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Is there anyways I Can Improve my reviews?

 

07-06-13 11:31 PM
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Hi I was just wondering, As a fellow reviewer as Myself, I am looking for ways to Improve on my writing, Review length, And other stuff in my reviews that can use some work.  If you can give me any tips, On what Things I can improve upon I will be very greatful if you do so.  If this is another thread that Isn't allowed, then Local Mods :  ps sorry for summoning 4 times today :X.

anyways.. For any people whom do very lengthy reviews, i am looking for help to seek what I Possibly can do to improve my reviews.

Please No mutil comments of advice.. I don't want this thread to get spammy
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Hi I was just wondering, As a fellow reviewer as Myself, I am looking for ways to Improve on my writing, Review length, And other stuff in my reviews that can use some work.  If you can give me any tips, On what Things I can improve upon I will be very greatful if you do so.  If this is another thread that Isn't allowed, then Local Mods :  ps sorry for summoning 4 times today :X.

anyways.. For any people whom do very lengthy reviews, i am looking for help to seek what I Possibly can do to improve my reviews.

Please No mutil comments of advice.. I don't want this thread to get spammy

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Well, if you are looking to get to the 1000+ word range, then I think that all you have to do is get into more detail with you reasoning by backing it up with an explanation. For example:

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I think the graphics for pokemon are clear and I like them.

How you can improve with details:
I like the sharp graphics of this game, compared to previous games that were fuzzy, this one is very clear and sharp and this is why I like them and scored them a 10...

see how a little extra detail goes a long way? If you do that for each point you try to make for graphics, sound, addictiveness, etc. then I really think you can improve your reviews greatly. A strong explanation for your liking and scoring of the game is all you need to improve your reviews and make them better. I hope this helps improve your reviews! I look forward to reading your improved ones!
Well, if you are looking to get to the 1000+ word range, then I think that all you have to do is get into more detail with you reasoning by backing it up with an explanation. For example:

original sentence:
I think the graphics for pokemon are clear and I like them.

How you can improve with details:
I like the sharp graphics of this game, compared to previous games that were fuzzy, this one is very clear and sharp and this is why I like them and scored them a 10...

see how a little extra detail goes a long way? If you do that for each point you try to make for graphics, sound, addictiveness, etc. then I really think you can improve your reviews greatly. A strong explanation for your liking and scoring of the game is all you need to improve your reviews and make them better. I hope this helps improve your reviews! I look forward to reading your improved ones!

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Razor-987 : Actually I forgot to mention I am already at the point where I can make 1000+word reviews, I'm just trying to see if I can expand them to higher links perhaps like 1500 or 2000, So that's why I made this thread, thanks for the tips anyways I appericate it
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Razor-987 : Actually I forgot to mention I am already at the point where I can make 1000+word reviews, I'm just trying to see if I can expand them to higher links perhaps like 1500 or 2000, So that's why I made this thread, thanks for the tips anyways I appericate it

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oh, well in that case, the only thing I can say is, try to expand your detail, grammar and word choice and be very descriptive with your examples in the game, back up your thoughts of the game with evidence and I think that your reviews will be much bigger, bettrr and more interesting to read. I have yet to reach a 2,000 word post, let alone review, the highest I made was 1,800 words or so.

Didn't know that your reviews exceeded that range, but I hope that this can still help you expand them to make them bigger.
oh, well in that case, the only thing I can say is, try to expand your detail, grammar and word choice and be very descriptive with your examples in the game, back up your thoughts of the game with evidence and I think that your reviews will be much bigger, bettrr and more interesting to read. I have yet to reach a 2,000 word post, let alone review, the highest I made was 1,800 words or so.

Didn't know that your reviews exceeded that range, but I hope that this can still help you expand them to make them bigger.

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SuperCrash64 :   Well, I am more in the 1,000 range, but I just made one that was 2000. To do these, I think that the best thing to do would be to add a lot of expiration why you gave it the score. You should take parts in the game that show how great these parts to the game are. If you do thing, you will most likely get a 1,750 review, you have to find a little bit more to back up what you are saying. These 2,000 word reviews are tough, but when you really think about how to structure it, they are really not that hard at all!

SuperCrash64 :   Well, I am more in the 1,000 range, but I just made one that was 2000. To do these, I think that the best thing to do would be to add a lot of expiration why you gave it the score. You should take parts in the game that show how great these parts to the game are. If you do thing, you will most likely get a 1,750 review, you have to find a little bit more to back up what you are saying. These 2,000 word reviews are tough, but when you really think about how to structure it, they are really not that hard at all!


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Eh I've read a couple of your reviews and they can't get much better, but I guess you could add a little more detail in each category. 
Eh I've read a couple of your reviews and they can't get much better, but I guess you could add a little more detail in each category. 

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Summoning people whom can possibly help with the length and what not. Eirinn  Tails the Fox linkmaster99  can any of you try and help?
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Summoning people whom can possibly help with the length and what not. Eirinn  Tails the Fox linkmaster99  can any of you try and help?

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SuperCrash64 : I think you should do what I do in my reviews. I don't just go for the 100 word limit. I try to make all my reviews at least 500+ words. I hope this was helpful
SuperCrash64 : I think you should do what I do in my reviews. I don't just go for the 100 word limit. I try to make all my reviews at least 500+ words. I hope this was helpful

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everyone I'd Like to say thanks for Helping me out with this, My review Length Has now expanded to 1700 words! sdslayer100 Divine Aurora Barathemos

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Check it..  proof of improved length! https://www.vizzed.com/boards/thread.php?id=62319, Since Everyone has helped me Out I'll leave this thread open for some more suggestions, Overall I'm hoping on the improvement train!
everyone I'd Like to say thanks for Helping me out with this, My review Length Has now expanded to 1700 words! sdslayer100 Divine Aurora Barathemos

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Check it..  proof of improved length! https://www.vizzed.com/boards/thread.php?id=62319, Since Everyone has helped me Out I'll leave this thread open for some more suggestions, Overall I'm hoping on the improvement train!


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SuperCrash64 : I haven't read anyone's reviews since I began using this website but I will give your reviews a look see. Could you provide a couple of links to them so that I can read through and give you my personal opinion?
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