This game honestly surprised me I thought it would be a simple modded fire red but it ACTUALLY is a pretty decent modification and is well worth the viz 
 1. Graphical features: This game has the better graphics (cause fire red is a great graphic game)  of any other Pokémon game I have played.
(trust me I played almost all but X-Y) from the basics up this is proof that this game is 
2. Sound: I rated this 8 cause the sounds could be better but over all this is impressive.
3 addictiveness: This is 10 cause it is a very addicting game and has a pretty sweet story line and that is enough said on its own.
4. Depth It has a larger storyline similar to the older games like red and blue but it may be larger since I am barely at viridian city gym.
5 How hard is it and overall rating: I gave it a 7 cause it is harder in fights than you'd expect and if you are one of the people that are going
"Catch em all" Then good luck cause there are only 1 of each legendary some legends I had seen are marked below F if I knocked it out 

- Articuno 
- Zapdos
-Moltres F
-Ho-Oh 
-Entei
-Raikou 
-Suicune F
I had not located any other but will go back when I beat game.
OVERALL RATING: 10/10 
Because of the solid storyline, Beautiful sprites, Difficulty , Depth, And its amazing addictive nature. 
If you are a huge Pokémon fan like me you would love this game like I do

Not bad for a first review. I expect you to improve though. You need to add some more detail and information to it. Also, maybe you should try breaking it into categories. 

Nice review to start out. Short and sweet, right to the point. 


As a suggestion however, maybe you can elaborate on your points, like why do the sounds need improvement? 

Nice job, keep up the good work.

Pretty good review here. I will say though, I think you should break it down into categories and really elaborate and explain why this game could use improvement. What was good or bad about it?

Once you really start talking about each part of the game in depth and really explain it, then word count should come easy and naturally.

I think you are off to a good start though, you met and went above the 100 word minimum which is good.

Overall, keep up the good work, this is a pretty solid review, just break it down more and elaborate and explain some things in depth throughout your review. The only other thing I can say is, if you want to improve an get better at reviewing, you have to practice, it takes repetition to master! Keep up the good work and put what I said into consideration for your next review! I look forward to reading it!

Thank You all for the advice I appreciate it!