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10-05-13 12:35 PM
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Am I really on chapter six already? Wow. Well this is chapter six of my story, I hope you like it.

CHAPTER 6

A spy? I thought. No way! Wouldn't they have given away our location? Reading my mind, Razor-987 said "Us Things have no sense of direction. We don't know where we are in relation to anything else. We don't know which way is east, west, north, or south. That is why Singelli was asking you. Because you are the only one that can tell her." So there was a spy. But who was it?

I watched all of the Things pretty carefully that night. No one did anything suspicious that lead me to believe that they were the spy. Frustrated, I went to bed.

In the middle of the night, I awoke to what sounded like whispering. I curiously get out if bed to investigate. I tip toed around until I saw someone on a phone. "Yeah the knew guy's name is Tommy." the person said into the phone. "No, he doesn't have a code name yet. I can sense his power and greatness, we need to stop him. He is a big threat. Ok, sounds good." I hid in a dark corner. As he walked passed me I got a glimpse of his face. It was Divine Aurora.

As soon as I woke up the next morning I went to share what I had whitnessed the night before, "goodboy!" I yelled 'goodboy! I have to tell you something important!" "Ok but first, we need to give you a code name." he siad. 'You code name is... tgags123!" "What does that mean?" I asked "It means that you are no longer Tommy, but now tgags123." he explained. "You and everyone else will refer to you as tgags123, It also means that you are officially one of us!" "Awesome!" I replied. "But I really have to tell you something. Is there somewhere private we can go?"

goodboy led me to the bathroom. "There are no windows in here and the walls are soundproof" he said. "Just in case someone has a severe case of thephantomgags. We don't need to be hearing that all night." I told him about what I had whitnessed the night before. "No way!" he said. "Divine Aurora is the spy?" he said "We have to tell the others."

Since I was their new leader, I ordered Divine Aurora to go out in disguise and look for any signs of Singelli. The real reason for this is so we could discuss my observations with the others. They all thought I was crazy, excpet for goodboy and, for some reason, TornadoMudkip. "I have been monitoring the other computers and I have noticed that Divine Aurora had been doing some strange things on his." she said. "He has been visiting a website called V7SDTG a lot. I checked out that website. My IP was blocked, but I got around it. It is a website for the Things. Not us, the bad ones."

Well that is it for chapter 6! Sorry that it was shorter than the rest.

goodboy :
Razor-987 :
Singelli :
Divine Aurora :
TornadoMudkip :
Am I really on chapter six already? Wow. Well this is chapter six of my story, I hope you like it.

CHAPTER 6

A spy? I thought. No way! Wouldn't they have given away our location? Reading my mind, Razor-987 said "Us Things have no sense of direction. We don't know where we are in relation to anything else. We don't know which way is east, west, north, or south. That is why Singelli was asking you. Because you are the only one that can tell her." So there was a spy. But who was it?

I watched all of the Things pretty carefully that night. No one did anything suspicious that lead me to believe that they were the spy. Frustrated, I went to bed.

In the middle of the night, I awoke to what sounded like whispering. I curiously get out if bed to investigate. I tip toed around until I saw someone on a phone. "Yeah the knew guy's name is Tommy." the person said into the phone. "No, he doesn't have a code name yet. I can sense his power and greatness, we need to stop him. He is a big threat. Ok, sounds good." I hid in a dark corner. As he walked passed me I got a glimpse of his face. It was Divine Aurora.

As soon as I woke up the next morning I went to share what I had whitnessed the night before, "goodboy!" I yelled 'goodboy! I have to tell you something important!" "Ok but first, we need to give you a code name." he siad. 'You code name is... tgags123!" "What does that mean?" I asked "It means that you are no longer Tommy, but now tgags123." he explained. "You and everyone else will refer to you as tgags123, It also means that you are officially one of us!" "Awesome!" I replied. "But I really have to tell you something. Is there somewhere private we can go?"

goodboy led me to the bathroom. "There are no windows in here and the walls are soundproof" he said. "Just in case someone has a severe case of thephantomgags. We don't need to be hearing that all night." I told him about what I had whitnessed the night before. "No way!" he said. "Divine Aurora is the spy?" he said "We have to tell the others."

Since I was their new leader, I ordered Divine Aurora to go out in disguise and look for any signs of Singelli. The real reason for this is so we could discuss my observations with the others. They all thought I was crazy, excpet for goodboy and, for some reason, TornadoMudkip. "I have been monitoring the other computers and I have noticed that Divine Aurora had been doing some strange things on his." she said. "He has been visiting a website called V7SDTG a lot. I checked out that website. My IP was blocked, but I got around it. It is a website for the Things. Not us, the bad ones."

Well that is it for chapter 6! Sorry that it was shorter than the rest.

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tgags123 : LOL was the last paragraph in your story a reference to me being perma banned from Vizzed and despite that I IP ban dodged?
Anyways I have read all the other parts of your story but I restrained from commenting until I read how it ends but I comment here mainly due to the last part, furthermore I enjoy reading your short stories they are entertaining.
tgags123 : LOL was the last paragraph in your story a reference to me being perma banned from Vizzed and despite that I IP ban dodged?
Anyways I have read all the other parts of your story but I restrained from commenting until I read how it ends but I comment here mainly due to the last part, furthermore I enjoy reading your short stories they are entertaining.
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Divine Aurora : Actually, it wasn't. The part about you being the spy was based on you actually being Marcus, though. Thank you, I am glad you like them.
Divine Aurora : Actually, it wasn't. The part about you being the spy was based on you actually being Marcus, though. Thank you, I am glad you like them.
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Yesyesyes keep writing pls

I just love these. I've said it enough. Sure, they're short stories, and not very formal. But I just love them so much ogm

keep writing these
Yesyesyes keep writing pls

I just love these. I've said it enough. Sure, they're short stories, and not very formal. But I just love them so much ogm

keep writing these
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The story is getting pretty interesting right now. Hope you keep writing while your at it. So keep doing what you're doing and I'm sure you'll make your stories top notch.
The story is getting pretty interesting right now. Hope you keep writing while your at it. So keep doing what you're doing and I'm sure you'll make your stories top notch.
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wow great story im suprised zed wasnt the only one making stories in vizzed but i love it bro i wonder who else does this id be looking forward the next chapter but wheres chapter one i havent read it please tell me where it is so i can read it and catch up thank you good luck on the next 
wow great story im suprised zed wasnt the only one making stories in vizzed but i love it bro i wonder who else does this id be looking forward the next chapter but wheres chapter one i havent read it please tell me where it is so i can read it and catch up thank you good luck on the next 
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Divine Aurora : Gasp!  Divine Aurora, how could you?  Dadgum you.  Dadgum you to Hades!  I hope you rot in a cell in jail where nobody will bail your tail cause you failed.  Eat more kale.  OK, spammy rant over.  Just kidding, of course!  (except for the kale part)

The story is reaching its climax slowly but surely.  How will this dramatic story end?
Divine Aurora : Gasp!  Divine Aurora, how could you?  Dadgum you.  Dadgum you to Hades!  I hope you rot in a cell in jail where nobody will bail your tail cause you failed.  Eat more kale.  OK, spammy rant over.  Just kidding, of course!  (except for the kale part)

The story is reaching its climax slowly but surely.  How will this dramatic story end?
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