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Adeiu, Billet-Doux
A hard decision isn't the most desired option in the world; nor is distance a nice obstacle.
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05-17-12 05:52 PM
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Let there be a God who knows
What these open scars show,
Let Him know that I swear on every lost soul
That there would be no other that could shawl
My withering  heart into darkness;
But let Him know that we are not sinners,
No, let Him see the tears that shimmer
Under the flickering bulb while reaching hands
Stretch towards His guiding light;
Pray, my love, may we meet in another life;
Let our souls’ hands hold and entwine
For our love will remain divine,
Live forever,
Guide and deliver:
Beau geste.

May you be a stranger and read upon this tale,
Hear a voice so bold, yet a mind so frail,
A ghost haunting among these words;
Cursed, perhaps: another learns,
Forgive us for wailing our woes,
For we, He, another, they, know
Our journey did not end
So conventionally tragic.

May you be my lover, reading upon this billet-doux;
Let my words not hurt, harm or shatter you,
See these words from your lover’s façade;
He leaves all his faith and good will in you,
He leaves all the luck you will seek for the tasks to come,
Let him never leave your side, let his spirit remain in your heart,
Let his phantom embrace and cherish you forever;

Because I swear on this tatty heart,
That even though we’re apart,
We leave brokenly into the hole;
Stammering: khinti y’ov vole.

You will remain alive in words,
You will remain in my world,
You will breathe within the paint,
You will forever be my saint.

This is our billet-doux,
My contre-coup,

Adieu, Bijou,

Love Matheiú x
Let there be a God who knows
What these open scars show,
Let Him know that I swear on every lost soul
That there would be no other that could shawl
My withering  heart into darkness;
But let Him know that we are not sinners,
No, let Him see the tears that shimmer
Under the flickering bulb while reaching hands
Stretch towards His guiding light;
Pray, my love, may we meet in another life;
Let our souls’ hands hold and entwine
For our love will remain divine,
Live forever,
Guide and deliver:
Beau geste.

May you be a stranger and read upon this tale,
Hear a voice so bold, yet a mind so frail,
A ghost haunting among these words;
Cursed, perhaps: another learns,
Forgive us for wailing our woes,
For we, He, another, they, know
Our journey did not end
So conventionally tragic.

May you be my lover, reading upon this billet-doux;
Let my words not hurt, harm or shatter you,
See these words from your lover’s façade;
He leaves all his faith and good will in you,
He leaves all the luck you will seek for the tasks to come,
Let him never leave your side, let his spirit remain in your heart,
Let his phantom embrace and cherish you forever;

Because I swear on this tatty heart,
That even though we’re apart,
We leave brokenly into the hole;
Stammering: khinti y’ov vole.

You will remain alive in words,
You will remain in my world,
You will breathe within the paint,
You will forever be my saint.

This is our billet-doux,
My contre-coup,

Adieu, Bijou,

Love Matheiú x
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05-17-12 08:10 PM
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Hi SourcedRemorses. Nice poem. Did you write that? If not I still enjoyed reading it and you done a nice job putting it in a thread, easily read. I wrote some poems or kind of like raps in this forum, I would like it if you could criticise them for me since you like poetry. I wrote all my poems without trying to copy any ones style. See ya and keep up the good work.
Hi SourcedRemorses. Nice poem. Did you write that? If not I still enjoyed reading it and you done a nice job putting it in a thread, easily read. I wrote some poems or kind of like raps in this forum, I would like it if you could criticise them for me since you like poetry. I wrote all my poems without trying to copy any ones style. See ya and keep up the good work.
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05-17-12 08:28 PM
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Just so that you know, I did have to ignore the post experience earned in your story post because it was a direct copy/paste. Only content originally made on Vizzed qualifies for post exp. You are welcome to put on stories here that are on other sites, just summon the local mods here to ignore your word count if you do.
Just so that you know, I did have to ignore the post experience earned in your story post because it was a direct copy/paste. Only content originally made on Vizzed qualifies for post exp. You are welcome to put on stories here that are on other sites, just summon the local mods here to ignore your word count if you do.
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(edited by rcarter2 on 05-17-12 08:33 PM)    

05-18-12 01:58 AM
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I apologise for this, but these comments have raised an issue on my behalf, for I have taken offence to these implications. Please identify all the lines that appear to be "copy/paste" and their origins; cited if necessary. Also, acknowledge that this poem is also found on my official blog: http://wp.me/p2cX16-5A, and I have not intended to "copy" any one's style. Please keep in mind that I am a free-writer, and write whatever falls to mind.

Again; please identify all lines in my poem and cite them. Thank you.

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I apologise for this, but these comments have raised an issue on my behalf, for I have taken offence to these implications. Please identify all the lines that appear to be "copy/paste" and their origins; cited if necessary. Also, acknowledge that this poem is also found on my official blog: http://wp.me/p2cX16-5A, and I have not intended to "copy" any one's style. Please keep in mind that I am a free-writer, and write whatever falls to mind.

Again; please identify all lines in my poem and cite them. Thank you.

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05-18-12 07:01 AM
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I was not implying that these were not your own original work. I figured the blog I found this on was indeed yours. It is just for post exp, it is supposed to be posts that are originally on Vizzed. This was brought up 6 months ago during a Tour de Vizzed with Lazlo Falconi and Argus Swift posting their original stories from the McQueary website. Again, not saying these aren't yours. But because the poem existed on your online blog before Vizzed, the post exp isn't supposed to count. 
I was not implying that these were not your own original work. I figured the blog I found this on was indeed yours. It is just for post exp, it is supposed to be posts that are originally on Vizzed. This was brought up 6 months ago during a Tour de Vizzed with Lazlo Falconi and Argus Swift posting their original stories from the McQueary website. Again, not saying these aren't yours. But because the poem existed on your online blog before Vizzed, the post exp isn't supposed to count. 
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05-21-12 10:26 AM
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I always kept watching closely your work and enjoyed it everytime. This poem, like the other, is absolutely good. My apologies if I took some time to read and tell you what I think about that, I just realized among all those threads that you published two new poems. Keep up the good work, Matt... hmm one question: may I call you Matt? If that does mind, I'll stop
I always kept watching closely your work and enjoyed it everytime. This poem, like the other, is absolutely good. My apologies if I took some time to read and tell you what I think about that, I just realized among all those threads that you published two new poems. Keep up the good work, Matt... hmm one question: may I call you Matt? If that does mind, I'll stop
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(edited by laian on 05-21-12 01:17 PM)    

05-25-12 04:36 AM
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Cheers Iaian, much appreciated :] And you may call me Matt, haha. Not a problem!
Cheers Iaian, much appreciated :] And you may call me Matt, haha. Not a problem!
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SourcedRemorses :
You're welcome, Matt. Ah by the way, it's Laian, not Iaian. I know, it's a bit confusing but oh well, it's not a big deal, just a little detail. Think about my real name mixed: ALAIN = LAIAN
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You're welcome, Matt. Ah by the way, it's Laian, not Iaian. I know, it's a bit confusing but oh well, it's not a big deal, just a little detail. Think about my real name mixed: ALAIN = LAIAN
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