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How ash found pikachu and how the pikachus formed against ash. FINAL CHAPTER! Read the final chapter

 

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Chapter 1

Pikachu was born, long ago in [Whatever year it was], he was one of electric type pokemon, his special abitlity is thunderbolt, and he is in the grass. Ash ketchum found one randomly by running in the grass, and he had a pokéball to catch it, and got it. Pikachu was Ash's main thing as a pokemon trainer, just to have it with him throughout ash's adventure. Ash ran into a robot master (from megaman) named hardman, battle sequence:

[Hard Man] "You can't come in here, try beating me in a battle, haha!"
BATTLE START
Hard Man wanted to battle!
Hard man sent out knightmanachu.
Knightmanachu! HP: 3570/3570
Go, Pikachu!
Pikachu! HP: 50/76
Hard Man used "Knuckle Fist"!
Pikschu took 848 Damage!
Pikachu got hurt and collasped.
Ash lost the battle.
Ash whited out!
[BLACK SCREEN]
Meanwhile, at the pokecenter:
[Nurse Joy] Oh, dear, this is horrible!
[Ash] Whats wrong?
[Nurse Joy] I am afraid the fist shot into pikachu and damaged his body, I'm afraid he will not make it.
[Ash] ... There is more that I can find, I hope I find a strong one.

To be continued...
Chapter 2 coming soon!
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No offense, but that is incredibly hurtful to my eyes. The bright green and white don't work together :o. Please fix that.
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So you made this story because you were mad at Pikachu for... something. And now you'll kill him off in one of the most random stories I've ever seen that hardly makes sense at all.

Okay, I'll just back away slowly and show myself out...
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Yeah, the green and white hurts my eyes. And also, I think this story is a bit to extreme 9001 to 1 HP? Really? And also, you pikachu hater. I official no longer like you. 
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Klutch : I had a layout active, sorry. I stopped using my layout and I put it as inactive, sorry if I hurt your feelings, I was mad at pikachu because of pokemon channel.

Someone70 : I hated pikachu because of how stupid pikachu is when he's mad in pokemon channel, that's all I need to say.



Chapter 2

The next day, ash felt a little better not thinking about pikachu being hurt in battle and went to find another pikachu, but unfortuantly, he couldn't find any in the grass, so he searched in the forest, there was only 4 of them there. He found them, accidently went into battle and got shocked with alot of volts of electricity, but suddently, ash passed out.
3 Hours Later...

[Nurse Joy] What happened to you?
[Ash] I got shocked with electricity while finding some pikachu and passed out for, I don't know how long.
[Nurse Joy] Hope you get some pokemon before going in the grass.
[Ash] There was no pokemon left in my party, so I need to find a simple pokemon.
[Nurse Joy] What pokemon are you going to catch?
[Ash] Probably a magikarp, use it for bait against the pika-
[Nurse Joy] WHAT!?!? THAT'S CRAZY, DON'T EVEN SAY IT!!!
[Ash] But-
[Nurse Joy] GET OUTTA HERE!
[Ash] Okay!
[Narrator] Ash pretty much had a bad day, but he might get another pikachu.
[Ash] How am I gonna get a pikachu without getting shocked? Wait a minute, I have a fishing rod, I can get a magikarp!
[Narrator] So ash cast out his fishing rod and hoped for a bite, but he felt a bite!
[Magikarp] Magikarp!
BATTLE START!
A wild Magikarp appeared!
Ash sent out a pokéball!
1...2...3... Catch!
All right! Magikarp was caught! Add it to your pokédex!
Pokédex #004
Magikarp

Magikarp is a fish pokemon that can only splash that does nothing, but what if you exp share it?

[Narrator] So ash went out in the forest again, but the pikachus smelled it and ran to it.
[The pikachu] I want some, I want some!
[Ash] Here you go!
[The pikachu] There is one thing we need.
[Ash] What is it?
[The pikachu] THUNDERBOLT!!! *Shot thunderbolt onto magikarp, magikarp became fried bait*
[Ash] Go, pokéball!
[The pikachu] RUN AWAY!
[Ash] it caught one!
1...2...3... Catch!
All right! Pikachu was caught!
[Ash] Thank goodness. Now to get revenge on hard man!
[Hard Man] I'm right behind you.
[Ash] *screams* You again!
[Hard Man] Are you gonna make a comeback? *laughs* I love to see you try!
[Ash] ENOUGH! We will settle this in a battle.

BATTLE START!

