Day 1 .  Morning : 




Captain Roger is on the Cape Verde Islands of the west coast of Senegal West Africa . Searching for his old acquaintance , Captain Zed . Asking people native to the island for any sign of Zed .



Roger - " It shouldn't be long now before I find him . If I know Zed he is searching for wealth and fame . A large deposit of gold is supposed to be hidden on this island . " 
Soldier - " Sir . We have asked the locals for any sign of the captain and all have come back negatively . Are you sure that he is on the island ?"
Roger - " He has to be . No doubt about ittttah !! " 


Meanwhile on the other part of the island :


Zed - " Ok . Now that we have landed . Its time to find some food for the journey , weaponry and of course .. more rum . And by find I mean plunder or steal .  Whichever sounds better " 





Though being on opposite ends of the island both captains are assured that the other is present on the landmass .  Zed and his crew Journey to a small village in the heart of the island . And of course .. so does Roger and his crew .  


Roger - " Spread out . I know he is here , hiding . Leave no rock unturnedah . Leave no rum store unchecked .  I must find him . "
Zed - " Ok spread out . You can go find the equipment and I'll go find and drink some rum . "



The crews did as was commanded by their captains . Zed walked of to a winepress and took a bottle of wine . Unnoticed of course . Roger went to the same winepress and ordered one . The two sat at three seats apart from each other . Each oblivious to the other's presence . Roger accidentally dropped glass on the floor . It did not break . When he bend down to pick it up , Zed looked in his direction  but did not see him because he bend down . When Zed turned around , Roger got back up . Zed now exited the winepress from the back and Roger from the front . The two walked to a stable which had two horses tied to it . Both horses stood five feet away from each other . Pointing in the same direction . Zed stood to the left side of the one on the left and Roger to the right side of the one on the right . 

The two engage in a conversation . Not looking at each other or recognizing each other either 

Zed - "  Nice horses aren't they ? " 
Roger - " Yes . I'd ride one for miles  one any day "
Zed - " Well I must be going now . Got a tight schedule to keep . "
Roger - " I know . I have to find a fugitive of England . He is wanted Dead . " 
Zed - " Poor guy . I wonder what he did to deserve such  a fate ? " 
Roger - " He just broke some laws .  Repeatedly . In one day . And robbed the King and Queen . " 
Zed - " Well then . He deserves to be hanged . " 
Roger - " That is why I am here " 
Zed - " Good luck " 
Roger - " Thanks " 

The two walk off in opposite directions until ... 


Roger - " Wait. What did you say your name was ? " 
Zed - " My name is captain Zed sir " 
Roger - " Sorry to here that . Well .. not really " 





Swordfight : 



* Roger draws his sword and aims it at Zed . Zed draws his sword and aims it at Roger .  Zed - " Are you sure you want to do this  Jolly ?  "   Roger - " That's Lord Roger to you uuuuah "  Both men clash swords . Zed swings at Rogers feet but Roger Doges . Roger Swings at Zed's left arm but Zed blocks and slides his blade down to Roger's handle and Lashes at his fingers .  Roger moves his hand . Just in time . The two fight next to the horses .  The runs under at he horse on the left whilst Roger jumps over it , slamming his blade where Zed's head was supposed to be if he had moved his head out any further . Zed Barrel rolls back wards in between the two horses . Roger swings over the horse on the left trying to get Zed's head . Zed ducks and swings his blade under the horse on the left trying to cut off Roger's feet . Roger jumps over it and climbs on the horse on the left .  Zed climbs on the horse on the right and swings at Roger's chest , which Roger blocks then Swing's at Zed's Head .  Zed and Rogers swords clash again until the pause at a stalemate .  Each trying to  out strength the other . Until Zed jumps off the horse and goes behind it . Roger does the same . The two point their blades at each other , walking in a circle as if they were ready to duel to the death . Zed stops circling when he reaches the horse on the left .  Zed turns around and cuts the rope tying the horse on the left and jumps on . 


Roger - " And what do you thinkah yar doingah ? " 
Zed - " Not getting killed " 


Zed pulls out his gun and shoots into the air . The shot frightens the horse , causing it to run off . Roger does the same . 




Not finished yet . But gotta go to barber so part 2 coming out when I get back  

I hope you don't mind that I read this. 

This reads like a screenplay. I think you've got a good start here and you wasted no time getting to the action. If this style of writing is something that you're passionate about, you should seriously look into screenplay writing techniques. I think you would be good at it!

Keep on keepin' on...

Day 1 . A little after morning  




Both Zed and Roger have taken off on horses . Roger being in pursuit of Zed .  And so the Swordfight resumes .






 SWORDFIGHT : 




* Roger finally catches up to Zed riding side by side on strong , and quit swift horses . Zed is on the left and Roger is on the right. They are riding along a path out of the city they were in .  Zed swings his blade at the other captain in an attempt to get him off balance . They captain blocks and does the same to Zed . Zed blocks and stabs at Roger . Roger shifts they incoming point and slashes at Zed's right shoulder . The Captain blocks and retaliates with a stab at Rogers chest .  Roger moves to his right to dodge and slashes at Zed's chest . Zed moves backwards and dodges the slash . The two continue swordfighting until the approach a chariot led by two horses bound to each other at their bodies . So they were able to move freely but orderly . The captain's notice that they are going too fast to stop and withdraw their swords . Both men slowly await the intending collision and at just the right moment jump on top of the chariot . The horses they were riding on crashing into the back . They pull out their swords and continue fighting as they walk towards the front end of this ancient vehicle .  Both captains walk sideways like crabs swinging at each other and blocking likewise .  Then when they approach the edge  . without with drawing their blades jump onto the horses in front of them . When they land they cut the bonds that held the horses to the chariot and continued fighting . Zed stuck at Roger's left arm but Roger ducks and strikes at Zed's stomach . Zed blocks with his sword and returns the favour by swinging at rogers head . The captain ducks and counters by swinging at Zed's chest . Zed blocks 


 The two horses approach a forest with a coloumn of trees . Because the two horses were joined this meant that they would eventually get caught around a tree .  So the two captains cut the bonds that tied the horses together and of course . Continued fighting . When they approached the forest with the trees they split but not far away . They were still quit close to each other so they could continue fighting . But there were way  so each captains took a jab at the other when ever they could . First Zed stabbed at Roger's head again and Roger ducked .. again . Then Roger started to swing but Zed blocked the blade halfway . The two captains were locked in a duel until finally they approached the beach . Still fighting . 




Matthew - " Do you guys here something ? 
John - " Like what ? " 
Matthew - " Like swords clashing ? " 
Luke - "  Now that you mentioned it I do here swordfighting " 
Amy - " And I smell rum too " 
Mark - "  I wonder ..... " 



When the sound grew louder the image became clearer and the captains could be seen swordfighting  .  This time they were actually standing on the horses .  Zed swinging rights and lefts . Roger dodging and returning some himself .  When the two horses were about to touch the water they came to a halt and both captains flew into the air . Zed landed in his ship on his back . Roger landed on his ship which was ... unusually right beside Zed's ship .  Roger flipped in the air and landed on his feet . 
 





Zed - " What are you waiting for ? An invitation ? Come on before they arrest us !! " 




Roger's men had no idea that the crew of a wanted pirate was right beside of them . Before they had  a chance to arrest them , Zed's crew alll boarded The Charm . Roger's crew did the same .  Zed was in a prdecament . How was he going to outrun a ship with more weaponry than him ? Then he remembered .... 





Zed - "  The monster " 







Ok that was part 2 of chapter 2  Wadya think ?