This game looks like ocarina of time the sound drops
sometime but I think that's just me .This game is great .I am playing using a
controller so it feels like if I was playing on a console .It is very addicting
I am not done yet so I’ill try to do this quick the story is very good and it is
after ocarina of time and magoras mask and it show it many times during the
game .As I said I haven’t played  the whole
game but it shows it has a lot to offer .This game is actually difficult the enemies
are tougher

Hello sonic2boom!  although you haven't made a lot of posts.. (only two more in fact), I've noticed you around the past day or two.  Might I offer a few suggestions for writing reviews?

First, your spacing is a little awkward.  I'm not sure if you copy pasted from a notepad document or some other area, but your sentences are cut off in strange places and not at the end of the posting area.  The weird spacing in addition to missing punctuation makes it a little difficult to make sense of what you are trying to say.

Secondly, it's generally not a good idea to review a game without playing it all the way through.  To do so is kind of like reading the first chapter of a book and then telling everyone what your opinion of the book as a whole might be.  Although you might be enjoying the game right now, what if it totally changes and becomes something you hate?  As it is, you can't tell us much about WHY you like it, because you don't know much about the game play.

I DO like that you tried to tell us what makes this game unique, but it'd be nice to know more.    Good luck on any future reviews and I hope you keep this advice in mind!  God bless!

Yeah I would recommend breaking this down into categories and then go from there with organization and then talking about each part of the review. Once you break it down like that and start talking about that part of the game and explaining your reason for giving it that score, it will become much easier to get words and make your review longer and more detailed. 


Also I would recommend playing the game all the way through as Singelli suggested that way you can give an accurate judgement of each category of the game. If you don't play it through, then you can't make an accurate judgement on it, so please play the game through all the way first before writing a review on it. 

Overall, I think you can sum up the game better, get detailed and specific about it, once you really talk about the game and start going into detail with it, your word count will snowball and it will naturally get longer and making longer reviews will come easier to you. So try doing that in your next review if you can. 


I think that you have potential to write good reviews, it takes practice, just as anything else does, so don't give up or get discouraged, keep writing! So keep practicing and you will soon get better at reviewing and you will eventually master it. Keep up the hard work and keep making more reviews!