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My first poetry..
This will be my 1st poetry, so Please go easy on me
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07-03-13 04:54 PM
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When users see me, They go like  who is he?
They Eventually come to this place, with a classic introduction, Perhaps saying Something Here I am, At this wonderful land.

These users, They live this great place, Some of them Are very nice, and Whenever they are spreeing, They post way more then twice.

Whenever It comes down to becoming a great member, It's like a magical spell put on you by A great Mage. ..
But then there comes jealous anger hate and Rage, All because others take you're line or you're basic Stage.

They become fustrated, They eventually let there rage take over and become trapped like a tiger in there cage, Because Anger always covers, the once good light, that shines away the fright.

Eventually When I am at this great land, I wasn't popular I wasn't very well known, Most of the times I would go into chat, And listen to a vgm through a Ring tone.

There a Bunch of friends, Whom Are great, Some of them Just make it to the top mate, as if he or she were in you're bed room, They don't cause you or anyone Doom.

To end this small poetry.. I chill and sometimes Nuke stuff with  A big boom!. 
I hope you enjoyed my small poetry,( on a side note I wasn't serious With the last part of this thing)  
When users see me, They go like  who is he?
They Eventually come to this place, with a classic introduction, Perhaps saying Something Here I am, At this wonderful land.

These users, They live this great place, Some of them Are very nice, and Whenever they are spreeing, They post way more then twice.

Whenever It comes down to becoming a great member, It's like a magical spell put on you by A great Mage. ..
But then there comes jealous anger hate and Rage, All because others take you're line or you're basic Stage.

They become fustrated, They eventually let there rage take over and become trapped like a tiger in there cage, Because Anger always covers, the once good light, that shines away the fright.

Eventually When I am at this great land, I wasn't popular I wasn't very well known, Most of the times I would go into chat, And listen to a vgm through a Ring tone.

There a Bunch of friends, Whom Are great, Some of them Just make it to the top mate, as if he or she were in you're bed room, They don't cause you or anyone Doom.

To end this small poetry.. I chill and sometimes Nuke stuff with  A big boom!. 
I hope you enjoyed my small poetry,( on a side note I wasn't serious With the last part of this thing)  
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07-03-13 04:58 PM
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wow this is great crash! Not all poems have to rhyme you have some there and its different.I really enjoyed reading this good work my friend
wow this is great crash! Not all poems have to rhyme you have some there and its different.I really enjoyed reading this good work my friend
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07-03-13 05:48 PM
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Well it is very nice to see a different side of you.  I have seen a lot of your reviews and posts and what not but its nice to see something like this from you. Keep on doing what you do Crash!
Well it is very nice to see a different side of you.  I have seen a lot of your reviews and posts and what not but its nice to see something like this from you. Keep on doing what you do Crash!
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07-03-13 07:21 PM
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It is nice to see you write something kinda like you.  It is a different piece of poetry, which makes it good.
It is nice to see you write something kinda like you.  It is a different piece of poetry, which makes it good.
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07-08-13 05:21 PM
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thanks for the postive feedback guys.. I'll probably have more, in the future, but for right now I cannot think of anything else.. reason I Can't and don't have any ideas:X



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thanks for the postive feedback guys.. I'll probably have more, in the future, but for right now I cannot think of anything else.. reason I Can't and don't have any ideas:X

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Well, this is a pretty great poem alright! It seems a little unique from others in a way. Your somehow saying your opinion about users in vizzed in a clever and indirect way. And it has good rhythm, I like it.

Keep these good poems coming man!  
Well, this is a pretty great poem alright! It seems a little unique from others in a way. Your somehow saying your opinion about users in vizzed in a clever and indirect way. And it has good rhythm, I like it.

Keep these good poems coming man!  
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It is very nice to see some well crafted poetry. I have not seen some in a while. So I hardly read poems on vizzed. But when people make some I always read them and critique them most of the time,
It is very nice to see some well crafted poetry. I have not seen some in a while. So I hardly read poems on vizzed. But when people make some I always read them and critique them most of the time,
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