Sounds like you're very fond of this game rating every category a 10 besides difficulty. Anyway, nice review, maybe I'll have to play this one at length sometime.

CC23 : Looks like that ban took away your spaminess.lol. Pokemon ruby is also my favourite pokemon game.It has such great pokemon in it.Great review.

I'll try the game out some time. You are doing a lot of great reviews keep up the good work, and soon you will be on the top 5 reviewers list.

thanks. your really cool =) 

If your fond of writing reviews then you should apply for the game reviewer role, if apps are still open.

I believe that if you go to general chat there should be a thread about applying for RGR and VGR. Apply there if apps r still open.

ok yeah ill try that. that would be cool to be on vizzed has a employee=)  

   I'm going to be honest and give some constructive criticism from this review. 

   First off, as I was reading, I noticed a lot of filler, and by filler I mean "Hi, this is CC23 with another game review", and stuff like that.  This makes it a little more boring to read. 

   The second thing I would like to point out is your spelling errors.  A lot of staff members will write their reviews in a Word document, spell check it there, and then paste it in to the review section because that spell check seems to be more "reliable" than the one on vizzed. 

   The third, thing I would like to highlight is your grammar.  Now, I may be 14 and you be 22, but with my recent English classes, I am able to see some things.  One of the things about the grammar is your structure of your sentences.  For example, "this game is my favorite Pokemon ever. this game is for the GBA (game boy advance)."  Trying to read something like this is really hard because it doesn't flow.  While these are complete sentences, it helps if you can sometimes use a contraction to mix those ideas or use those ideas to formulate more thought out sentences.  Also, while you have all these choppy, short, and complete sentences, you also have incomplete sentences.  For example, the sentence "had amazing water and land deatail." is incomplete, because you don't know what had amazing water and land detail.  I also noticed that you almost exclusively use periods.  While using different ending punctuation is good (. ! ?), that isn't why I am mentioning the periods.  It seems like you use periods instead of commas a lot.  These two sentences:  "this game is for the GBA (game boy advance). and this game is really good so lets get started with the review."  Could have been put in to one sentence using a comma instead of a period.  This would have made it flow more, and it also falls in to the category about choppy, short, complete sentences that do not flow.  The last thing about grammar is your capitalization, which you would have to go through your review yourself to correct, because I don't think the spellcheckers will find and fix those errors.  Just remember, after any sort of end punctuation (. ! ?), you should always capitalize the next letter because it shows that you are starting a new sentence. 

   My last thing that I would like to highlight is the general format of your review.  I noticed that you put "POKEMON GAME REVIEW (GBA)" at the top of this review.  i don't know if you are doing it just for the word count, but you will find that if you become staff, you will need to fix that.  Also, I noticed that you put "the sound", where you really could have put Sound, with the capitalized S, because it is a title of something.  Also, the little part at the end would also not be there if it were to be a staff review because that could also be used as a tactic to increase the word count of your review, which affects staff points.

   So, that's just me giving my two cents about your review.  If it comes across as something insulting, I am sorry, because it was just me expressing my opinion about the review.

   Edit:  I don't know why the font types kept switching, but I think it has something to do with using examples from your review.