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10-17-13 09:42 PM
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Ok so this is chapter 10 of book 2 . Thanks for the support for all those who have kept reading . Enjoy 




Day 11 . Aboard Zed's new ship : 



Zed - " Ahoy all ye scurvy dogs , listen up . There be a might steady wind coming in from the south west . We ride the breeze till we make port in Nuuk . 
Crew member 13 - " Nuuk ? But isn't that somewhere in Greenland ? " 
Zed - " Why it is the capital of Greenland . " 
Roger - " And we be taking this elongated course because ? " 
Zed - " Well we have to by pass the waters of a certain captain who wants another certain captain to certainly die certainly . Now if this certain captain were to sail through the waters own by the other certain captain then said captain would certainly die . This I am certain of  .  " 
Roger - " ........... So you are avoiding Dedmond ? "
Zed - " Well yes you can put it that way with no sting or overly used root words " 
Roger - " Aye . We sail northwest till we make port in Nuuk and sail to England from there . " 
Crew Member 2 - " But what of the ship ? It ilooks willing ti collapse in seconds " 
Zed - " If it does " die " on us then we simply take pieces of drift wood and float till we make prt in Greenland . As long as the map is safe " 
Roger - " Thats IF we don't die of frost bite from the Greenland waters first " 







Meanwhile , On The Reapers Bride : 

Dedmond is aboard his ship , still a bit in shock off the intrusion of the English in his waters . His ship was picking up the dead bodies of the English privateers who had been killed in his " battle "  .   All the dead bodies which were found we going to be used as " parts " for the ship . The bones of skeletons were normally used as material to make life boats that were used to make port in places the ship can't .  The rotten flesh as food for Dedmond's " pets " like the ravenous sharks which swarmed near his ship and the maneaters which laced his waters , but only on his command . 





Dedmond - * Walks towards a pile of dead bodies stacked on his ship * You should have listened to the messnager . Then ye would still be alive .... .... Ahhh life . But a toy used and played with like some rag doll . But dying is a weapon used to end those who played with life too much . " 
Skeleton Gregory - " Sir . We have found the Commander's body . What have you we do with it ? "
 Dedmond - " Show it to me " 



The skeleton did as was commanded by the captain and carried the lifeless , grim body of the Commander . Dedmond hold it by the chin with his hand of rotten flesh and exposed bone . 

Dedmond - " Tragic . Just a person doing as commanded by the crown . Such a shame that he could not stay to become a part of my crew like his friend .  * Walks over to Herrald who was already starting to decompose *  Herrald is it ? Did I not send a messanger to warn you of this fate ? Of serving aboard my ship ? " 
Herrald - " England is a mighty and strong country which will never crumble . " 
Dedmond - " How patriotic of you . But sadly .... patriotism isn't going to get you off this ship . But .... tell ya what . If you can get me  way to stop countries like this stronghold of yours to stop tresspassing on my waters .... then maybe I'd be able to set ya free from this fate ..... and li;; ya myself " 
Herrald - " I am not betraying my nation . My King . My homeland . Not for you or for anyone else " 
Dedmond - " You still don't get it do you ? You're dead . Your going to serve on my crew till the seas dry up and there is no more water to sail on . You'll never be free . I am offering you a chance . Tell me how to stop England from intruding on my waters and cut your fate short . Or . Continue serving your country who has to bear no burden or suffer no fate . Its your choice Mr . Herrald . " 
Herrald - " The burden of patriotism is not meant for everyone " 
Dedmond - " Aye . But the burden of serving on my ship is meant for no one  .   Witnessing sometimes innocent souls being sealed in my blade . Wrongfully and heinously punished ? But Have it your way



Dedmond walked off to his cabin and ordered that it was barnikling time . In order for maneaters to grow healthy and well they had to be fed barnickles that grew underneath the ship . New crew members were ordered to scrape the barnickles off and feed them to the maneaters . In order for this to be done , they would have to descend underwater and usually the maneaters would take a bite or ten out of the crew .  Each bite caused horrible pain and sometime members came back missing some limbs . They would have to get some new body parts from the dead bodies that were on ship . The ones that were not moving of course . 


Skeleton Gregory - '" You heard the captain . Grab a rope and start scraping  " 




By time Herrald found some rope other member had already dove off into the water . Screams of horror and pain . Moans of suffering and agony pierced the eardrum of all who heard it . When the first set came back up ... all were missing limbs of some sort . 



