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Chapter 7 of Zed's story :D
09-14-13 03:50 PM
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Alright this is chapter 7 of Zed's pirate story. For the other chapters click this link right here : https://www.vizzed.com/boards/thread.php?id=65349 . The link should send you to chapter 6 which has other links of other chapters. Ok . Here we go Zed - " Captain's log . December 18, 1956 . Monday . On the Isle of Andros in The Bahamas . Slowly approaching Nessy's pool of sorrows ( Running out of names to call the place Where the Lockness monster lives so just level with me here ) . Ship got destroyed by a crazy island hermit . Amy - " Zed . Who are you talking to ? " Zed - " I would be writing this down in my actual captain's log but it GOT DERSTROYED ON MY SHIP ALONG WITH ALL MY OTHER POSSESSIONS !! " Amy - Geeze. You don't have to yell " . Zed - You are the one who asked " The gang ( Heheh . Scooby Do Reference ) was on the island of Andros . The island did not have much trees . Just shrubs and bushes that barely grew above the mist that covered the ground . While the island was peaceful it had a spooky theme about it . Hermit - " Stop !! " Zed - " Why are we stopping ? We have not that much time " Hermit - " There is no ground here * Points at ground * " Zed - " What are you talking about . Of course there is ground . Watch I'll show you * Picks up stone from ground behind him and tosses it at ground in front of him. To his disbelief the stone did not hit the ground but rather fell and fell and kept falling until the sound of a small stone hitting the bottom of an abyss was heard . Hermit - " See I told you . You cannot see that there is no ground there because of the mist that covers the abyss. " Zed - " And how do we pass this abyss then . There are not trees in this area of the island so we cannot swing across on vines . " Hermit - * Takes out pouch with snowflake marked on it * " With this " . The hermit poured the contents of the pouch out onto the mist and the mist started to solidify until it was now a thin icy patch of ... well ice . The crew and Zed and the hermit and Amy stepped one by one onto the ice being careful not to make any sudden moves or they would face a rather unpleasant fate . When everyone except Zed and Mark where across an eagle like creature flew overhead . Some of its feathers fell off and landed on the ice patch . The sound of ice cracking and breaking suddenly started to be heard until the ice under Zed and Mark's feet started to melt . Zed - " Bakka " The two men who were not very far from the other side of the trench hung on to a branch on the wall of the abyss. Well not exactly . Zed hung on to the vine and Mark to Zed's feet . Zed - " A little help please ? " Amy - " With what . There are no vines here on this part of the island " Zed - " Well I suggest that if you don't want me and my foot hugging friend here to die , you find some thing else . The two men were too far away from the top for someone to give them their actual hand to hold on to . Everyone scampered looking for an object that could help them in their predicament . Mark - " I've got an idea. The sails from the boat that we salvaged earlier . They have rope on them. We can use that ! " Zed - " Excellent idea Mr. Mark . " So the gang quickly took the rope from the sails and threw it down to the two men in peril . Matthew - " Wait . What are we going to tie the rope to ? There still no trees here " Zed - " Curse this island and it's lack of trees . John - " Wait . We can tied it to that * Points at unsuspecting large bear like creature that looked like it weighed in at about 900 kilos . Luke - " How long has that been there ? " Amy - " I think it is . The crew and Zed and the hermit and Amy were now at the banking of the great lake . They soon heard the sound of a sword being dragged on the ground knew that it was Captain Jolly Roger . Zed - " Good to see you made it in one piece Roger " Roger - " Spare me the lies Zed . I have your weapons . Now were is my paymentah ? " Zed - " Right here * Pulls out sack filled with gold pieces * . No ned to count it. I already did that for you . " Roger - " I'll be needing extra for the damage your little journey cost my shipah " Zed - " How much extra ? " Roger - " 100 gold pieces " Zed - " 20 " Roger - " 90 " Zed - " 21 " Roger - " 79 " Zed - " 34 " Roger - " 100 " Zed - " Wrong way mate " Roger - " 75 " Zed - " 45 " Both - " * Draw swords * 50 !!! . Zed - " Ok " Roger - " Ok " Zed hands roger gold pieces . Roger - " Wait this is only 49 ? " Zed - It is ? * Pulls out one of his gold teeth " There you go " Roger pleasure