I love this game theirs so much to offer if you like this one go play Zelda links awakening or Zelda oracle of ages or the other one oracle of seasons but now ill go into detail the games story is okay I guess princess Zelda wasn't kidnapped in this one but she was turned to stone by vat tie the wind magi and you get your green cap witch is apparently alive and it can shrink you now ill go into what it offers Zelda the minis cap offers a money system called rupee's these rupee's are different colors and different values  ill now tell you the colors and values of rupees
green=1
blue=5
red=20
big green rupees=50
big blues rupees=100
big red rupees=200
and the game also offers a weapons and inventory system that lets you hold up a bunch of items but I cant do a full review because I'm stuck on the swamp dungeon or temple whatever you call it well that's my review once I beat the game I will give you guys a full review
bye

I don't wanna be mean, but this isn't much of a review. You even acknowledged that this isn't a full review and you intended to do one later. I think it would be smarter to hold off on posting one until you have it complete if you intend to do more later. You shouldn't post unfinished work to the Reviews section.

Also, you could benefit from some actual punctuation. There are no commas or periods in the entirety of your review. This makes it harder to read.

I would recommend looking at reviews down by professionals to get an idea of how they usually look and try to mimic that or take notes of any other review you see that you are really impressed by. It can help you improve your style to make a more quality review.

People can rate your reviews and if you make really good ones that get high marks, you can earn extra Viz from that. This could be good incentive to put more effort into your post.

That said, I do agree that this is a pretty fun game. I tend to like the handheld Zelda games better than the console ones, as unpopular of an opinion as that seems to be.

I think this is not even a kind of review , i think this should be moved to the threads section of Legend of Zelda , The Minish Cap .. But if you want this to be made as a review it's your choice but this is not a review .. 

My ideas for a review is long ( which this thread doesn't have ) , Organized , Can be understand and can be read easily .. 

I would require you to look at some other reviews so that you can make one of your own too .. Hope you learn how to make a perfect review .

Crazy Li : go away you little jerk

....Weren't you the person who was insulting everyone for saying anyone who liked Pokemon was gay and stuff?


I don't think somebody's time in this community is going to be lasting very long. You don't insult someone for giving you constructive criticism and for trying to help you.

Espy!: I disagree with your opinion, but I accept in fully.
edit- too much swearing in this post

Crazy Li : Darn it, so many people I'd love to give trust points to if I could. Anyways, good job noticing this isn't a "review." I remember getting that a lot back when I started doing reviews- say, I haven't done a review in a while....


jodogg7 : Now that language you have used will not be tolerated here on Vizzed. Now, you may apologize and we can pretend this never happened and one day you may become a staff member and so on. Or you can just leave this site and take then language elsewhere. Please don't talk that way- this is a family-friendly site where we try to be kind to everyone here, and I will accept your apology, people deserver a second chance...

BluemageKyle :


This will actually be at least his third chance.



And that's only what I know of. He may have had more.

"can pretend this never happened"
No.
Local Mods : id sugest moving this, and telling a certain individual what he did wrong in replying to criticism.

Wow... trying to curse me out when I was only trying to help? That's the kind of attitude that's going to get you into a lot of trouble in life. You don't want to attack the people who are actually being relatively friendly, or you'll find yourself unable to make any friends.

Then again, I get the feeling he probably doesn't actually care what any of us say to him. He most likely gets a kick out of tossing around profane language and the like.

This makes me wonder if the forum should perhaps have a "Report Post" feature. Then again, perhaps the mod summoning is sufficient for the task. I can't say.

Pokefreak219 : well don't you think Pokémon kind of dumb since the fact your making your pet stronger and kill other peoples pets I might just make another thread telling everyone how sorry I am for insulting them but I grew up without playing Pokémon I'm not like one of those nerds who sit down and play Pokémon yellow all day

Crazy Li :    Did you know that there is a "report abuse" button over any post?
I won't be moving this since it is technically a review, but I would suggest that you tone it down a bit in here, okay?

Crazy Li : ok mi sorry i just was in a bad mood at the time,

Yeah, I'm going to move this. Also, edited the flame post to make it more calm. Don't lash out on people like that. If you don't like criticism, then don't make a review. Just saying.

==Moved==

jodogg7 :

No, that is pretty much the reason play Pokemon in the first place...

You don't 'kill' other people's Pokemon. You simply knock them out. It's kind of like wrestling. Heck, we do it as a sport. We don't kill each other is wrestling, that would be very scary. :/

You're more than entitled to your opinion. You're more than welcome to express your opinion on here even. However, when you insult someone or a genre of people, such as 'gays', or heck, even go against any of the site's rules, for that matter, is when it becomes wrong. You never insult someone on this site. You don't even insult back; you get a moderator instead. If you have nothing positive to say, then please just don't say it. That's the general rule of thumb not just on the site, but what the entire world would expect of you.


Hope this post helps you understand a little bit better so you don't get into any more trouble.