Hard Man wanted to fight!
Hard Man sent out Knightmanachu!
Knightmanachu! HP: 874/938
Go, Pikachu!
Pikachu! HP: 999/999
[Ash] There's no way you can beat me now! *laughs*
[Hard Man] Knightmanachu, use hard knuckle!
[Ash] Quick, pikachu! Dodge it and use thunderbolt!
[Pikachu] *dodges* PI KA CHUUUUUUUUU!
Knightmanachu fainted!
[Hard Man] Impossible! It can't be! NOOOOOOOOO- *EXPLODES*
[Ash] We won, pikachu! We won!
[Pikachu] Well, now I'm satisfied. We make a good team, huh Ash?
[Ash] Yes we do. Let's go eat at the pokefood resturant!
At the Pokefood resturant...
[Ash] I'm full, I can't eat another bite.
[Pikachu] Me too. We should rest.
[Ash] Let's go home. Come on, hop onto my shoulders.
So ash and pikachu had a lucky come back against hardman, and ash went to sleep for the next day.

To be continued...

Chapter 3 up next.
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I hate to say it, but that a lot better than the first one. You actually gave Pikachu some credit.
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Chapter 3

The next day, when ash woke up...
[Ash] Pikachu? Where are you?
[Pikachu] I am in the Kitchen. Just need to clean some dishes.
[Ash] Please tell me you didn't eat overnight.
[Pikachu] (muffled) I didn't eat anything.
[Ash] Aha! I knew you ate food overnight, atleast I get money from winning against trainers, so we are set, but don't overeat, or your body will give up on you.
[Pikachu] Do you mind if you go alone?
[Ash] I can't. Without you, I'm hopeless.
[Pikachu] Just let me finish my big wad of food in my mouth, *huge gulp* *chokes*
[Ash] *gasps* What do I do!? Either force it out or do CPR? *forces it out*
[Pikachu] Whew, for a second there, I thought I was gonna pass out.
[Ash] Let's continue training. Do you mind if I check your stats?
[Pikachu] No.
[Ash] Here is your stats:
173673 Exp points
7251 until level 36
Level 35.
[Pikachu] Let's EXP grind.
[Narrator] After a few minutes...
[Gary] Hey ash, long time no see.
[Ash] Hey, Gary. I was wondering... Could we do a pokemon battle?
[Gary] Sure.

BATTLE START!
Gary wanted to fight!
Gary sent out Swallow!
Swallow! Lv 25 HP: 95/95
Go, Pikachu!
Pikachu! Lv 35 HP: A025/A025 (A = 1000 hp)
[Gary] Swallow, use fly!
[Swallow] *flys up into the air*
[Ash] wait for the perfect timing...
[Gary] Now, dive down on pikachu!
[Swallow] *Zoom*
[Ash] Pikachu, now dodge it and use lightning!
[Pikachu] PI KA CHUUUUUUUUU!
Swallow fainted!
[Gary] I can't believe I lost to a super pokemon like that! Here's $153, don't tell anyone, it's a secret.
[Ash] Ok.
[Narrator] Meanwhile...
[Ash] Hang on, pikachu. The sun's setting! Wanna go see?
[Pikachu] Defenitly!
[Narrator] After the sun setted completly...
[Ash] Today was pretty much a good today, pikachu. Don't get lost in my house tomorrow.
[Pikachu] I'm tired. *yawns*
[Narrator] So they went home and slept for tomorrow.
*Pokemon sleep sound plays*

To be continued...

Chapter 4, later.
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At least Pikachu didn't die in the last 2 chapters. Oh yeah, and if you were saying Swallow as in the Pokémon, it's Swellow.
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Chapter 4:


[Narrator] After beating Gary's swellow, ash and pikachu went to watch the sun set, and they wake up for a new day.

[Ash] *yawns* Time to wake up pikachu. Pikachu, are you up?
[Pikachu] Yeah, I woke up a minute before you and looked at some TV ads.
[Ash] Is there any good ads?
[Pikachu] I remember seeing something that said that if you want to battle in the battle frontier, you would have to call 1-800-BATTLE-FRONTIER.
[Ash] That sounds great, I just have to learn you some moves and buy a stone-
[Pikachu] What stone?
[Ash] It is a surprise.
[Pikachu] Ok, continue what you were saying.
[Ash] I wanted to learn you some moves, get a stone, and challenge the frontier.
[Pikachu] Let's start EXP grinding again.

[Narrator] After a ton of hours, before bedtime...

[Ash] You just leveled up to 100!
[Pikachu] High five!
[Ash] *high fives*
[Pikachu] Now we have to rest and we can call them tommorrow.

[Narrator] The next day...

[Ash] Time for me to make that call... 1-800, BATTLE-FRONTIER. Pikachu, please be quiet while I answer.
[Caller] Hello, who is this?
[Ash] It is me, Ash Ketchum.
[Caller] Hey, I remember you, training your pikachu I see?
[Ash] We challenge the battle frontier, and nothing shall stop us!
[Caller] I will sign you up, take care.
[Ash] *hangs up*
[Pikachu] Did we get accepted?
[Ash] We did.
[Pikachu] Yay! When will we go?
[Ash] When he calls back, I have to check the caller id on my TV.

