Hello Vizzed! I have decided to write a story about myself using some of my favorite Vizzed members as characters. No, it is not a real story. I haven't planned it out, I am just making it up as I go along. Well, I guess I should start now.

CHAPTER 1

I didn't know how I would survive. I was stranded, alone and defenseless, in "The Place". All hope was gone. Let me start from the beginning. I was just a normal kid. I was smart, nice, and a little nerdy. Everything was good. Until I met goodboy. I met him outside of a gas station. I bumped into him on accident and spilled his soda all over his white jacket. I expected him to yell at me, but he didn't. He said it was ok. We started talking and immediately became friends. He never told me his real name, just that he went by the name"goodboy".

I would hang out with goodboy all the time. We would talk, play video games, and sometimes just hang out. He is two years older than me, but we were still great friends. Everything was great. For a little bit.

We were hanging out one day during the summer, when he told me he had to tell me something. "What is it?" I wondered aloud. "I am not who you think I am." He said. "I have a dark secret that only a few people know." 'What is it?" I asked again, intrigued. "If I tell you, you have to promise to never repeat it to anyone." I agreed "Okay. My secret is.... I am a Thing." I had no idea what he meant. "You mean you haven't heard about the Things?" he asked, shocked that I didn't know what he was talking about. I shook my head. "Well I guess it is safer for me not to tell you" he replied.


That is it for chapter 1! I hope you are enjoying it so far! Stay tuned for the rest of the story! I will summon all of the characters mentioned in the story so far:

goodboy : You are the only character that is in the story thus far. What do you think?

tgags123 : * Falls from sky * Man . That is the last time I drink that much rum . Lets see . Ahh  . A message in a bottle . * Reads story *   Sounds interesting . Wonder what goodboy really is ?  That is nice suspence. And it was short sweet and to the point excellent work man .  Matthew . Have this framed and mounted over my fire place Matthew - " You don't have a fire place . This is a ship . And you mount animal parts over fire places "   Zed - "  Fine then just put it up somewhere. This is good stuff  

Mr. Zed : Hahaha! Thank you! I know I am not the best author, but I try to do the best I can.

tgags123 : Your welcome . And you will get better as you progress I know it  Can't wait for chapter 2  

This is pretty good man! I like that it is suspenseful and it leaves you wanting more, I think that is a great element to have in a story. It was also short, sweet and to the point. I like that you didn't just drag it out forever. I think it is cool how in the story you and goodboy are friends and you play video games together, I think that is awesome and I am glad you put him in your story. 


I agree in the aspect that you will improve in writing the more you write, but this is a great start and I will be reading chapter 2! Good job man, and if this isn't like a real life basis thing like if you really know goodboy or if it is just a story, I would be okay with you putting me in there somewhere, that would be cool. 

Anyways, good work man and I look forward to chapter 2! 

Razor-987 : No it isn't based on real life, and I do plan on putting you, and a lot of other Vizzed users, in the story at some point.

Cool! I cannot wait to see what you have planed for chapter 2 and the rest of the chapters to come ahead. Is this the first story you have written on vizzed/ I think it is pretty good so far, I have only done one myself, but as you continue writing you will be more comfortable and you will get better at doing it. But I think this is a great job so far and I think you will do a good job with he other chapters of your story. 

Keep up the great work and keep writing! 

Nice story... I love how it's become so far! Apparently my white jacket is ruined, but I don't mind. I can lick it off anyways.

But I'm a Thingie... huh? Well then...

goodboy : No no not a Thingie, a Thing. You will see as the story progresses. It may or may not be a bad thing. You don't know yet!

Ah, okay. So I'm a thing.

I hope it's a good thing that gives me awesome powers and... stuff.