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People Who Were Turned To Monsters Part 2

 

07-02-13 03:21 PM
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ok hello again since some people liked the story I made I'm going to continue telling you the story hope you enjoy the second part!


Kat : so what did mum and day say?
Wendy: they said that they are doing more shopping and they will be home in a few hours
Kat : ok James: now the episode has finished what are we going to watch next?
Wendy: lets go to Jan's house. Kat : make sure you take the house keys Wendy:ok
(they set off to Jan's house which was just round the corner) (ring ring went the bell) who is it? Jan asked
Kat : its us Wendy, James and me Jan: ok hold on. Hey guys how are you doing?
Wendy: we are fine Jan: why did you come here?
James: after we watched people who were turn into monsters we wanted to come here Jan: I watched it too. To bad it was the last episode....  Kat : the good bit is when they turn into monsters
Jan: James would you like to play the ps2? ive got smackdown vs raw
James: yes please! Kat : do you have any food?Jan: yes I do Kat : what do you have?
Jan: chocolate's, sweets crisps and drinks
Kat : I knew you had something Wendy: can I play games on the T.V.?
Jan: ok yes you can Wendy: where did your parents go? Jan: shopping as well
Kat : when will they come back? Jan: in 2 hours time
James: Jan where are you! You said you will play with me! Jan: coming! Anyway enjoy yourselves ok? Kat and Wendy: ok! (ring ring went the phone) Jan: oh! Hello Mrs lavender how are you doing?
Mrs lavender: I'm fine thank you can you tell Kat and Wendy to come home please? Jan: ok
(drops the phone) Jan: Wendy, Kat! Your mum phoned and said she you need to go home Wendy: now she said? Jan yes now!
Kat : ok lets go home Wendy, wendy: ok Jan we will come and see you soon ok? Bye
Kat : James lets go hurry up! James: do we have to go now?
Wendy: yes now (they all said goodbye and shut the door)  Wendy: mum dad we're home
mum: welcome back (she said that with a croaky voice)
Kat : mum what's the matter? (she came out)
mum: I have turned into a monster
(they all screamed) Wendy: mum what has happened to you?!
mum: don't worry it would be a matter of time that you will be like me
Wendy, James and Kat : we will never be like you!!!!!!
(They ran out of the house Wendy took the house keys)
(they all did not know what to do) Wendy: (out of breath) what did I just see! Our mum has turned into a monster!!
Kat : (even more surprised) wheat's is going to happen to us now?!


what will happen to them now?. What has become of them? Will they survive? Or  will they be turned into a monster as well? Or will they get help? WATCH OUT FOR THE NEXT PART OF THE STORY
if I spammed there sorry...
ok hello again since some people liked the story I made I'm going to continue telling you the story hope you enjoy the second part!


Kat : so what did mum and day say?
Wendy: they said that they are doing more shopping and they will be home in a few hours
Kat : ok James: now the episode has finished what are we going to watch next?
Wendy: lets go to Jan's house. Kat : make sure you take the house keys Wendy:ok
(they set off to Jan's house which was just round the corner) (ring ring went the bell) who is it? Jan asked
Kat : its us Wendy, James and me Jan: ok hold on. Hey guys how are you doing?
Wendy: we are fine Jan: why did you come here?
James: after we watched people who were turn into monsters we wanted to come here Jan: I watched it too. To bad it was the last episode....  Kat : the good bit is when they turn into monsters
Jan: James would you like to play the ps2? ive got smackdown vs raw
James: yes please! Kat : do you have any food?Jan: yes I do Kat : what do you have?
Jan: chocolate's, sweets crisps and drinks
Kat : I knew you had something Wendy: can I play games on the T.V.?
Jan: ok yes you can Wendy: where did your parents go? Jan: shopping as well
Kat : when will they come back? Jan: in 2 hours time
James: Jan where are you! You said you will play with me! Jan: coming! Anyway enjoy yourselves ok? Kat and Wendy: ok! (ring ring went the phone) Jan: oh! Hello Mrs lavender how are you doing?
Mrs lavender: I'm fine thank you can you tell Kat and Wendy to come home please? Jan: ok
(drops the phone) Jan: Wendy, Kat! Your mum phoned and said she you need to go home Wendy: now she said? Jan yes now!
Kat : ok lets go home Wendy, wendy: ok Jan we will come and see you soon ok? Bye
Kat : James lets go hurry up! James: do we have to go now?
Wendy: yes now (they all said goodbye and shut the door)  Wendy: mum dad we're home
mum: welcome back (she said that with a croaky voice)
Kat : mum what's the matter? (she came out)
mum: I have turned into a monster
(they all screamed) Wendy: mum what has happened to you?!
mum: don't worry it would be a matter of time that you will be like me
Wendy, James and Kat : we will never be like you!!!!!!
(They ran out of the house Wendy took the house keys)
(they all did not know what to do) Wendy: (out of breath) what did I just see! Our mum has turned into a monster!!
Kat : (even more surprised) wheat's is going to happen to us now?!


what will happen to them now?. What has become of them? Will they survive? Or  will they be turned into a monster as well? Or will they get help? WATCH OUT FOR THE NEXT PART OF THE STORY
if I spammed there sorry...
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(edited by Eniitan on 07-02-13 04:16 PM)    

07-02-13 03:43 PM
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I enjoyed it very much. So far that is. I loved how the show they were watching might be the cause (I am assuming of course) it is very interesting I really love this story but There Is ONLY one thing I dislike..... the suspense (come on this is agreeable right?). Please finish this story I am very impatient I can wait a few hours that is  but in all serious please hurry up. This has been a reasonable sized post by Paper Luigi. 
I enjoyed it very much. So far that is. I loved how the show they were watching might be the cause (I am assuming of course) it is very interesting I really love this story but There Is ONLY one thing I dislike..... the suspense (come on this is agreeable right?). Please finish this story I am very impatient I can wait a few hours that is  but in all serious please hurry up. This has been a reasonable sized post by Paper Luigi. 
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07-02-13 04:11 PM
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Lol I loved the way you finished ur post... It reminded me of old anime endings I used to watch. Good times!!! Anyways I'm still loving the story... Please post the rest of it. I'm enjoying it very much ^^
Thank you very much and have a blessed day
Lol I loved the way you finished ur post... It reminded me of old anime endings I used to watch. Good times!!! Anyways I'm still loving the story... Please post the rest of it. I'm enjoying it very much ^^
Thank you very much and have a blessed day
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This is really good Enittan! I am glad you could make the 2nd part so fast! Like I said, you have talent with poems. This is great work and it is a great read. Keep up the awesome work and keep writing more awesome poems! I enjoyed reading this. Nice work, well done. Keep it up and keep writing, this was awesome!
This is really good Enittan! I am glad you could make the 2nd part so fast! Like I said, you have talent with poems. This is great work and it is a great read. Keep up the awesome work and keep writing more awesome poems! I enjoyed reading this. Nice work, well done. Keep it up and keep writing, this was awesome!
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