[Narrator] After the call back...

[Ash] Let's go, pikachu! We are going to the frontier!
[Pikachu] Awesome! *hops on shoulder*

[Narrator] After they arrive...

[Ash] Hi, my name is Ash Ketchum, I am here with my pikachu. He will enter the contest.
[Manager] What level is he?
[Ash] Level 100.
[Manager] And you never evolved him?
[Ash] Eventuantly, I will.
[Manager] We have a level cap for pokemon above level 75, the cap is Level 75, any pokemon higher than that will get forced down to 75.
[Ash] Ok.
[Manager] Here is your pass, enter the gate, and good luck.
[Ash] Lets go, pikachu, we will become a champion!
[Pikachu] Pika pika! (Yes we will!)


Chapter 5, the big finale coming soon...
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retrokid12 : Here it is, the long awaited finale!!! I can't wait to finish this!


Here it is, the finale of the story, chapter 5!

Chapter 5 (final chapter)

[Narrator] After about 25 battles...

[Manager] Wow, you beat all 25 trainers!? You deserve the platinum medal!
[Ash] Awesome! (To pikachu) hey, we won a medal!
[Pikachu] That was so awesome! I nearly fainted after all of that, thanks for finding all those potions, I couldn't have done it without them.
[Ash] Lets go home.

[Narrator] In the viradian forest...

[Pikachu] This isn't our house, where are we?
[Ash] Do you remember your brothers?You can play with them.
[Pikachu] Hey, pikachus! I am back!
[The pikachus] Where have you been after so long?
[Pikachu] Oh, it is a long story. You wouldn't want to hear it.
[The pikachus] What? Tell me!
[Pikachu] Ok.

[Narrator] After pikachu was forced to tell the story...

[The pikachus] Oh, I see. (To ash) Hey, Ash. Come here!
[Ash] What is it?
[The pikachus] Close your eyes.
[Ash] Ok. *closes eyes*
[The pikachus] THUNDERBOLT!!! *thunderbolt strikes Ash*
[Ash] *screams, then passes out*

[Narrator] At the pokemon hospital...

[Nurse Joy] What happened?
[Ash] The pikachus in the viradian forest said for me to close my eyes, then I hear thunderbolt, then I suddenly pass out.
[Nurse Joy] What also happened to pikachu?
[Ash] Pikachu didn't want to be with me anymore. He wants to be in the viradian forest with the pikachus until the end of time.
[Nurse Joy] *sighs* This has never happened before..
[Ash] Which irritated me!
[Nurse Joy] Just clam down and I will find a solution.
[Ash] Okay.
[Nurse Joy] Do you have a pokéball with you?
[Ash] Luckily, yes.
[Nurse Joy] How much money do you have?
[Ash] $3000.
[Nurse Joy] You can find a different pikachu in a different place, how about that?
[Ash] I guess that could work.

[Narrator] So Ash went to find another pikachu, caught it, and trained it back to the old one's stats.

The End. *cues New Super Mario Bros Wii ending credits music*

Credits:

Cast:

Ash
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Gary
Manager

People who were these characters:

Ash - Stevie 764
Pikachu - Stevie 764
Gary - Stevie 764
Manager - Stevie 764


Produced by Stevie 764

Copyright: Stevie 764, 2012.

*cues to the end of the ending music*


Thanks for reading the awesome sauce story. Check out my newest stories in my thread history.

Now, this is the time to ask questions, make feedbacks, or comment. Comment now!
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Well, Pikachu didn't die, but that was a little mean.
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retrokid12 : There was a very big twist at the end which wasn't shown. The twist was that while Ash was unconsious, the pikachus ran away as far as possible, and while Ash was in the hospital, Ash thought that pikachu didn't want to be with him anymore, pikachu was actually commanded by the pikachus to stay away from Ash because (not shown in story) Ash was 10 and the pikachus fun time was ruined by Ash.
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Could you make a sequel to it? I really want some more of this awesome sauce chapters
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starwars293 : I can't wait to make the sequel! It will come tommorrow. I will summon you to it when I create it since I want "You" to see the sequel.


Does anyone want to see some deleted scenes from my story? I will post them tommorrow if somebody replies.
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Yes, I do want to see the sequel. What will it be all about in the sequel? Could you give us a preview of chapter 1?
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starwars293 : The sequel will about Ash battling different trainers that all have one pokemon.

Preview of Chapter 1:

[Ash] I wonder what my past was like? *thinks*

[Narrator] Inside the past...

[Ash] I want to have a pokemon, please!
[Mom] Ok, here is a pikachu. Have fun training it.


Edit: I just posted my sequel story, read it here:

Ash's past and fighting trainers:
https://www.vizzed.com/boards/thread.php?id=40955&ref=51265
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