you are just saying and giving an opinion on the game. For this to be a review, it must at least be 100 words which even still hardly reviews anything in my opinion. I would suggest breaking down the game into categories such as graphics, sound, addictiveness and go from there with talking about each one in detail. Also be sure to be honest about your thoughts of the game, if you thought a part of it wasn't that great, then by all means do talk about it and let your scores do the talking. Also, don't be one of those people that just slap a score down and then move on like this:

Graphics: 5
I dunno...the graphics sucked. THE END

beef it up a bit, elaborate and say what was bad but then say how it could be better, that my friend is reviewing, plus it gives the reader an insight on what the game is really like, so it is a win win sort of thing. 


So I guess you should follow this advice and keep reviewing if you want to get better because making reviews is just one of those things you get better at through repetition, so keep on trying. Hope this helps! I think you have potential! Happy New year! 

logan5123 : Yeah, this is way too short to be a review, but with your age and this being your first review, I'll be a little less onto you about making a review, but just to let you know, it's best to study the rules of review making (read this thread, this will help you..  https://www.vizzed.com/boards/thread.php?id=58382 )

At the mean time, I'm going to close this, sorry.