Halfdead Rick - " Ye better get diving and return before the arms run out . Hahahahahahha ! " 
Herrald - " No . I won't do it " 


The crew suddenly silenced . Thunder started to roll as the crew slowly stepped back from he opposing the orders of the captain . A flash of lightening struck infront of Herrald and Dedmond appeared looking rather displeased . He had his back turned to Herrald and began to speak . 



Dedmond - " What did you say ?
Herrald - " I-I-I said no " 
Dedmond - " If you do not comply to code of the Bride then you'll be tied to the bottom of the ship and be food for the maneaters . We bring yo back up every now and then so you can add missing body parts and you can be eaten again . Tie him up ......... I want to hear the sweet sound of pain and suffereing .  " 
Herrald - " Wait . England might stop intruding in on your seas if you sign an agreement stating that this part of the ocean belongs to you . " 
Dedmond - * Turns around *  " I knew you would crack eventually . As I said . This burden be fit for no man . How will I get this agreement ? " 
Herrald - " If you arrange a meeting with the head of council requesting for these waters to be in your possession they might listen . " 
Dedmond - " And if they don't . I make them listen Lower the sails !!! Raise the anchor . We are paying our friends in England a little visit " 


A fog covered the ship as it set sail for the north east . The crew of half dead men and skeletons followed the captains orders .  Dedmond walked towards the lifeless body of the commander and took it up by the chin . Used his sword to cut off his head and held it in his hand . A flash of lightening struck and he was teleported to the top of the main sail where the skull was at the top . He removed the skull and placed Commander Williams' head in its place . 



Dedmond - " Thats a nice fit



Ok so that was chapter 10 . Chapter 11 coming soon . Wadya think ? 
Ok so this is chapter 10 of book 2 . Thanks for the support for all those who have kept reading . Enjoy 




Day 11 . Aboard Zed's new ship : 



Zed - " Ahoy all ye scurvy dogs , listen up . There be a might steady wind coming in from the south west . We ride the breeze till we make port in Nuuk . 
Crew member 13 - " Nuuk ? But isn't that somewhere in Greenland ? " 
Zed - " Why it is the capital of Greenland . " 
Roger - " And we be taking this elongated course because ? " 
Zed - " Well we have to by pass the waters of a certain captain who wants another certain captain to certainly die certainly . Now if this certain captain were to sail through the waters own by the other certain captain then said captain would certainly die . This I am certain of  .  " 
Roger - " ........... So you are avoiding Dedmond ? "
Zed - " Well yes you can put it that way with no sting or overly used root words " 
Roger - " Aye . We sail northwest till we make port in Nuuk and sail to England from there . " 
Crew Member 2 - " But what of the ship ? It ilooks willing ti collapse in seconds " 
Zed - " If it does " die " on us then we simply take pieces of drift wood and float till we make prt in Greenland . As long as the map is safe " 
Roger - " Thats IF we don't die of frost bite from the Greenland waters first " 







Meanwhile , On The Reapers Bride : 

Dedmond is aboard his ship , still a bit in shock off the intrusion of the English in his waters . His ship was picking up the dead bodies of the English privateers who had been killed in his " battle "  .   All the dead bodies which were found we going to be used as " parts " for the ship . The bones of skeletons were normally used as material to make life boats that were used to make port in places the ship can't .  The rotten flesh as food for Dedmond's " pets " like the ravenous sharks which swarmed near his ship and the maneaters which laced his waters , but only on his command . 





Dedmond - * Walks towards a pile of dead bodies stacked on his ship * You should have listened to the messnager . Then ye would still be alive .... .... Ahhh life . But a toy used and played with like some rag doll . But dying is a weapon used to end those who played with life too much . " 
Skeleton Gregory - " Sir . We have found the Commander's body . What have you we do with it ? "
 Dedmond - " Show it to me " 



The skeleton did as was commanded by the captain and carried the lifeless , grim body of the Commander . Dedmond hold it by the chin with his hand of rotten flesh and exposed bone . 

