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There She Was And There I Am
a poem about being there and realising life has meaning
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12-08-13 05:43 AM
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There she was,standing in the rain

An image of Heavenly delight,like Mary Magdalene

She knew my suffering and pain,all that I have been through

She yelled out to me,"Come here,I need to speak to you"

I went over to her with feelings of hope,I felt alive and full of joy

She rubbed the growing bump on her belly,she said "I think it's a boy"

I felt then that life has a purpose,a reason to be there

And there I am,with love and care

There she was standing in the rain.....

....And here we are,together again
There she was,standing in the rain

An image of Heavenly delight,like Mary Magdalene

She knew my suffering and pain,all that I have been through

She yelled out to me,"Come here,I need to speak to you"

I went over to her with feelings of hope,I felt alive and full of joy

She rubbed the growing bump on her belly,she said "I think it's a boy"

I felt then that life has a purpose,a reason to be there

And there I am,with love and care

There she was standing in the rain.....

....And here we are,together again
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Oo, definitely love this one.
Oo, definitely love this one.
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This is a beautiful poem! Great job with conveying the emotions.
This is a beautiful poem! Great job with conveying the emotions.
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