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03-14-13 12:18 PM
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Here is yet another poem I wrote.This poem is my 4th poem I wrote if I'm not mistaken.Let me know what you guys think. Here it is. It's called savior:

Our beacon of hope has gone away.
We have lost the will to live another day.
As we watch the world start to decay;
A ray of light will show us the way.

What have we done to the world that we live in?
All the pain and suffering that the wars have given.
We stay locked away like we're trapped in prison;
As we pray for our sins to be forgiven.

We are trapped in this cycle of bloodshed and tears;
As we grad everything that we hold dear;
While we wait for a savior to take away our fears.
But little do you know that our savior is here.

He comes down from heaven in a ball of light.
To fix this world and make everything right.
By banishing evil with all his might.
So we can sleep peacefully throughout the night.

Let me know what you guys think. I have plenty more you guys can read. Just let me know that you want more and you will get more


Thank you very much and have a blessed day
Here is yet another poem I wrote.This poem is my 4th poem I wrote if I'm not mistaken.Let me know what you guys think. Here it is. It's called savior:

Our beacon of hope has gone away.
We have lost the will to live another day.
As we watch the world start to decay;
A ray of light will show us the way.

What have we done to the world that we live in?
All the pain and suffering that the wars have given.
We stay locked away like we're trapped in prison;
As we pray for our sins to be forgiven.

We are trapped in this cycle of bloodshed and tears;
As we grad everything that we hold dear;
While we wait for a savior to take away our fears.
But little do you know that our savior is here.

He comes down from heaven in a ball of light.
To fix this world and make everything right.
By banishing evil with all his might.
So we can sleep peacefully throughout the night.

Let me know what you guys think. I have plenty more you guys can read. Just let me know that you want more and you will get more


Thank you very much and have a blessed day


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03-14-13 12:23 PM
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And they keep getting better! lol I'm sorry for commenting up all of your poems like this, but this is just a great piece of work here, and I love poems. Keep it up.
And they keep getting better! lol I'm sorry for commenting up all of your poems like this, but this is just a great piece of work here, and I love poems. Keep it up.

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03-14-13 12:30 PM
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Eirinn : I don't even know what to say anymore. And that is a good thing! I have plenty more poems to post so don't worry about that And don't be sorry for commenting. I actually quite enjoy it when people comment on my stuff so please by all means keep commenting lol. I just hope I can become famous on here for my poems. Try to get as many people as you can to read them please? The more they like my work the more I will post  


Thank you very much and have a blessed day
Eirinn : I don't even know what to say anymore. And that is a good thing! I have plenty more poems to post so don't worry about that And don't be sorry for commenting. I actually quite enjoy it when people comment on my stuff so please by all means keep commenting lol. I just hope I can become famous on here for my poems. Try to get as many people as you can to read them please? The more they like my work the more I will post  


Thank you very much and have a blessed day

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wow.......that was beautiful....
wow.......that was beautiful....

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Eniitan : Your making me blush!!!! lol Thank you very much!!!! It means a lot to me


Thank you very much and have a blessed day
Eniitan : Your making me blush!!!! lol Thank you very much!!!! It means a lot to me


Thank you very much and have a blessed day

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