Dedmond - " Tragic . Just a person doing as commanded by the crown . Such a shame that he could not stay to become a part of my crew like his friend .  * Walks over to Herrald who was already starting to decompose *  Herrald is it ? Did I not send a messanger to warn you of this fate ? Of serving aboard my ship ? " 
Herrald - " England is a mighty and strong country which will never crumble . " 
Dedmond - " How patriotic of you . But sadly .... patriotism isn't going to get you off this ship . But .... tell ya what . If you can get me  way to stop countries like this stronghold of yours to stop tresspassing on my waters .... then maybe I'd be able to set ya free from this fate ..... and li;; ya myself " 
Herrald - " I am not betraying my nation . My King . My homeland . Not for you or for anyone else " 
Dedmond - " You still don't get it do you ? You're dead . Your going to serve on my crew till the seas dry up and there is no more water to sail on . You'll never be free . I am offering you a chance . Tell me how to stop England from intruding on my waters and cut your fate short . Or . Continue serving your country who has to bear no burden or suffer no fate . Its your choice Mr . Herrald . " 
Herrald - " The burden of patriotism is not meant for everyone " 
Dedmond - " Aye . But the burden of serving on my ship is meant for no one  .   Witnessing sometimes innocent souls being sealed in my blade . Wrongfully and heinously punished ? But Have it your way



Dedmond walked off to his cabin and ordered that it was barnikling time . In order for maneaters to grow healthy and well they had to be fed barnickles that grew underneath the ship . New crew members were ordered to scrape the barnickles off and feed them to the maneaters . In order for this to be done , they would have to descend underwater and usually the maneaters would take a bite or ten out of the crew .  Each bite caused horrible pain and sometime members came back missing some limbs . They would have to get some new body parts from the dead bodies that were on ship . The ones that were not moving of course . 


Skeleton Gregory - '" You heard the captain . Grab a rope and start scraping  " 




By time Herrald found some rope other member had already dove off into the water . Screams of horror and pain . Moans of suffering and agony pierced the eardrum of all who heard it . When the first set came back up ... all were missing limbs of some sort . 



Halfdead Rick - " Ye better get diving and return before the arms run out . Hahahahahahha ! " 
Herrald - " No . I won't do it " 


The crew suddenly silenced . Thunder started to roll as the crew slowly stepped back from he opposing the orders of the captain . A flash of lightening struck infront of Herrald and Dedmond appeared looking rather displeased . He had his back turned to Herrald and began to speak . 



Dedmond - " What did you say ?
Herrald - " I-I-I said no " 
Dedmond - " If you do not comply to code of the Bride then you'll be tied to the bottom of the ship and be food for the maneaters . We bring yo back up every now and then so you can add missing body parts and you can be eaten again . Tie him up ......... I want to hear the sweet sound of pain and suffereing .  " 
Herrald - " Wait . England might stop intruding in on your seas if you sign an agreement stating that this part of the ocean belongs to you . " 
Dedmond - * Turns around *  " I knew you would crack eventually . As I said . This burden be fit for no man . How will I get this agreement ? " 
Herrald - " If you arrange a meeting with the head of council requesting for these waters to be in your possession they might listen . " 
Dedmond - " And if they don't . I make them listen Lower the sails !!! Raise the anchor . We are paying our friends in England a little visit " 


A fog covered the ship as it set sail for the north east . The crew of half dead men and skeletons followed the captains orders .  Dedmond walked towards the lifeless body of the commander and took it up by the chin . Used his sword to cut off his head and held it in his hand . A flash of lightening struck and he was teleported to the top of the main sail where the skull was at the top . He removed the skull and placed Commander Williams' head in its place . 



Dedmond - " Thats a nice fit



Ok so that was chapter 10 . Chapter 11 coming soon . Wadya think ? 
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Cool story man, I like the pirate type dialouge and setting in this story. I think you are very creative and this story is unique and well made at the same time. I like how you put the title of the setting above each paragraph, it can be really useful in clearing confusion.

You put a lot of effort and detail into making this a good story by making it nearly 1,500 words, so nice job. Keep up the great work man and keep making more awesome stories! With practice comes perfection, so keep writing! I can't wait for the next part, I am sure it will be great!
Cool story man, I like the pirate type dialouge and setting in this story. I think you are very creative and this story is unique and well made at the same time. I like how you put the title of the setting above each paragraph, it can be really useful in clearing confusion.

You put a lot of effort and detail into making this a good story by making it nearly 1,500 words, so nice job. Keep up the great work man and keep making more awesome stories! With practice comes perfection, so keep writing! I can't wait for the next part, I am sure it will be great!
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Excellent writing as always Zed . Good job coming up with all this! You've got a really talented, and creative mind. I can't wait for the next chapter!
Excellent writing as always Zed . Good job coming up with all this! You've got a really talented, and creative mind. I can't wait for the next chapter!
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