doing business with yah " Zed - " The same " Alright all I need now is me ship and its monster hunting time That was chapter 7 . I hope you enjoyed. Chapter 8 coming soon Zed - " Captain's log . December 18, 1956 . Monday . On the Isle of Andros in The Bahamas . Slowly approaching Nessy's pool of sorrows ( Running out of names to call the place Where the Lockness monster lives so just level with me here ) . Ship got destroyed by a crazy island hermit . Amy - " Zed . Who are you talking to ? " Zed - " I would be writing this down in my actual captain's log but it GOT DERSTROYED ON MY SHIP ALONG WITH ALL MY OTHER POSSESSIONS !! " Amy - Geeze. You don't have to yell " . Zed - You are the one who asked " The gang ( Heheh . Scooby Do Reference ) was on the island of Andros . The island did not have much trees . Just shrubs and bushes that barely grew above the mist that covered the ground . While the island was peaceful it had a spooky theme about it . Hermit - " Stop !! " Zed - " Why are we stopping ? We have not that much time " Hermit - " There is no ground here * Points at ground * " Zed - " What are you talking about . Of course there is ground . Watch I'll show you * Picks up stone from ground behind him and tosses it at ground in front of him. To his disbelief the stone did not hit the ground but rather fell and fell and kept falling until the sound of a small stone hitting the bottom of an abyss was heard . Hermit - " See I told you . You cannot see that there is no ground there because of the mist that covers the abyss. " Zed - " And how do we pass this abyss then . There are not trees in this area of the island so we cannot swing across on vines . " Hermit - * Takes out pouch with snowflake marked on it * " With this " . The hermit poured the contents of the pouch out onto the mist and the mist started to solidify until it was now a thin icy patch of ... well ice . The crew and Zed and the hermit and Amy stepped one by one onto the ice being careful not to make any sudden moves or they would face a rather unpleasant fate . When everyone except Zed and Mark where across an eagle like creature flew overhead . Some of its feathers fell off and landed on the ice patch . The sound of ice cracking and breaking suddenly started to be heard until the ice under Zed and Mark's feet started to melt . Zed - " Bakka " The two men who were not very far from the other side of the trench hung on to a branch on the wall of the abyss. Well not exactly . Zed hung on to the vine and Mark to Zed's feet . Zed - " A little help please ? " Amy - " With what . There are no vines here on this part of the island " Zed - " Well I suggest that if you don't want me and my foot hugging friend here to die , you find some thing else . The two men were too far away from the top for someone to give them their actual hand to hold on to . Everyone scampered looking for an object that could help them in their predicament . Mark - " I've got an idea. The sails from the boat that we salvaged earlier . They have rope on them. We can use that ! " Zed - " Excellent idea Mr. Mark . " So the gang quickly took the rope from the sails and threw it down to the two men in peril . Matthew - " Wait . What are we going to tie the rope to ? There still no trees here " Zed - " Curse this island and it's lack of trees . John - " Wait . We can tied it to that * Points at unsuspecting large bear like creature that looked like it weighed in at about 900 kilos . Luke - " How long has that been there ? " Amy - " I think it is . The crew and Zed and the hermit and Amy were now at the banking of the great lake . They soon heard the sound of a sword being dragged on the ground knew that it was Captain Jolly Roger . Zed - " Good to see you made it in one piece Roger " Roger - " Spare me the lies Zed . I have your weapons . Now were is my paymentah ? " Zed - " Right here * Pulls out sack filled with gold pieces * . No ned to count it. I already did that for you . " Roger - " I'll be needing extra for the damage your little journey cost my shipah " Zed - " How much extra ? " Roger - " 100 gold pieces " Zed - " 20 " Roger - " 90 " Zed - " 21 " Roger - " 79 " Zed - " 34 " Roger - " 100 " Zed - " Wrong way mate " Roger - " 75 " Zed - " 45 " Both - " * Draw swords * 50 !!! . Zed - " Ok " Roger - " Ok " Zed hands roger gold pieces . Roger - " Wait this is only 49 ? " Zed - It is ? * Pulls out one of his gold teeth " There you go " Roger pleasure doing business with yah " Zed - " The same " Alright all I need now is me ship and its monster hunting time That was chapter 7 . I hope you enjoyed. Chapter 8 coming soon |
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